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Not With My Daughter, You Don’t – Short Story
Tina chuckled onto Bette’s shoulder, holding her tighter as they both looked out to the street. “Because when we tell her she can’t do something, she does it with even more determination?”
Bette slowly stepped back with Tina’s arms still around her, and closed the door. She hated seeing Angelica leave with someone she thought of as completely undeserving of her time and of her heart. But then again, she did want happiness for her daughter, and understood the devastation that could come with parent’s constant disapproval – her father being a prime example of that. She never wanted to act that way toward Angelica, which was why she tried to remain as optimistic as she could when speaking with her daughter about Totus. “Tell me she’ll be okay.”
Tina smiled on Bette’s shoulder, gently kissing the back of her neck. “She’s a smart girl, Bette. She’ll always be alright because we raised her well.” Then she narrowed her eyes out the same door. “I’ll tell you one thing, though. If he brings her back late, you might have to restrain me. Something about him just brings out this twisted sort of violent nature in me.”
Chuckling at the hilarious attitude of her wife, Bette moved to close the door and turned to the blond hair and the mesmerising features of Tina’s face. “You too, huh?” She brought her arm up over Tina’s shoulders, walking with her back to the couch.
“And I can’t be held responsible for the damage either. His damn fault for being such a little prick.”
Bette laughed again, warmed at Tina’s terrible promises. Empty threats, she realized, but hilariously awful and comforting all at once. “You have quite a mouth on you tonight.”
They both dropped onto the couch once more, utterly exhausted.
“I want to have sex.”
Tina let out a breath of laughter, turning her head to catch Bette’s eye. They were too tired for much else. “Yeah?” She couldn’t help but smile. “Me too.”
They sat side by side for another moment, just admiring the décor of the house they’d decorated together years ago. All the memories flooded back with each detailed glance.
“You wanna read a bit first?” Bette asked, just then realizing how tired she really was, and she knew Tina had an interrupted sleep the night before.
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(61 votes, average: 3.48 out of 5)
Totus? The formal version of Toto? Great slice of life and totally how I picture Bette to be.
Hey GR, You had me rolling in the aisle. I just love when Angelica catches Bette and Tina out. Too funny. This was a great future tale. More please as this is the beginning of a great ocassionalseries, please. Many thanks for sharing this fun with me. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
Loved it!! The part where Angie catches them making out is really fun^^ totally how I picture Bette to be too :D One observation though: did you really have to make 16 years old look so stupid?? Anyway, you should totally consider continuing this, it’s great!!
I’m going to practice my “death stare” for my daughter’s future date ) male or female) although that I already look intimidating. I loved that ending and I didn’t feel as if it were left opened. It was realistically happy, for me at least. I love how protective they are. Thanks GR :)
I enjoyed it tremendously,totaly how I see Bette reacting to her daughter dating and I love that Tina is there to calm her… Thanks for sharing
Bette’s reaction to that young man is not unusual. I’m afraid she would have that kind of reaction to any boy or young man that Angie wanted to date, even if he was 18 or 30, she wouldn’t care for him being with Angie and Tina will always be the peacemaker for these occasions. However, I know Tina really wanted to snap him one for looking at her breasts and if she’d told Bette, he’d be dead by now. lol Being the parent of a teen is no bed of roses. Thanks for posting.
Actually to me it does not seem unfinished, one could take it as a self-contained event that occurred, with thought of what may occur. It was very good by the way, not quite what I am used to reading and enjoying from you.
i was looking for a story with this theme. Do you know an other one with this subject?
‘it may seem slightly unfinished, but I wrote it that way because the realistic nature of such situations is that you often don’t always get the answers you want’ – I think its a great vignette from their future lives, g1 !
I´m so glad my daughter is only 5!
Wonderful. Liked it alot. THank you.
Difficult times for the parents and the kids.Thank you.PPS
thats exactually how i would picture bette to react to any guy angie dates… thx…
Oh memories! Raising teenagers. What a joy and a nightmare in one! This rings true GR. Thanks for the post.
Not unfinished at all. Polished and funny. Like the way your B&Ts balance each other.
Totus? what kind of a name is that? My generation was the hippy/yuppy generation and I never heard Totus before