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Savannah – Amber Eyes
Story written on June 4, 2012 by kins40.
She did not want to wake her, instead opting to brush a gold lock of hair from the delicate eyebrow, it had fallen across.
Stretching out her little finger, she allowed it to graze Tina’s forehead, guiding the errant lock of hair towards her temple and behind her ear.
Tina began to stir at the contact and Bette held her breath worried that she had woken her up. But Tina’s body merely shifted, adjusting herself closer to the brunette as her eyelids barely flickered. The hand which had rested on her chest moved, and draped itself around Bette’s waist while her head thought a softer resting place from bette’s shoulder to the sofa’s armrest.
Bette looked on, entranced for a couple of seconds, before resuming her own tentative breathing, when she heard that Tina’s had settled back down to its own shallow and steady pattern.
She decided it best to not move again, instead settling for her purely unhindered, secretive observation of the love of her life.
Her eyes fell on Tina’s chest, just barely revealed by the ‘V’ in the neckline of her t-shirt. She studied the rise and fall as the blonde breathed with quiet rhythm, her gaze travelled along the elegant expanse of her neck spotting the faint pulse beneath the soft skin.
But the attraction remained on her face and the way Tina’s lips were parted and the powerful need took her over once again. She wanted to touch, not only with her fingers but she wanted to explore with her mouth. And those lips were so inviting, so irresistible.
So she moved closer, wetting her lips in anticipation, reacting with a flurry a goosebumps as Tina’s gentle exhale registered on the light coating of moisture like a cool breeze.
Her hand accompanied her movement, her thumb brushing lightly over the full lower lip along its entire length and then downwards unfurling it tenderly.
Sleepy hazel eyes fluttered open, meeting soft brown ones as Bette leant forward to capture the tantalising lips.
Tina’s body reacted immediately, instinctively to the gentle caress coiling herself up to Bette’s contours in a well practised manner and the brunette responded straightaway, pulling the younger woman tight into her body and a few safer inches from the edge of the sofa.
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I’m going to take a guess and say that Tina wants to start having kids. Awesome update K, brilliant as usual 😘
Did she say something like Tina wants a baby?
You are just a fantastic writer. Your prose is lyrical. Love, love, love, it.
oookay i have waited long enough now where is the next chapter kins??!! Please post soon. Thanks!! :D
Lovely update, what a terrific story! Thanks for posting.
Hope you enjoy it! – we do ! :)
I still say I will pay for anything you write. I adore your writing.
Amazing update..love this story!
That’s good and what did she say
Okay…so when do we find out what Augustine said!? Great story…I always look forward to your updates! Thank you!
I`m with Vegas513.This is an amzing story.Thank you.
Savannah is so wonderful, I was elated to see you put out a prequel and you have no disappointed. Wonderful, I can’t wait to read more about this Bette and Tinas life in the beautiful land of Africa. Thank you very much.
Great update. Believe it or not google did not give the translation. I found it on MSN. I don’t know what the Mpenzi means but, the rest of it translates to “the laughter of a child brightens the house.” In my comments of last chapter, I said, Tina needs her own babies. This was a fantastic chapter, as all your writings have, this one showed the very depths of their love for each other and what their love could mean for a child in their lives. Loved it. More please! Thanks so much for sharing.
Uhm that was not a nice thing to do – my swahili is a bit rusty to say the least..now you have us guessing all sorts of scenarios. You know, you have to update now..
Oh Kins!! Thanks for another amazing update. :-) LOL.. If only each time we do google translate then we get something in return besides the translation, I think we can support the sites more by this kind of story ;-) and even though I just got the translation, I will not post it here in respect of your wish :-p kekeke..
I have to admit that my suahili is not that good. So please update soon!!
Ah, yes, it is time for Bette and Tina to move into the next phase of their lives, Tina is ready to be a momma… That one was easy to figure out. I love this story and the deep love that these two women share with one another. I love the way you write and this story is one of my favorites. Thank you for creating this sequel. Thank you for the posting!
Wow, so Tina’s “clock” is ticking?… Awesome!…
Okay I translated that line so hahahaha that was funny I love you stories kins every single one
Absolutely wonderful. Thank you for this excellent story. Can’t get enough of it.
Thanks so much for this chapter. The cubs are absolutely adorable and Tina is so sweet with them.I hope Augustine takes Bette’s advise and slows down a bit so that she doesn’t wear herself out. She’s a wonderful surrogate mother.
I read three chapters, and I confess that I loved it.
I love this story! Your write these characters beautifully, thank you!