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All you need is love chp 13
Bette raised her eyebrows
“Really? “
“Yes “
Bette lent forward
“There is only one woman I fancy “
Tina swallowed
“God Bette “
“I know “
They looked at each other for a few more minutes until Tina broke the moment and returned to her meal.
“Do you have any plans for tomorrow? “ Bette asked
“Writing – go for a run – what about you?”
“Would you like to come for dinner with us – when the monsters have gone to sleep we can watch a movie and sink some wine?”
Tina smiled “Its going to be hard at times for us to be alone isn’t it?”
“Yes – but I do want to try to date you as normally as possible “
“Does that equal a date?”
Bette shrugged “Maybe – the being alone with you afterwards is a date “
“What movie shall we watch – how about that one with the welder who wants to be a dancer?”
She had been told by Helena that the quickest way to make Bette blush was to make reference to her break through script. She had told Tina about two other scripts that Bette had written that she was even more embarrassed by – Tina was saving that snippet of information.
True to Helena’s prediction Bette blushed
“How about not “she said
Tina chuckled and Bette smiled “ You are bad Tina – very “
“I’m lovely – my daughters tell me that – in fact I think Josh is in love with me “
“I know he is “Bette sipped at her wine
“Madison thinks you are much nicer looking than I am “
“I would have to disagree with her there “Bette replied “I think you are beautiful “
Tina looked at Bette who was smiling at her. The flirting was hotting up and Tina could feel herself getting more of a desire for it to get even hotter.
“I think that about you – and to think we started so badly with Mo terrorising you “
“Biting me I think you will find “
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(6 votes, average: 4.67 out of 5)
I guess i just proved that a human being can die of too much pleasure… **from my grave** Aaally please make them happy ever after…
Ally… i love this… bring it on babe…
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Love the flirting between them! God what a great chapter, again!!
what a fun date. i love going on dates. mind you its always with the same person and others come with us, but fun none the less. thanks.
Nooo you are evil, evil I say. No kissing you are teasing us badly shame on you. PPS tease
I like the way it’s hotting up. PPS.
yup Bette show T your move!!!! soon…
many more dates to come right.let tibette show us some moves.p.p.s. love this ally..
Awesome and they are so cute and sweet and getting hot in here. Ok let see more please, thanks!
Ally, This was perfection sweet, hot and tender – how do manage it all. I hope someone on your side of the atlantic comes through with a wonderful massage – you deserve it!!!
Well, as long as they got a secluded table. They can still go to a French restaurant eventually. And I think Bette & Tina ought to go camping alone a time or two before taking the kids along. Not much privacy in a Winnebago. Even less in a tent-reminds me of the time I was a kid camping with my parents and the young couple retired to their tent for the night bringing their lantern with them. The eventually realized that they were putting on a silhouette striptease for the campground before they doused the light.
i wish my first dates were like this…just them talking makes it hot, imagine when they will get together for NC-17 version
This story is so much fun. Hope they get their groove very soon. PPS.
What a first date! Awesome chapter Ally!
GOD, Ally! You should’ve rated that as a mental R or NC-17. That has to be one of the hottest first dates I’ve ever read. Oh and I noticed this: “Lets see what we can manage eh – we are two college educated writers – how hard can it be not to talk about our six kids?” OUR six kids hmmmmmmm??? ;) Maybe I just took it the wrong way but it sounded sweet. =) LOL@Josh calling Bette a wuss!
Ohh, the night IS young. I can’t wait to read about them at a club. Whatever reservations Bette felt about dating seem to be melting when she is alone with Tina. I dig it. PPS.
WoW!!!! I wish my dates went like that! talk about building up the tension between them….love it! Please post soon
Hi Ally, More wonderful writing as Bette and Tina embark on relationship together. There was gentle teasing, lustful looks, genuine connection and the beginnings of love. I adored the sharing of their dessert. This was such an intimate act and demonstrated the potential of there is to come. Ruling out past partnerships and kids was a smart move as it let them get to know one another without the shackles of the past. Please continue with the rest of this amazing night soon. It is a real pleasure to read and be entertained by. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
I agree with Lamentamini! Definately a mental R or NC17. The shameless flirting was sexy as hell ! Hope your back feels better soon! Ciao.