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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 26C
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She heard Carmen’s car start up and kept kissing Alice. “I love you, Al,” she said softly.
“I love you, too, Ms. Fairbanks.”
Dana nuzzled her neck. “I’m pretty sure they’re gone.”
“Yeah? Who?” Alice asked breathlessly.
“Carmen and Tina.”
“That’s nice for them,” she said before plunging her tongue down Dana’s throat.
Dana was rubbing Alice’s back and she was becoming far more aroused than she’d like in front of these three guys. “Honey, we’ve gotta stop.”
“Why?”
“Because we’re being watched.”
“We’re creating a distraction,” Alice reasoned.
“We don’t need to any more.”
“But I want to.”
“I don’t like being watched like this.”
Alice pulled back and stared into Dana’s eyes. “No one kisses like you. You know that, right?”
“I know someone,” Dana said. “You.”
They began kissing again. By the time they stopped, Dana and Alice were weak-kneed and Carmen was pulling up to the Center’s front doors.
* * * * *
Helena was on her way back to Malibu. She was scanning through her Sirius Radio stations and stopped at Channel 90. She was in the mood for a little Latino spice. Her Spanish was excellent (as were her French and Italian) and she understood what Jennifer Lopez and Mark Anthony sang. The words rang true. That’s what she was seeking with Dylan. She listened to the words and thought of Dylan and wondered if Dylan was thinking of her at that moment while taking in the sun. Did Dylan’s mind drift repeatedly to Helena during her long flight or when she climbed the hills where she had disembarked? Was Dylan thinking of her the way Helena’s thoughts stayed on her? In the car, Helena thought about the last few months. Six months ago, she’d never heard of the woman, perhaps would have walked past her on the street. Dylan had been a stranger and now she was the love of her life. She had walked into Helena’s controlled, proper world and turned it on its ear. The only thing she wanted right now was to be with Dylan, to take away her fears. She turned up the radio and listened to the Spanish, translating it into English in her head.
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i am once again left speechless at your incredible ability to weave a tale. i actually yelped in excitement when Angie was safe but at the same time, believe it or not, felt somewhat sorry for Josh. only your writing could evoke that somewhat schizophrenic sympathy.I’m also a bit worried at the introduction of Jodi into the story but hope that after all that we’ve been through with Bette and Tina to date, she will not pose a threat to their relationship.as for all of the other characters and their stories, i am finding them entertaining and interesting as well which is not usually the case when reading as i’m pretty much just a Tina/Bette fan. this again, is testimony to your ability to ability to entertain.thanks again for the story and the time and effort that must be involved. looking forward as always to reading more.
WOW. you put so much into this everyone was weitten about. Could have done without Jodie tho. thanks
I’ve spent the past two days reading the whole thing, and honestly? It’s great. Really, really great. The characters are well written and adhere to canon, your reweaving of the events of Season 3 into this alternative version is not only really well done, but in my mind — preferable. As for the Jodi issue, if she’s like every other non-core character in your work (herself, but changed), I’ll be very happy to see where that goes. I do wonder, though, moments after Bette is reunited with Tina and her baby for the first time in weeks, she wanders off to talk to Jodi? That seems a little… I don’t know, inhuman? But, hey, if that’s my only complaint in 26 chapters, consider it an amazing feat. I’m a huge Danish fan, and I’m happy to see you keeping the love alive. Would love to see more of that relationship in your writing, but generally I think the chapters are fairly good about being even with their time. You’re prolific. Are you really spitting out this much in three days? Because if so, that’s incredible. I mean, really, really exceptional. Thanks for writing this, it’s a great read, and I can’t wait to see more of it.
more sharmeeeeeen!!! pleasee!!..excellent chap, so glad angie’s ok, hope you post soon
Thank goodness Angelica is safe. I’m glad Boden was there. Um, not too excited about Jodi showing up in this story :). Can’t wait for the celebration…hope everyone gets a little ‘private celebration’ time :wink:. You’ve really spoiled us this last week Portia. Thanks for this wonderful fic and don’t be gone too long :)
Nice way to weave Jodi and Big Bear into the story – and loved that Bette denied ‘gush’ing. Great stuff, Portia.
Bette better mess up of jodi!! yeah for angie being okay… now it’s time for the port-kennards to get on with their lives. tina needs to finish her rehab.i wonder what else steph. did what else is she hiding??? great update!!:)
Ahhhh… I can breathe now. That was tense, but Baby A is safe, finally! I’m so glad there was a third person there and Boden clocked that whining maggot Josh. Although, I think Bette would have ripped him apart eventually anyway. Hels is leaving, which is a shame, but her heart’s somewhere else… So! Ol’ Steph’s about to get her comeuppance, big time. I hope Peter gets his money back, as well as his furniture. I’m dreading the stuff coming out that was on that list of hers. Girl needs help, if she can survive prison. This was so good, I can’t wait for the next post. thanks Portia.
glad angie is ok…can’t wait for shane to get home and face the wrath of carmen…things need to change