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Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 31
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Bette thought that Tina’s cool breath on her skin alone would send her to ecstasy and she let out another soft moan. That sound elevated Tina’s desire and intensified it tenfold. She had dreamt and fantasized about making love to Bette for so long that desire was burning inside and threatening to erupt if Tina was going to keep it inside any longer.
The caresses that started out so gently soon turned into frantic roaming, and Tina was pleasantly surprised when Bette’s hands began frantically removing Tina’s shirt, which by now was the only obstacle that prevented their bare skin from touching.
Thankfully, last night Tina was wearing an elegant black shirt with an opening on the back and no buttons or zippers to slow down the removal process. Bette quickly eradicated the problem because she was overwhelmed with desire to feel Tina’s skin against hers, now.
Neither one of them thought that they could be turned on more than they already were, until Tina started passionately kissing another trail down from Bette’s collarbone to her abdomen. Bette was powerless from the sensation of Tina’s hot and moist lips on her skin that was already so familiar. Bette could do nothing but let Tina take control and set the pace.
Tina’s hands seemed to have a mind of their own as they moved up Bette’s side to her perfect breasts and gently caressed them again. Her hands and mouth were all over Bette’s body, finding old and new places that she had not touched or tasted before so she could memorize the ones that elicited a moan or a groan from her lover.
Bette was writhing uncontrollably under Tina’s touches and kisses and couldn’t concentrate on one single thought. All her feelings were mixed into a powerful and incredible sensation of rapture and elation. As Tina began sucking and nibbling on Bette’s breasts again, Bette realized that her fears from before made her miss out on the blissful miracle of Tina’s love and she chastised herself for waiting so long to finally declare her feelings for Tina.
Bette could hardly contain her excitement of all these new sensations and the way Tina was making her feel. She was trying hard to control her emotions because she felt that only one more tender and soft touch of Tina’s fingers or tongue and she might faint again.
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That was beautiful and hot, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Don’t tell me Bette actually thought to herself ‘What a feeling!’ ? Hahaha ! I was almost hoping she would start dancing there ! LOL !! This was a nice chapter, B&TF. I mean, I have no idea if that’s realistic or not in terms of lesbian sex, but I don’t really care, what matters is it works for me in terms of a romantic story. Thank you, B&TF. Now I really wanna know what’s going to happen next. I really want Tina to find the courage to tell Bette what she knows about her time, about Christina, about her family, etc.
WOW!! Don’t be anxious about writing NC17 any more. You do a fantastically loving job. Bravo!! More anytime. PPVVS
i loved this the first time around, and the second time was just as sweet!!!!!
amazing amazing amazing
Wow, that was a powerful chapter with all the emotions and love pulsing throughout their bodies. So pure and peaceful.
Who said she wasn’t sure about writing sex scenes again???… Well, whoever it was, please tell her that she couldn’t be any more wrong!… Beautiful, B&TF… Intense… Powerful… Full of love… Perfect! Thanks!
Brilliant!
I agree with toby4ever that was wonderful and full of pure love. It’s a great chapter. Thanks.
WOW!!!
Bette is making a habit of fainting at crucial moments! Finally they are united! I can’t wait for more… Great update
I don’t think you have any problem writing NC-17’s.(or R) :o)
Yes an update! Wonderfully written B&TF. I have always felt that JB and LuH played Bette and Tina’s scenes as love scenes…not sex scenes. You have captured that same appeal in your chapter where B & T make love for the first time. We can feel the eroticism that they feel, that powerful rush and their desperation for each other. Well done…you have no need to feel embarrassed, you did a great job!
Yes an update! Wonderfully written B&TF. I have always felt that JB and LuH played Bette and Tina’s scenes as love scenes…not sex scenes. You have captured that same appeal in your chapter where B & T make love for the first time. We can feel the eroticism that they feel, that powerful rush and their desperation for each other. Well done…you have no need to feel embarrassed, you did a great job!
Yes an update! Wonderfully written B&TF. I have always felt that JB and LuH played Bette and Tina’s scenes as love scenes…not sex scenes. You have captured that same appeal in your chapter where B & T make love for the first time. We can feel the eroticism that they feel, that powerful rush and their desperation for each other. Well done…you have no need to feel embarrassed, you did a great job!
Oh my goodness so worth the wait. It was the perfect combination of raw passion and romance!! Lovely job PPS
Great story that I almost didn’t read to begin with. (Just becuase of the Time travel portion) I read L word Fanfiction everyday as I walk on my tredmill, gotta multi task. This has been an amazing story. One of my favorites. Really well written. I know that everyone has there on take on characthers but it has really surprised me that “Tina” didn’t tell “Bette” about Christina being alive before she made love to her. I know that it adds to the drama. But that was really dishonest of her.