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Daily, together and apart # 8
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The question is wrong. Tina thought. The right question is, Tina, when you stopped thinking about it? About secrets, stories, smiles, sex, sounds and sweet surrenders. About catch up in bed, resting in her arms, about talking throughout the night? When you stopped to care for such incredible fact, being aware of somebody’s life, of her miseries and wonders?
This feeling was lost. The feeling of being close to someone, to be a part of someone. This connection that fills you and makes you know what it means… a pause, a word, a move, a thought, an act, …But also and still, the joy of enjoying the shiver and surprise of an adorable and unexpected pause, word, move, thought, act… When you lost her, Tina? When you lost yourself? Her thoughts were interrupted by the sound of Bette begging.
“Please, Alice…Don’t you start,” Bette cried.
“C´mon, Porter, I’m soooo proud of you” Alice hugged Bette with an arm, hooking her neck. “Yeap…Sure! You took classes for a week about Italian food, soups from the world”
Bette started to interrupt each sentence. “Two days, Al” that’s all she could say before Alice continued.
“How to improve your salad”
“One night!” Bette was flushing. “Not a week, Al, it was one night only!”
Tina couldn’t believe her ears and take the smile from her face.
Alice kept the torture. “You should come here more often, Tina…” Alice greened. “And I even began to talk…”
“Oh, fuck…” Bette sounded coyly.
“Stress problems, baby? “Alice intoned with a radio publicity voice. “Thailand massage with Bette Porter…”
“Al…” Bette rolled her eyes and turned to the stove pretending to mix the sauce to hide her discomfort and shyness.
Tina crossed her arms to her chest expecting more, but the truth is she had to cross them. Her desire to hold Bette’s waist, hold her close and rest her head at her shoulder was driving her crazy.
Alice picked a big bamboo spoon. “She can also make her own instruments to cook”
“Alice…please…pretty please!” begged Bette, turning again.
“Ok..Ok…Bette, I wont tell her about the motorcycle lessons, or the video editing program lessons, ok?”
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UGH WOMEN…WHY????lol couldnt jodie gotten lost for this one that was soo wrong women.*wink*okay im ready for the cat fight now.wow bette can cook now and many other things very good and she impressed tina even better.we all knew bette was all aplha women it was in her soul hidding wanting to come out.please post soon. Tease!!!
I knew it, too good to be true, and the evil withc shows up. God….get rid of that thing already…am i right ladies!???
Bummer, what a way to suck out all the fun. Ok, at least Tina can see what she’s up against. A Jodi can see she doesn’t belong.
I really enjoyed this post. The flow of the story was excellent, beginning with the definitions which set the stage and family night…wow. I felt like I was there. Love the way the gang responded to seeing B&T together. Love the interaction between the two of them. I also love the way Bette has grown. Excellent job. PPS.
That was just mean to have Jodi show up the first time Tina comes for family night. She just needs to go bye bye.
Ok, you sooooo know how I feel about this don’t you??? I know you do. Hee Hee. Darling, this was so very creative. No blocks ahead for you right? OooOOO well Tina, I don’t know quite what to say except you didn’t fight to get your woman back before, you got all pissy and chose not to try to regain a trust over the affair, and now that Bette has moved on, wellllll….guess you just have to accept it OR…plant those heels in the ground and begin to win that woman back. You let her walk before, don’t stand by and let her continue down a road you think won’t complete her. OMG…now I am talking to the characters like my friend Tylo. Honey…BRING ON THE DRAMA!!!!!!! Hugs and Kisses.
and the biatch walks in the door……jezus……lol…….kill her, kill her, kill her……
Bratz, darling outstanding chapter again… you know what i want now…. another posting post haste…No serioulsy lovely, delightful and btw its now time to dump Jodie , pretty please. Its bad enough she is going to be back in S5 and there being a high probability that show time wont do a Bette annd Tina reunion… So I will have to count on you to to keep me happy by giving us all a Tibette reunion… pretty pleeeezeNo seriously great post Bratz looking forward to your next post. Your ever adoring fan of your creative writing.
Why does Jodie have to come in at the wrong time, please have Bette dump her soon! In fact, now! But at the same time I sense a tibette reunion soon enough. PPS
DRAMA!!!!!DRAMA!!!!!!!!!! DRAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Chapter!!! Please have Jodi go and soon. Thanks PPS
I knew that it was Jodi. I am hoping that she feels left out and decides that she needs to leave before Tina walks out with Boo. Once she sees Tina she will not leave because I am sure that she can feel that she does not have all of Bette. She has to know that Tina is still imbedded in Bette’s heart and that any type of shove will send Bette running back into Tina’s arms or vise versa.
oh fuck!!! y did Jodi have to gatecrash…i was so enjoying this until then…pps
Well let the games begin! this is going to get interesting, wonder who’s side the girls will take?
Damn you jodi, ruin the family and B&T night!