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    The line begins to blur PT 10

    Story written on July 4, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=61569
    Author Notes:

    The Truth the whole truth and nothing but the truth.

     

    She takes my hand and pulls me over to her. She looks me in the eye. And she says… “But I do love you.’ And we kiss. I could feel her need to get me to understand her vague attempt to tell me a truth I already knew. But I let it go. Her lies meant nothing to me if I couldn’t be around her.

     

      So we rode around and found someplace to eat, this little Greek diner.

     

    We talked about everything but the truth.

     

      Her favorite movie believe it or night was Fight Club. Which was weird. But she said the movie set her free. She went on and on about the message of the movie was to find yourself and not to let your possessions define you. She smirked a little and said Helena Bonham Carter was sexy. I laughed. She wasn’t really my type. I told her my favorite  movie was Mulholland  Drive. I mean I can’t stand the way David Lynch tells a tale but I dug that movie. I told her I felt bad for the  Naomi Watts character. And Laura Harring was super sexy. I leaned over the table as she was eating her fruit salad and I kissed her. I told her she was even sexier. Her mouth tasted like blueberries.

     

    We fought over who would pay. She won. 

     

    “Can I drive?” She asks sizing up my new bike.

     

    “Of course my little hellcat.”

     

    “Is that my nickname?

     

    “Do you like it. I figured maybe you’d like Tits Magee better.” I say manically laughing. She punches me lightly in the stomach.

     

    “I like hellcat better… come here..” God I loved it when she said come here like that. It made my insides burn. She kisses me soft her lips opening just enough for me to get my tongue inside. “Where do you want to go?”

     

    “I don’t know……I am ……I don’t know if I should bring it up…might spoil the mood.’

     

    “Your wondering about Curt and Mark right?” She asked

     

    “Yeah….I don’t know this is all wrong you know. But I can’t stay away….from you….your my everything..”

     

    “You think it’s true about Curt and your dad…..?”

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    1. This is by far the best story I’ve ever read about this two characters. And believe, I’ve read lots of them.Congratulations to the author. I really loved how you fit the lyrics into the storyline. How everything was raw and real. Just like life is.Looking forward to read more of your work.

    4. Shit!!! You wanna join me and make a movie out of this??? Hoho, it’s so much better than the fast and the furious…. God i really loved this story :D Write an other one please!

    5. I’m with Shane,I was just thinking LAPD, surprised me with her being a FED. Carmen did say they could talk when this is all over (epilogue/sequal)… Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed reading this!

    6. ^^yeah, I know, I just thought that since her mom lived in LA and she was out for revenge she was doing her own off duty thing… Reread the story, and I loved it more the second time!!

    7. Been busy & had to catch up on the last few updates tonight. Damn! Your story rocked. It was like a damn t.v. mini – series. I’d like to think that they’ll meet up in the future after the dusts clears. Dana really came through for Shane. Glad neither Shane nor Carmen ended up dead. Incredible story, very cool how you placed these two characters in an alternate universe & they remained true to their characters. Excellent job. Thanx for the story. Think up some more plz. lol

    13. Absolutely amazing work. This was a great story that I am really sad to see end, I hope you will be back soon with some more wonderful writing. I like the real ending, even if it wasn’t the happiest, you wrote the story to be real, and you kept it that way. Excellent, excellent job.

    14. Up until the last paragraph I thought it would end well. I thought they would let the dust settle then try it all over again–a new life without the burn of the hell that had once surrounded them. But then, that last line. God! Why? I guess it could have been worse; at least you decided to spare both of their lives. Either way, I loved this story; it WAS quite gritty. There was intrigue and realism in every word. You did an impeccable job at conveying Shane’s thoughts, fears, and feelings. Great job.

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