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Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 12
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“I promised mother at least ten paintings, so I have to start working on them all, or I’ll never finish,” Elizabeth replied stubbornly and smiled happily at Christina.
“But Bette,” Christina tried one more time, “if you paint one at a time, then you will finish at least one before the festival.”
Elizabeth was very adamant about her choice of workload and painting routine and Christina decided to let it go.
Every day after finishing their lessons, Bette would ride with Christina to her house and sometimes Alicia would go with them, only on foot. “Horseback riding is not my thing,” she always said, making a grimace that was supposed to explain her dislike of any physical activity involving animals. They rode slowly, enjoying each moment with each other and Alicia could easily keep up with them.
On one of these visits Elizabeth and Alicia finally met Daniel Kennard, Christina’s husband. He had been away for almost a month, staying in the Northern California with his mother who was seriously ill. This meeting brought back Elizabeth’s insecurities and guilt. Daniel was such a nice man, very intelligent and genuine, and clearly in love with his lovely wife.
“It was such a pleasure to meet you Mr. Kennard,” Elizabeth said sincerely, “I’ve heard so much about you from my dear friend Christina.”
“The pleasure is all mine, Ms. Porter. I’ve heard a lot about you as well,” Daniel answered without hesitation, and then added with an earnest smile. “. In fact, you are pretty much the main topic of our daily conversations when I’m home.”
“Well, Christina is an inspiration to me and to my humble attempts at art. I’m really happy to have met you both,” Elizabeth smiled in return, desperately wishing with all her heart that things were different and that Christina would never have been married in the first place.
Elizabeth couldn’t deal with this guilt and uncertainty by herself and she knew that at some point she had to talk to Christina. However, she was determined to finish the paintings for the art festival and she made up her mind to discuss their situation with Christina after it was all over.
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Hey there! Sorry about missing a comment on the last chapter. I must confess that with Christmas and going away to my family, my return was a bit overbusy. But I read it of course, and thanks so much for posting so soon again. I’m really hooked to this story, and I must admit, intrigued as well. I’m of course looking forward to their meeting, but I’m also curious about the murder mystery, and Christina whereabouts after that… Anyway, I’ll be patient until you take us there! Happy New Year to you, mate. And PPS! K ;)
this is a nice way to start 2009… thank you for the early post… cant wait for tina and bette to ‘sort of meet in chapter 13’ which is the next one yay!
You are really building the intrigue for this story. You know what they say B&TF…some things are better the second time around! I never saw this the first time, but I’m sure enjoying it now. I can’t wait for the next update!
Whether the story is edited or not, it is still one of my all time favorites. Reading it again is such a wonderful treat, and puts a smile on my face every time. Thank you S. And remember, even if you don’t see a lot of comments, we are still reading…silently, but still reading! Happy New Year!
New Year’s Resolution–leave comments. I hang my head in shame at my past behavior. I have so much fun reading your chapters. I had read and loved the story during its first appearance, but I so enjoy being reminded of the details and intricacies of the plot. Your interweaving of the past and future story lines is intriguing. The portrayal of Elizabeth’s slow understanding of her feelings about Christina and the consequences of those feelings is heartbreaking, since you have already hinted of the tragedy to follow. I will be reading every chapter. If I slip up with my brand new resolution, you have my permission to rap my knuckles. Repeatedly.
It’s so nice to see a post from you, amazing story you have got there, and it keep us excited and so looking forward for the new one. Thank you so much. Love
How did the Porter name come to the forefront a gain? Somehow Melvin Porter must have been related to the Porters of the past. Can’t wait for the meeting of the now Bette and Tina.
Oh, wait ! I read your last chapter as well, but due to my little Christmas holiday out of town I only read it yesterday and didn’t take time to post a comment since you had already posted an update ( this chapter ) and I’ve only just caught up with everything now. Anyway, let me please apologize for not commenting, I really do love this story. Seriously. This is not only beautiful, but also very thrilling and I love it. HAPPY NEW YEAR B&TF and PPS !
Love this story and can’t wait to see B&T meet. Please post more, thanks!
Happy new year, B&TF. Another great chapter, more please. :)
you know what’s messed up? the fact that i have to wait Again you to post chapter by chapter…Again for the 2nd time.hahai remember this story…one of the first fanfics i fell in love with….though i remember you not finishing it quite….but i remember loving it.
Reading this story from Chapter 1 and it is very intriguing.