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TMP Syndrome – (Chapter: Welcome to the party!)
As they pulled up the driveway, and into a parking space ‘reserved for Ashley Davies’, Spencer got warned about the alcohol. “Babe, I don’t know what you’re used to at parties, but here, we drink. A lot. And we think you should too!”
Spencer rolled her eyes. “I can have a good time without drinking Ash!”
“Well…”
Ashley leant across to Spencer and started kissing her softly, waiting for Spencer to allow her tongue entry. As soon as she did, Spencer could taste the vodka. Ashley planted one last, hard kiss on Spencer’s lips and finished her sentence,
“…I can’t.”
Ashley practically ran into the house, leaving her girlfriend trailing behind. Spencer was in awe at how big the house was. ‘Kerchiiiiiing…’
She walked into the main lobby area where people were saying hello. She got her first taste of jealousy…. and it tasted bitter. Ashley was going from guy to girl to guy, kissing and hugging them with this huge grin on her face.
‘Don’t get jealous, she just hasn’t seen these people in ages and she’s just excited. She’ll remember I’m standing here in a minute…any minute now…’
Spencer decided to look around more on her own. From the lobby, two giant staircases, one on the left and one on the right, spiralled around and met on the 1st floor. There were ropes at the bottom of each with signs ‘bedrooms off limits!’. Ahead of her she could see an open door to the kitchen and to the right another open door to a really fancy looking lounge area with very few people in it. ‘I can see why, you break it, you pay for it….there isn’t enough money in this world!’ To her left there was a closed door where the thumping music was coming from and flashing lights could be seen seeping through the sides of it. ‘Party time!’
Speaking of, where is the party maker herself? Spencer just caught a glimpse of her disappearing into the kitchen. As she walked towards it she could see what Aiden was talking about regarding the outfits. ‘And I thought I felt naked!’ Like something out of a hip hop video the whole house was filled with extremely good looking girls and guys. Wearing very little clothing, all tanned, all toned.
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amazing.Absolutley amazing.Post some more soon.
so if i post multiple times…does it come back faster. But honestly, on something this great you would think some other people would comment.
I thought that was amazing!!! It kept me entertained and I cant wait for another post!! Soo POST MORE SOON!!! please of course!
oh my gah i effin loved it!! def. hott!!! and it was entirely ashley and spencer behavior…for real. PMES!!!
Hehe…ah this will definately be an entertaining story. Great details, as well as development of the characters…i guess that’s what i’m trying to say. I really love the interaction between everyone and can’t wait to read more. So…you must post more soon….please?!?!
very hott please write more soon
Wow. Very exciting. I very interested. Post more soon.
pms
wow that was good. please post more please please please
dude…u should totally continue this…pms plz =)
To all of you who commented, thank you so much. I’m sorry to say there will be no further installments of TMP Syndrome. This is the best I can do and it only got four stars. I don’t know about you but I mostly only read 5 star stories so I feel that this story is worthless. I guess I could say the way some people rated this story has crushed my confidence. It’s not their fault, I just have very little confidence to begin with! I think I know why it got 4 stars; because most authors/readers are adults and if you write a story based on the characters ACTUAL age group (i.e. teenagers having fun, not so serious stuff) people don’t want to hear about it. I just cannot, myself, write 16/17 year olds swearing their undying love for one another, it just doesnt happen! I could be wrong but thats what I put the rating down to. Thanks again to all of you who commented.
amazing.Absolutley amazing.Post some more soon.
so if i post multiple times…does it come back faster. But honestly, on something this great you would think some other people would comment.
I thought that was amazing!!! It kept me entertained and I cant wait for another post!! Soo POST MORE SOON!!! please of course!
oh my gah i effin loved it!! def. hott!!! and it was entirely ashley and spencer behavior…for real. PMES!!!
Hehe…ah this will definately be an entertaining story. Great details, as well as development of the characters…i guess that’s what i’m trying to say. I really love the interaction between everyone and can’t wait to read more. So…you must post more soon….please?!?!
very hott please write more soon
Wow. Very exciting. I very interested. Post more soon.
pms
wow that was good. please post more please please please
dude…u should totally continue this…pms plz =)
To all of you who commented, thank you so much. I’m sorry to say there will be no further installments of TMP Syndrome. This is the best I can do and it only got four stars. I don’t know about you but I mostly only read 5 star stories so I feel that this story is worthless. I guess I could say the way some people rated this story has crushed my confidence. It’s not their fault, I just have very little confidence to begin with! I think I know why it got 4 stars; because most authors/readers are adults and if you write a story based on the characters ACTUAL age group (i.e. teenagers having fun, not so serious stuff) people don’t want to hear about it. I just cannot, myself, write 16/17 year olds swearing their undying love for one another, it just doesnt happen! I could be wrong but thats what I put the rating down to. Thanks again to all of you who commented.
Ashley pointed to her lips, “…kiss these…”I hope they use that line on the show -HOT!!
Ashley pointed to her lips, “…kiss these…”I hope they use that line on the show -HOT!!
I want some more. LOL PMS
I want some more. LOL PMS