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TMP Syndrome – (Chapter: Welcome to the party!)
‘I’m gonna back her up against the wall when the room is really packed. Fuck me, that skirt is an open invitation! No one will know….they’ll think we’re dancing. They won’t be able to hear her screams over the music…’
As Ashley worked her way up to her top, she started breathing more heavily and got a tingling sensation in her stomach. She had never seen Spencer wear a push up bra before, never felt that she needed to. But boy, was she going to make it a requirement from now on! Her extremely low cut strappy top exposed the straps and sides of her hot pink lacy bra. Her pert breasts threatened to spill out over the top and Ashley loved the way they moved up and down even when she was just breathing.
‘Imagine what they’ll look like bouncing around later…’
And of course, the cherry on top, Spencer’s shimmery golden hair in loose waves framed her perfect face. Her bright blue eyes shone against the black smoky eye make up and her full, luscious lips shone as the light hit the lip gloss.
Ashley could just eat her up, literally.
After about 2 minutes of staring, Ashley turned the engine on. “Sorry babe, but if I kiss you, we won’t make it to the party.”
Spencer squealed excitedly as the car sped from the curb, partly because of Ashley’s wreckless driving and partly because her outfit achieved its desired goal. It only took about 20 minutes, at the speed they were going, to get to Aaron’s house. Ashley briefed Spencer on the way about what to expect at the party, her old friends and what she was going to do to her later. It sounded to Spencer like Ashley was the ringleader of a ‘clique’ at her old school. Her and three other rebellious girls ruled the school and everybody else looked up to them. “We threw all the best parties. We were….I mean are….the party.” Every sentence ended with a wink from Ashley, but Spencer knew it was true from what Aiden had told her. He told her they weren’t your usual bitchy, snobby princesses you deal with usually in junior high. They just had no cares or worries and did what they wanted, when they wanted. People respected them for it. Plus…”We were hot, rich…and up for anything.”
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amazing.Absolutley amazing.Post some more soon.
so if i post multiple times…does it come back faster. But honestly, on something this great you would think some other people would comment.
I thought that was amazing!!! It kept me entertained and I cant wait for another post!! Soo POST MORE SOON!!! please of course!
oh my gah i effin loved it!! def. hott!!! and it was entirely ashley and spencer behavior…for real. PMES!!!
Hehe…ah this will definately be an entertaining story. Great details, as well as development of the characters…i guess that’s what i’m trying to say. I really love the interaction between everyone and can’t wait to read more. So…you must post more soon….please?!?!
very hott please write more soon
Wow. Very exciting. I very interested. Post more soon.
pms
wow that was good. please post more please please please
dude…u should totally continue this…pms plz =)
To all of you who commented, thank you so much. I’m sorry to say there will be no further installments of TMP Syndrome. This is the best I can do and it only got four stars. I don’t know about you but I mostly only read 5 star stories so I feel that this story is worthless. I guess I could say the way some people rated this story has crushed my confidence. It’s not their fault, I just have very little confidence to begin with! I think I know why it got 4 stars; because most authors/readers are adults and if you write a story based on the characters ACTUAL age group (i.e. teenagers having fun, not so serious stuff) people don’t want to hear about it. I just cannot, myself, write 16/17 year olds swearing their undying love for one another, it just doesnt happen! I could be wrong but thats what I put the rating down to. Thanks again to all of you who commented.
amazing.Absolutley amazing.Post some more soon.
so if i post multiple times…does it come back faster. But honestly, on something this great you would think some other people would comment.
I thought that was amazing!!! It kept me entertained and I cant wait for another post!! Soo POST MORE SOON!!! please of course!
oh my gah i effin loved it!! def. hott!!! and it was entirely ashley and spencer behavior…for real. PMES!!!
Hehe…ah this will definately be an entertaining story. Great details, as well as development of the characters…i guess that’s what i’m trying to say. I really love the interaction between everyone and can’t wait to read more. So…you must post more soon….please?!?!
very hott please write more soon
Wow. Very exciting. I very interested. Post more soon.
pms
wow that was good. please post more please please please
dude…u should totally continue this…pms plz =)
To all of you who commented, thank you so much. I’m sorry to say there will be no further installments of TMP Syndrome. This is the best I can do and it only got four stars. I don’t know about you but I mostly only read 5 star stories so I feel that this story is worthless. I guess I could say the way some people rated this story has crushed my confidence. It’s not their fault, I just have very little confidence to begin with! I think I know why it got 4 stars; because most authors/readers are adults and if you write a story based on the characters ACTUAL age group (i.e. teenagers having fun, not so serious stuff) people don’t want to hear about it. I just cannot, myself, write 16/17 year olds swearing their undying love for one another, it just doesnt happen! I could be wrong but thats what I put the rating down to. Thanks again to all of you who commented.
Ashley pointed to her lips, “…kiss these…”I hope they use that line on the show -HOT!!
Ashley pointed to her lips, “…kiss these…”I hope they use that line on the show -HOT!!
I want some more. LOL PMS
I want some more. LOL PMS