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Savannah – Amber Eyes
Story written on June 4, 2012 by kins40.
Her eyes were closed, her breathing was slow and steady which brought the obvious conclusion that the blonde was sound asleep.
Bette wondered about the time. The sun was up but everywhere was quiet. She couldn’t even hear the orphans which meant that it was early still, way too early to be getting up, too early to even be awake.
But Bette was fully conscious and right now nothing in the world would make her go back to sleep.
Her smile widened as she refocused her gaze on the peaceful woman in her arms and she was struck for perhaps the thousandth time by how beautiful she was.
Bette wanted to touch her, trace the contours of her face, follow the line from the top of her nose, down to the little ridge just below it and over her lips to finish over the small bump of her chin. She wondered if she were blind if the tactile discovery of her face would reveal the same image as the one she was contemplating now. She would surely miss one thing though, her gorgeous expressive eyes, capable of so much loving and discernibly full of reprobation when Tina felt hard done by.
But that was alright, Bette did not mind it so much when Tina was annoyed with her. She was grateful though that those eyes were closed right now. It afforded her the time to look at her, stare without reservation.
Her heart swelled as it always did in those instances. She wanted to protect her, do things for her, share secrets with her….she wanted her, full stop. She was so in love with her that her stomach felt like it had floated upward as if it were filled with butterflies, to lodge itself in her throat. Bette swallowed to try and rid herself of the lump which felt like it was constricting her airway but it was to no avail. She didn’t repeat the action, knowing that the feeling would never endanger her life. Quite the contrary, it was what kept her alive day in, day out.
She lifted her free hand, tempted to carry out what had been in her thoughts, caress the serene face of the sleeping woman but she halted her movement, curling her fingers back into her palm.
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I’m going to take a guess and say that Tina wants to start having kids. Awesome update K, brilliant as usual 😘
Did she say something like Tina wants a baby?
You are just a fantastic writer. Your prose is lyrical. Love, love, love, it.
oookay i have waited long enough now where is the next chapter kins??!! Please post soon. Thanks!! :D
Lovely update, what a terrific story! Thanks for posting.
Hope you enjoy it! – we do ! :)
I still say I will pay for anything you write. I adore your writing.
Amazing update..love this story!
That’s good and what did she say
Okay…so when do we find out what Augustine said!? Great story…I always look forward to your updates! Thank you!
I`m with Vegas513.This is an amzing story.Thank you.
Savannah is so wonderful, I was elated to see you put out a prequel and you have no disappointed. Wonderful, I can’t wait to read more about this Bette and Tinas life in the beautiful land of Africa. Thank you very much.
Great update. Believe it or not google did not give the translation. I found it on MSN. I don’t know what the Mpenzi means but, the rest of it translates to “the laughter of a child brightens the house.” In my comments of last chapter, I said, Tina needs her own babies. This was a fantastic chapter, as all your writings have, this one showed the very depths of their love for each other and what their love could mean for a child in their lives. Loved it. More please! Thanks so much for sharing.
Uhm that was not a nice thing to do – my swahili is a bit rusty to say the least..now you have us guessing all sorts of scenarios. You know, you have to update now..
Oh Kins!! Thanks for another amazing update. :-) LOL.. If only each time we do google translate then we get something in return besides the translation, I think we can support the sites more by this kind of story ;-) and even though I just got the translation, I will not post it here in respect of your wish :-p kekeke..
I have to admit that my suahili is not that good. So please update soon!!
Ah, yes, it is time for Bette and Tina to move into the next phase of their lives, Tina is ready to be a momma… That one was easy to figure out. I love this story and the deep love that these two women share with one another. I love the way you write and this story is one of my favorites. Thank you for creating this sequel. Thank you for the posting!
Wow, so Tina’s “clock” is ticking?… Awesome!…
Okay I translated that line so hahahaha that was funny I love you stories kins every single one
Absolutely wonderful. Thank you for this excellent story. Can’t get enough of it.
Thanks so much for this chapter. The cubs are absolutely adorable and Tina is so sweet with them.I hope Augustine takes Bette’s advise and slows down a bit so that she doesn’t wear herself out. She’s a wonderful surrogate mother.
I read three chapters, and I confess that I loved it.
I love this story! Your write these characters beautifully, thank you!