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    The line begins to blur PT 10

    Story written on July 4, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=61569
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    The Truth the whole truth and nothing but the truth.

     

     

     

     

     

    The line begins to blur

     

    CH 21

     

    I wish this could have been any other way

    but I just don’t know what else I could do……

     

     

     

    Carmen is telling me no more like ordering me to sit up on my knees. I do it, and she pushes me till my back is almost touching their head board. The one she claims her head has never bumped in the throws with him, Havoc that is. I do it, my toes now touching the board more than my back. She is kissing my neck, my ear; she puts one knee between my legs, her kneecap brushing up again me. It’s hard and I want more but I don’t know how to ask or what to ask her to keep doing it. She drags her nail across my nipple and it burns really hot “That’s gonna draw blood you know.” I tell her. “Good”, she replies. “I want you to think about the feel of that (she digs a little harder) cause I can’t see you for a while.” I can’t think about that too long because she pushed her fingers inside of me and now I really can’t think. She is driving really hard and my head is banging on the board. She’s telling my ear how much she loves to watch me come. She’s pushing me to the edge and she knows it. My hands are grabbing the edge for leverage but I can’t find any. And I have had enough tired of her little game. I Grab her hand and push her away. I get on top of her and hold both of her ankles in my hands and ever so slightly grind my clit on her clit. Didn’t take us long we knew this game by heart……………………

     

    Remember that? That’s where I started.

     

     I look over at her in their bed. She is sleeping on her stomach. And I know why we can’t see each other, everything is up on the air, we don’t know where we stand in this mess we are in. The work Havoc was doing on my crew while I’m here in their bed. And the sneaking we did all in the beginning before I knew about their stupid plan. And the scars on her back….who knows? For all I know she could have done them to herself or had someone do it for her……….. Just look at her. All soft and silky could you blame me for falling for all her crap? I wouldn’t, it could have happened to anyone. And my heart tortures me just the fun when I look at her. She makes me all poetic and shit. I love to watch her sleep. She looks like all her cares don’t exist.

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    1. This is by far the best story I’ve ever read about this two characters. And believe, I’ve read lots of them.Congratulations to the author. I really loved how you fit the lyrics into the storyline. How everything was raw and real. Just like life is.Looking forward to read more of your work.

    4. Shit!!! You wanna join me and make a movie out of this??? Hoho, it’s so much better than the fast and the furious…. God i really loved this story :D Write an other one please!

    5. I’m with Shane,I was just thinking LAPD, surprised me with her being a FED. Carmen did say they could talk when this is all over (epilogue/sequal)… Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed reading this!

    6. ^^yeah, I know, I just thought that since her mom lived in LA and she was out for revenge she was doing her own off duty thing… Reread the story, and I loved it more the second time!!

    7. Been busy & had to catch up on the last few updates tonight. Damn! Your story rocked. It was like a damn t.v. mini – series. I’d like to think that they’ll meet up in the future after the dusts clears. Dana really came through for Shane. Glad neither Shane nor Carmen ended up dead. Incredible story, very cool how you placed these two characters in an alternate universe & they remained true to their characters. Excellent job. Thanx for the story. Think up some more plz. lol

    13. Absolutely amazing work. This was a great story that I am really sad to see end, I hope you will be back soon with some more wonderful writing. I like the real ending, even if it wasn’t the happiest, you wrote the story to be real, and you kept it that way. Excellent, excellent job.

    14. Up until the last paragraph I thought it would end well. I thought they would let the dust settle then try it all over again–a new life without the burn of the hell that had once surrounded them. But then, that last line. God! Why? I guess it could have been worse; at least you decided to spare both of their lives. Either way, I loved this story; it WAS quite gritty. There was intrigue and realism in every word. You did an impeccable job at conveying Shane’s thoughts, fears, and feelings. Great job.

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