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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 10

    Story written on August 5, 2005 by tibette99.
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    Number of Comments: 20
    Words: 8903
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55858
    Author Notes:

    I’m sorry…
    I’m sorry…
    I’m sorry…

     

    Tina: (anxiously) Helena, what are
    you doing here?

     

    Helena extended her
    arm, offering the flowers to Tina. Tina hesitantly took the large assortment
    and placed it on the seat next to her. Helena bent down to give Tina a kiss on
    the top of the head, while surreptitiously watching Bette’s reaction. She
    smiled as she saw the skin around the corner of Bette’s eyes tighten
    perceptibly in anger. Tina swallowed nervously and returned the gesture, giving
    Helena an awkward
    kiss on her cheek as she lifted her head.

     

    Helena: Hello,
    Bette. I hope I’m not interrupting anything.

     

    Tina: (quickly) No, we were just talking.

     

    Helena: I see.

     

    Tina: Whatwhat are you doing here?

     

    Helena makes a show
    of checking her watch.

     

    Helena: You told me
    to meet you here at 6. We have an appointment at

     

    Tina (interrupts) I knowI justI guess I lost track
    of time.

     

    Helena: Speaking of
    time(addressing Bette) I’m surprised that you’re here at all. I must say that     Franklin was quite
    disappointed that you were unable to complete the assignment that I gave you
    this afternoon.

     

    Tina: You gave her?

     

    Bette: (somewhat angry) As I explained to Franklin, there’s
    really nothing that had to be finished today. Maybe if you hadn’t waited until
    the last minute to give it to me

     

    Helena: (laughs)
    Are you making excuses now

     

    Tina: (sharply) Helena.

     

    Bette: (calmly) No Tina, it’s alright. Helena you’ll have
    the report first thing tomorrow. (pauses) In fact I should be goingI didn’t
    realize how late it was.

     

    Bette slides out of the booth and stands. Tina
    immediately does the same. They stand there looking at each other, oblivious to
    Helena who is standing there impatiently watching.

     

    Tina: (quickly) You don’t have to leave.

     

    Bette: No, it’s ok.

     

    Tina: But

     

    Bette: You have plans alreadyI don’t want to intrude.

     

    Tina: But I haven’t told you

     

    Bette: (interrupts) I’ll call youlater on this week.
    Maybe we could get together to…um talk again.

     

    Tina: I’dI’d like that.

     

    They stand facing each other in awkward silence, both
    waiting to see who would make the first move. Finally Bette reaches down and
    picks up her laptop case. She starts to unzip it, then hesitates for a moment,
    before reversing her actions and closing it again. She straightens and with a
    sigh starts to move away from Tina. Tina, realizing that Bette wasn’t going to
    initiate anything with Helena present, quickly steps up and enfolds Bette in a
    tight hug. Shocked, Bette stands still for a long moment before finally,
    tentatively bringing her arms around Tina’s shoulders. She closes her eyes and
    breathes deeply.  She smells the warm
    familiarity that is Tinathe scent that is noticeably missing from their house.
    From her life. Bette opens her eyes and watches as     Helena‘s triumphant
    smile is reduced to a scowl. Their eyes meet and Bette can’t help but smile. The
    intent in the gesture was clear. 

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    Comments

    1. WTF!!! Ok maybe you don’t understand the rules of fan fic.
      Rule #1 you don’t leave us with a cliffy when you go on vacation!!
      Rule #2 writers don’t go on vacations
      Your lucky I don’t know where your going. LMAO

    2. Bette can’t have cancer. She has had enough trouble in her life. the last year. Just putting up with Helena is like living in hell. We know that something is wrong with Bette, but make it simple to cure.. One of the best on the site right now.

    3. LMAO @ CR00..

      Ok You have to really write again before i tell CR00 where you’re going.. and as i told you I HATE CLIF HANGERS..
      But really loved how you wrote the whole hug thing.. at least you gave me a reason not to not like Tina..
      PLZ PLZ PLZ keep Bette away from Cancer.. the woman suffered enough..

    4. Oh no you DIDN’T just leave us hangin’ like that!!! Please come back soon and make me feel better quick! I feel like throwing up all over Helena right now.

    5. TBC ? Most definitely!! And please post asap, you can´t leave us hanging in suspense – aching to find out what´s wrong with Bette. No matter what it´s my hope that the gang and Tina will get her through it. Because withour our friends and family we´re are nothing. We need their love, affection and support to manage the turmoil we meet in our lives today. So please let Tina drop Helacious and help Bette through.

    7. You are so bad at leaving us on this cliff hanger, please post the new chapter soon, so Bette has cancer, I wonder whether she will tell Tina or even see her again, as Bette will not want to be a burden to Tina. Please post your new chapter soon.

    8. WHOA! It’s herts to read this WHOA! Hey you make Me cry sniff sniff if Bette has a cancer that’s not really good Please make it better Please Thanks Please continue I Love the way you write it’s Great.

    9. so Bette has cancer?..ggezz i cant take this to painfull..see two people that meant to be together like this and now Bette is sick and alone..and worse with Helena as a shadow..plase please make her good.. i am sad :o(

    13. tibette my computer just crash on me,so i didnt get the chance to comment on your last chapter. i am so happy that you’re not writing bette they way i.c.wrote her. she took almost all of the thing i like most about her away. her strengh,her playful side and turn her into something pitiful.i hope you dont do this our bette in your story. i like another writer on this board [LASTKID] you and she both have the same writing style. tibette dont worry about people not reading this story because its one of the best written story on this board. they have a neww way of keeping count of the readers now. if i was to read this chapter 2 or even 6 times, it would still only count as 1 time. it seem if you go over at least 200 her story has been read by plenty of people. if bette do or dont have cancer, just please let her talk to tina about it. ooo i forgot to say ‘great chapter.

    17. I know what you mean about going back to stories I do that all the time. What a place to leave it – I guess Bette has cancer then – question is how bad. Great story. More please and quick!

    19. Its my first comment here but please start writing again i cant wait what happend to Bette.Iam from Germany and these Site is the only Dope for a Bette and Tina Adicct.

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