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Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 31
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Tina ended the kiss again and began slowly unbuttoning Bette’s shirt, noticing that her hands were shaking a little. She tried to steady her numb fingers, while using the tip of her tongue to draw wet patterns just above Bette’s breasts.
Bette’s soaring mind registered the tremble of Tina’s fingers and she asked softly, trying to keep her breathing balanced, “Your hands are shaking, baby, are you afraid?”
“No…well…a little,” Tina replied nervously. Truth be told, she was really scared because even though she have had sex before, it was her first time making love to a woman…and not just any woman but the gorgeous and enchanting Bette Porter…the woman that Tina loved with passion and obsession. And she was determined to make it a very good and memorable experience for both of them.
“This is so intense…I’m not usually nervous like that,” Tina said with a jittery giggle when she finally succeeded in unbuttoning Bette’s shirt.
“You…nervous?” Bette breathed out slowly, “I’m terrified…I’ve never done anything like this before…but I love the way you feel in my arms…I love the way you touch me…God, how much I love you…please, stop being nervous and take control.”
Tina gave Bette a kiss and slowly lowered the shirt from Bette’s shoulders. Her cold fingers came in contact with Bette’s sizzling skin and the contrast was so electrifying that they both trembled ecstatically. Tina slowly traced the outline of Bette’s arms and then moved her fingers to unclasp her laced bra.
After removing it along with the shirt, she gently cupped Bette’s breasts, holding her hands steady and absorbing all the heat that her skin was emitting. Then Tina slowly began caressing and rubbing them, alternating it with a tender nibbling on Bette’s nipples.
At the first touch of Bette’s silky skin Tina couldn’t help but moan. It was a low throaty moan that sent chills down Bette’s skin and she grasped the sheets to keep herself from trembling. They had done some major touching before but knowing what the ultimate destination would be by the end of this journey, made all Bette’s senses more susceptible and vulnerable.
Tina noticed Bette’s clenched teeth, perspiration and shallow breath and whispered into Bette’s ear, producing more chills and shivers, “Baby, don’t hold anything in, let it go, breathe, feel free…”
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That was beautiful and hot, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Don’t tell me Bette actually thought to herself ‘What a feeling!’ ? Hahaha ! I was almost hoping she would start dancing there ! LOL !! This was a nice chapter, B&TF. I mean, I have no idea if that’s realistic or not in terms of lesbian sex, but I don’t really care, what matters is it works for me in terms of a romantic story. Thank you, B&TF. Now I really wanna know what’s going to happen next. I really want Tina to find the courage to tell Bette what she knows about her time, about Christina, about her family, etc.
WOW!! Don’t be anxious about writing NC17 any more. You do a fantastically loving job. Bravo!! More anytime. PPVVS
i loved this the first time around, and the second time was just as sweet!!!!!
amazing amazing amazing
Wow, that was a powerful chapter with all the emotions and love pulsing throughout their bodies. So pure and peaceful.
Who said she wasn’t sure about writing sex scenes again???… Well, whoever it was, please tell her that she couldn’t be any more wrong!… Beautiful, B&TF… Intense… Powerful… Full of love… Perfect! Thanks!
Brilliant!
I agree with toby4ever that was wonderful and full of pure love. It’s a great chapter. Thanks.
WOW!!!
Bette is making a habit of fainting at crucial moments! Finally they are united! I can’t wait for more… Great update
I don’t think you have any problem writing NC-17’s.(or R) :o)
Yes an update! Wonderfully written B&TF. I have always felt that JB and LuH played Bette and Tina’s scenes as love scenes…not sex scenes. You have captured that same appeal in your chapter where B & T make love for the first time. We can feel the eroticism that they feel, that powerful rush and their desperation for each other. Well done…you have no need to feel embarrassed, you did a great job!
Yes an update! Wonderfully written B&TF. I have always felt that JB and LuH played Bette and Tina’s scenes as love scenes…not sex scenes. You have captured that same appeal in your chapter where B & T make love for the first time. We can feel the eroticism that they feel, that powerful rush and their desperation for each other. Well done…you have no need to feel embarrassed, you did a great job!
Yes an update! Wonderfully written B&TF. I have always felt that JB and LuH played Bette and Tina’s scenes as love scenes…not sex scenes. You have captured that same appeal in your chapter where B & T make love for the first time. We can feel the eroticism that they feel, that powerful rush and their desperation for each other. Well done…you have no need to feel embarrassed, you did a great job!
Oh my goodness so worth the wait. It was the perfect combination of raw passion and romance!! Lovely job PPS
Great story that I almost didn’t read to begin with. (Just becuase of the Time travel portion) I read L word Fanfiction everyday as I walk on my tredmill, gotta multi task. This has been an amazing story. One of my favorites. Really well written. I know that everyone has there on take on characthers but it has really surprised me that “Tina” didn’t tell “Bette” about Christina being alive before she made love to her. I know that it adds to the drama. But that was really dishonest of her.