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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 10

    Story written on August 5, 2005 by tibette99.
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    Number of Comments: 20
    Words: 8903
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55858
    Author Notes:

    I’m sorry…
    I’m sorry…
    I’m sorry…

    Previously

     

    Bette: What are we doing here?

    Tina: We’re talking. It’s a step in the right
    direction.

    Bette: It is. (pauses) You said that you had something
    that you wanted to talk to me about

    Tina: II do. Bette I haven’t been completely honest
    with you. When I found out that you were cheating on meII shut down. I
    couldn’t talk to you because I was so angry. I didn’t really feel comfortable
    talking with the girls.

    Bette: But why? They’re your friends.

    Tina: Because I was embarrassed. To them, we were a happily
    married couple. I felt that, in some way, we were lying to them. I didn’t want
    to have to face them thinking that. (pauses) But after a while I realized that
    what they really cared about was whether or not I was ok.

    Bette: I’m glad that they were there for you.

    Tina: Bette while we were still togetherI went and
    did something. I had our best interests in mind at the time. I know that you
    were under a lot of pressure from work and that you were very stressed about
    getting the show ready on time. And I know things weren’t great between us, but
    I thought that this would change things for the better (pauses) God this is
    hardBette I went and I that is to say that I (sighs in frustrations).

    Bette: (gently) Whatever it is, just say it. It can’t
    be that bad?

    Tina: Bette, I’m

    “Hello, Darling”

    *********************************************************************

     

    Chapter 10

     

    Kit and Bette are sitting
    together in the office of Dr. Jennifer Harris, director of Hematology at     Cedars-Sinai Medical Center. It wasn’t a very big office by
    any means; certainly not one befitting the director of a department. Bette
    didn’t know whether to feel relieved or dismayed at seeing the numerous degrees
    and awards displayed along the back wall. Relieved at knowing that Dr. Harris
    appeared to be well qualified in her chosen profession. Or dismayed at knowing
    that she had to seek medical advice from one so specialized. They had been
    waiting in the office for the past ten minutes while Dr. Harris went to
    retrieve the lab results.

     

    Bette
    checks her watch for what seems like the third time in the last five minutes or
    so.

     

    Kit: I’m
    glad you allowed me to come with you.

     

    Bette: I
    don’t seem to recall you giving me any choice on the matter.

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    1. WTF!!! Ok maybe you don’t understand the rules of fan fic.
      Rule #1 you don’t leave us with a cliffy when you go on vacation!!
      Rule #2 writers don’t go on vacations
      Your lucky I don’t know where your going. LMAO

    2. Bette can’t have cancer. She has had enough trouble in her life. the last year. Just putting up with Helena is like living in hell. We know that something is wrong with Bette, but make it simple to cure.. One of the best on the site right now.

    3. LMAO @ CR00..

      Ok You have to really write again before i tell CR00 where you’re going.. and as i told you I HATE CLIF HANGERS..
      But really loved how you wrote the whole hug thing.. at least you gave me a reason not to not like Tina..
      PLZ PLZ PLZ keep Bette away from Cancer.. the woman suffered enough..

    4. Oh no you DIDN’T just leave us hangin’ like that!!! Please come back soon and make me feel better quick! I feel like throwing up all over Helena right now.

    5. TBC ? Most definitely!! And please post asap, you can´t leave us hanging in suspense – aching to find out what´s wrong with Bette. No matter what it´s my hope that the gang and Tina will get her through it. Because withour our friends and family we´re are nothing. We need their love, affection and support to manage the turmoil we meet in our lives today. So please let Tina drop Helacious and help Bette through.

    7. You are so bad at leaving us on this cliff hanger, please post the new chapter soon, so Bette has cancer, I wonder whether she will tell Tina or even see her again, as Bette will not want to be a burden to Tina. Please post your new chapter soon.

    8. WHOA! It’s herts to read this WHOA! Hey you make Me cry sniff sniff if Bette has a cancer that’s not really good Please make it better Please Thanks Please continue I Love the way you write it’s Great.

    9. so Bette has cancer?..ggezz i cant take this to painfull..see two people that meant to be together like this and now Bette is sick and alone..and worse with Helena as a shadow..plase please make her good.. i am sad :o(

    13. tibette my computer just crash on me,so i didnt get the chance to comment on your last chapter. i am so happy that you’re not writing bette they way i.c.wrote her. she took almost all of the thing i like most about her away. her strengh,her playful side and turn her into something pitiful.i hope you dont do this our bette in your story. i like another writer on this board [LASTKID] you and she both have the same writing style. tibette dont worry about people not reading this story because its one of the best written story on this board. they have a neww way of keeping count of the readers now. if i was to read this chapter 2 or even 6 times, it would still only count as 1 time. it seem if you go over at least 200 her story has been read by plenty of people. if bette do or dont have cancer, just please let her talk to tina about it. ooo i forgot to say ‘great chapter.

    17. I know what you mean about going back to stories I do that all the time. What a place to leave it – I guess Bette has cancer then – question is how bad. Great story. More please and quick!

    19. Its my first comment here but please start writing again i cant wait what happend to Bette.Iam from Germany and these Site is the only Dope for a Bette and Tina Adicct.

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