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    The line begins to blur PT 10

    Story written on July 4, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=61569
    Author Notes:

    The Truth the whole truth and nothing but the truth.

     

    I head to Mark’s floor….not around. something just doesn’t feel right about this.

     

    I head to my floor. I check all the rooms for intruders….no fucking anybody. what kind of hostile takeover was this?

     

    I turn the TV….and sure enough I see the news……….."Murdered execution style…..both father and son where the one and two leaders of the infamous  street racing gang know as Slayer X…..Once again Curtis Wayland and Mark Wayland found shot dead in a bar on the ……….”

     

    So it was like that after all…..

     

    The phone is ringing.

     

    “I hope you heard the news…..”

     

    “Havoc…..so… now what…?”

     

    “Well Shane the thing is that I don’t need you after all. Carmen god bless her sweet sexy ass. She sure is sweet isn’t she?…….. Well the thing is….imagine a clock ticking….picture it…counting down…”

     

    I drop the phone and run as fast as I can………I get down the stairs taking them three at a time…..the building going boom was all I remembered……

     

     

     

     

     

     

    “Shane….oh my god……I … I’m sorry oh god….I…never ….Shane….”

     

    I must be dead there are three Dana’s floating around I try to grab one but I get nothing but air….

     

    “Shane oh my…your ok…are you ok?’

     

    “Daaaana….iz zat yoou?”

     

    “Shane you need to go to the hospital….”

     

    “Hospital…..?”

     

    “Yes………..please hold on don’t die!”

     

    She is on her phone….I …………..Carmen is all I think before I black out again….

     

     

     

     

     

     

    I wake up in the hospital. There’s a tube up my nose. My head hurts worse than when I smashed up my Ducati. There are only two Dana’s now. She looks really worried.

     

    “Dana…..”

     

    “Thank god you where out for a while…..”

     

    “How long is a while….?” I ask her.

     

    “5 hours……Shane some cops are here to see you….”

     

    “Dana you gotta get me outta here….”

     

    “Shane someone blew up your house…maybe you should talk to them….”

     

    “Dana please help me….there just gonna lock me up…..please someone I love ….she might be in trouble….”

     

    She thinks for a couple of seconds….

     

    “Ok gimme a couple of minutes…. Your clothes are over there….”

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    1. This is by far the best story I’ve ever read about this two characters. And believe, I’ve read lots of them.Congratulations to the author. I really loved how you fit the lyrics into the storyline. How everything was raw and real. Just like life is.Looking forward to read more of your work.

    4. Shit!!! You wanna join me and make a movie out of this??? Hoho, it’s so much better than the fast and the furious…. God i really loved this story :D Write an other one please!

    5. I’m with Shane,I was just thinking LAPD, surprised me with her being a FED. Carmen did say they could talk when this is all over (epilogue/sequal)… Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed reading this!

    6. ^^yeah, I know, I just thought that since her mom lived in LA and she was out for revenge she was doing her own off duty thing… Reread the story, and I loved it more the second time!!

    7. Been busy & had to catch up on the last few updates tonight. Damn! Your story rocked. It was like a damn t.v. mini – series. I’d like to think that they’ll meet up in the future after the dusts clears. Dana really came through for Shane. Glad neither Shane nor Carmen ended up dead. Incredible story, very cool how you placed these two characters in an alternate universe & they remained true to their characters. Excellent job. Thanx for the story. Think up some more plz. lol

    13. Absolutely amazing work. This was a great story that I am really sad to see end, I hope you will be back soon with some more wonderful writing. I like the real ending, even if it wasn’t the happiest, you wrote the story to be real, and you kept it that way. Excellent, excellent job.

    14. Up until the last paragraph I thought it would end well. I thought they would let the dust settle then try it all over again–a new life without the burn of the hell that had once surrounded them. But then, that last line. God! Why? I guess it could have been worse; at least you decided to spare both of their lives. Either way, I loved this story; it WAS quite gritty. There was intrigue and realism in every word. You did an impeccable job at conveying Shane’s thoughts, fears, and feelings. Great job.

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