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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 26C
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Kit shook her head.
“We don’t know.” Alice leaned over and whispered to Dana. “Don’t crack. Don’t.”
Dana hated to admit it, but this was fun. She was having an adventure; something she and Alice would tell their children some day.
“Hey, what did you just tell her?”
“She didn’t tell me anything. She licked my. . .uh. . .ear. I like that.” Dana turned bright red.
“She likes it,” Alice affirmed.
“I’ve got to get on the phone and tell Detective Vogel that the victim’s mother has disappeared. It could cost me my job or I could get demoted because of you.”
Kit did feel bad for him and lowered her head. She planned on holding out for as long as she could, but she wasn’t going to jail. Her life was different and she had a business to manage. Whatever Tina was doing, she needed to get it done fast.
“Hey, nobody told you to stare at us like there was no tomorrow. Maybe if you had been paying attention to Tina instead of watching us make out, then this wouldn’t have happened. Whose fault is that?”
“Shit,” Officer Melabranche said. He stopped in the middle of the sofa and looked at them with such doom in his eyes. “There goes my excellent appraisal this year. How am I going to explain this? Look girls, you’ve gotta tell me. Just tell me.”
Alice, Kit, and Dana sat properly on the sofa, each one with their hands folded in their laps, their posture straight, their expressions nothing short of faked sincerity.
Marcus looked at them. “Where’s Tina?” He wasn’t playing.
“Marcus, we really don’t know,” Dana said.
“When did she leave?” he asked.
“Beats us. We were in here with you guys,” Alice said.
“Yeah, but you were in the back with her.” Marcus was exasperated with them. He looked at Kit. “You know where she went,” he stated to her.
“Nope. No, I don’t.”
“Hey, when we left her bedroom, she was there. She was sitting there and Carmen and Kit were looking for clothes in the closet.” Alice looked at Officer Melabranche. “Did you check the closets? I doubt that they’re in the closet, but Tina’s been strange since her coma. She might have gone back in.” Alice grinned at the cop, the tech, and Marcus.
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i am once again left speechless at your incredible ability to weave a tale. i actually yelped in excitement when Angie was safe but at the same time, believe it or not, felt somewhat sorry for Josh. only your writing could evoke that somewhat schizophrenic sympathy.I’m also a bit worried at the introduction of Jodi into the story but hope that after all that we’ve been through with Bette and Tina to date, she will not pose a threat to their relationship.as for all of the other characters and their stories, i am finding them entertaining and interesting as well which is not usually the case when reading as i’m pretty much just a Tina/Bette fan. this again, is testimony to your ability to ability to entertain.thanks again for the story and the time and effort that must be involved. looking forward as always to reading more.
WOW. you put so much into this everyone was weitten about. Could have done without Jodie tho. thanks
I’ve spent the past two days reading the whole thing, and honestly? It’s great. Really, really great. The characters are well written and adhere to canon, your reweaving of the events of Season 3 into this alternative version is not only really well done, but in my mind — preferable. As for the Jodi issue, if she’s like every other non-core character in your work (herself, but changed), I’ll be very happy to see where that goes. I do wonder, though, moments after Bette is reunited with Tina and her baby for the first time in weeks, she wanders off to talk to Jodi? That seems a little… I don’t know, inhuman? But, hey, if that’s my only complaint in 26 chapters, consider it an amazing feat. I’m a huge Danish fan, and I’m happy to see you keeping the love alive. Would love to see more of that relationship in your writing, but generally I think the chapters are fairly good about being even with their time. You’re prolific. Are you really spitting out this much in three days? Because if so, that’s incredible. I mean, really, really exceptional. Thanks for writing this, it’s a great read, and I can’t wait to see more of it.
more sharmeeeeeen!!! pleasee!!..excellent chap, so glad angie’s ok, hope you post soon
Thank goodness Angelica is safe. I’m glad Boden was there. Um, not too excited about Jodi showing up in this story :). Can’t wait for the celebration…hope everyone gets a little ‘private celebration’ time :wink:. You’ve really spoiled us this last week Portia. Thanks for this wonderful fic and don’t be gone too long :)
Nice way to weave Jodi and Big Bear into the story – and loved that Bette denied ‘gush’ing. Great stuff, Portia.
Bette better mess up of jodi!! yeah for angie being okay… now it’s time for the port-kennards to get on with their lives. tina needs to finish her rehab.i wonder what else steph. did what else is she hiding??? great update!!:)
Ahhhh… I can breathe now. That was tense, but Baby A is safe, finally! I’m so glad there was a third person there and Boden clocked that whining maggot Josh. Although, I think Bette would have ripped him apart eventually anyway. Hels is leaving, which is a shame, but her heart’s somewhere else… So! Ol’ Steph’s about to get her comeuppance, big time. I hope Peter gets his money back, as well as his furniture. I’m dreading the stuff coming out that was on that list of hers. Girl needs help, if she can survive prison. This was so good, I can’t wait for the next post. thanks Portia.
glad angie is ok…can’t wait for shane to get home and face the wrath of carmen…things need to change