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Lucky in Love (Chapter 20)
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“Yes, I thought she was a little early,” Peggy said.
“I think it was meant to be a diversion, but that’s not all…” Helena was having trouble believing what she was thinking could be true, recent events notwithstanding.
“What is it darling?”
“She made a loud scene outside of Lara’s room at the hospital and I never really understood what it was all about.” Helena’s mind was racing.
“Part of the diversion so that you wouldn’t anticipate her real attack?”
“Yes, that, but….Mummie, do you think you can deal with Winnie on your own today? I need to see someone.”
“Don’t take no for an answer,” Peggy smiled as Helena gathered her things. “And don’t worry about Winnie. I’ll see to her.”
Shane studied herself in the mirror to see if anything was different, even though she knew it was a silly notion. At midnight Carmen imposed the rules again, but encouraged Shane to try the final exercise in her book. The one thing Shane thought she’d never be able to do. She was even creeped out by the word. Masturbation. Still, when Carmen moved a chair to the end of the bed and proceeded to pleasure herself, just to give Shane the proper incentive, she’d reacted naturally and was surprised at how quickly she peaked. She smiled at the memory of what Carmen did next.
Climbing on the bed, she’d taken Shane’s pulsating clit into her mouth and skillfully brought her to another orgasm before she knew what was happening. Shane found herself in the fetal position afterward, but Carmen held her tightly, whispering comforting words until they both slept. It wasn’t necessarily what she wanted to do all the time, but in the light of day, it was better than she’d ever imagined it might be. Shane’s reverie was interrupted when Carmen came in, a self-satisfied look on her face.
“So?”
“What?” Shane tried to contain the smile that lifted the corners of her mouth. Carmen waited her out. “I feel good this morning,” she admitted.
“Be sure to pay attention to Dr. Lynch’s face when you tell her,” Carmen said as she ran her arms around Shane’s waist and met her eyes in the mirror. “I want to hear every detail.”
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Excellent, Helena’s gone to Lara. Take that, Winnie. Everyone’s back on track, which is good. Nice chapter, can’t wait for Dave to come and wreak a bit of havoc.
OMG you rock Sammy!!! Loved dave,that was sweet! Loved lara and helena (and tibette) But of course Danish rules!!! Keep up the great work MMMM BOB lmao PPS
Damn it! Why didn’t you tell me I didn’t comment? LOL. Anyways, wow. this was so fucking hot. Thanks babe! So…Mr. Pointy…why does that sounds familiar? lol. Yeah…this was famtastic! PPS
Great Update!!! Thank you PPS
this just gets better and better can’t wait t see what will happen next please post soon I look it great update
sorry should have said that I love it
Wow…only 4 times in an hour…what is wrong with them?…lol. Glad to see they are moving forward. Keep posting…more of my favorite couple please.
This story rocks! I absolutely love it. Especially the Danish parts because, well come on. We all know their the best. :) But it really is a great story and you do such a fantastic job writing it. I can’t wait for the next update.
Yay for updates! I’ll just echo what everyone’s saying here: way to go! Can’t wait to read more and could Helena and Lara be any sweeter and Dana and Alice any cuter together? No! Because you rock them. PPS!
Even if it was just a small part about Sharmen I totally love it!!!!!!Great job!
You’re right. I did enjoy this update. You hit me with a whole bunch of Danish, and Buffy reference. “Mr. Pointy.” Haha. Awesome! I love how Dana tried to do an impression of Alice. I can see her doing that, and just picturing it makes me laugh. Alice always seems to be putting girls with clipboards in their places. :) Yeah! They got a doggie. Very cute. I hope he’s not going to be too much of a handful. “The dress,” Al gasped with her last thought. “No marks…” Will Alice be sporting a new scarf? :) I loved the update. I can’t wait to see what’s next.
Yay. I love this story so much. This update was so incredibly sweet with the doggie and the Lara taking Helena back and the house keys. The happy has definitely been achieved. Kudos.
Just keeps getting better and better! I officially love this story! :)
*raises eyebrow and smirks* That was niiiice! ;)
I love how Dave chose them! And, I’m looking forward to the home visit….why am I sensing Dave is going to be a mess when that happens? Loved the Sharmen this go round….and glad that Larena are getting back on track. And as always, the Danish is good stuff too! HOpe things are settling down for you….and thanks for the update!
Yay Sharmen!! Good for Helena, making Lara open the door. I hope Peggy shows Winnie who’s boss, because I’d hate to see what happens to Winnie when Helena gets a hold of her.Lovin’ the Sharmen, great job!!!!!
Oh Yes!!! This is great, Simply great!Dave the Dog, love it…I love this story what can I say! Keep up the good work!
Yay! I so adore this story (I may have mentioned this before – heh) really every letter, word, syllable is a treat. Addicted I am.
I guess I haven’t commented in ages. But still reading and loving it. I would like to see Peggy dealing with Winnie. That could be a blast. :)The (emotional) bond bewteen all of the couples is getting stronger and stronger (and it differs per couple), nice!And I love Dave already. I think his character will suit the both of them perfectly. :)
great update! and how awesome to see peggy supporting her daughter. i can’t help but love peggy peabody, even when she’s evil. but i think it’s more about the actress that plays her, holland taylor is always wonderful.anyway… great stuff and i can’t wait until the next update!