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All you need is love chp 13
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“That I can understand – when did you realise what a good writer you are. I read your first book last week – very impressive – especially for a debut novel “
Tina blushed at the flattery – especially given that she had secretly been reading Bette’s work and been in awe of her skill with words and settings and characterisation.
“I have always just loved words – it was just natural that I start writing as a hobby “
“I had to make a choice – writing or music “
“You play something? “
“Used to play the piano and the sax- and I sing a bit “
“Bette – being modest doesn’t suit you “
“That has been said about me previously “
“So – how good were you?”
“I was accepted into a prestigious music academy in Philadelphia when I was 14 “
“And you didn’t take it up?”
“My father didn’t want me to do it – he said that I needed a proper education. He was a businessman – he didn’t see the point in fancy things like the performing arts. He acted like I was going to the same place as the kids from Fame – dancing on tables and stuff “
“Do you dance Bette Porter?”
“I do – do you Tina? “
Tina nodded “Maybe if we aren’t too tired we could go to a lesbian club?”
“I would like that “
“Do you know any? “
“No – I could ring Helena “
“I could text Shane “
Tina laughed
“God we are so out of date Bette “
“I know – it would just be our luck to pick the night when there wasn’t a single woman there under 30 “
“And they would all be wearing those very skimpy tops and have pierced belly buttons “
“I thought that the thought of skimpy tops would appeal to you ? “
“”It does – but it also feels slightly wrong “
“The rare times that Shane’s dates last longer than two days I met them now and again and what scares me is how young they are. “
“How did you meet Yodah ?”
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I guess i just proved that a human being can die of too much pleasure… **from my grave** Aaally please make them happy ever after…
Ally… i love this… bring it on babe…
repost… Sorry about your sore back, ally. Find a local outlet of this: _ www(dot)aquamassage.co.uk/PR_spa.htm _ Warm, -dry- back massage, w/clothes on. (We love our local place and its way cheaper/quicker than hands-on too.) Hope you feel better!
Love the flirting between them! God what a great chapter, again!!
what a fun date. i love going on dates. mind you its always with the same person and others come with us, but fun none the less. thanks.
Nooo you are evil, evil I say. No kissing you are teasing us badly shame on you. PPS tease
I like the way it’s hotting up. PPS.
yup Bette show T your move!!!! soon…
many more dates to come right.let tibette show us some moves.p.p.s. love this ally..
Awesome and they are so cute and sweet and getting hot in here. Ok let see more please, thanks!
Ally, This was perfection sweet, hot and tender – how do manage it all. I hope someone on your side of the atlantic comes through with a wonderful massage – you deserve it!!!
Well, as long as they got a secluded table. They can still go to a French restaurant eventually. And I think Bette & Tina ought to go camping alone a time or two before taking the kids along. Not much privacy in a Winnebago. Even less in a tent-reminds me of the time I was a kid camping with my parents and the young couple retired to their tent for the night bringing their lantern with them. The eventually realized that they were putting on a silhouette striptease for the campground before they doused the light.
i wish my first dates were like this…just them talking makes it hot, imagine when they will get together for NC-17 version
This story is so much fun. Hope they get their groove very soon. PPS.
What a first date! Awesome chapter Ally!
GOD, Ally! You should’ve rated that as a mental R or NC-17. That has to be one of the hottest first dates I’ve ever read. Oh and I noticed this: “Lets see what we can manage eh – we are two college educated writers – how hard can it be not to talk about our six kids?” OUR six kids hmmmmmmm??? ;) Maybe I just took it the wrong way but it sounded sweet. =) LOL@Josh calling Bette a wuss!
Ohh, the night IS young. I can’t wait to read about them at a club. Whatever reservations Bette felt about dating seem to be melting when she is alone with Tina. I dig it. PPS.
WoW!!!! I wish my dates went like that! talk about building up the tension between them….love it! Please post soon
Hi Ally, More wonderful writing as Bette and Tina embark on relationship together. There was gentle teasing, lustful looks, genuine connection and the beginnings of love. I adored the sharing of their dessert. This was such an intimate act and demonstrated the potential of there is to come. Ruling out past partnerships and kids was a smart move as it let them get to know one another without the shackles of the past. Please continue with the rest of this amazing night soon. It is a real pleasure to read and be entertained by. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
I agree with Lamentamini! Definately a mental R or NC17. The shameless flirting was sexy as hell ! Hope your back feels better soon! Ciao.