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    Just The Girl – Chapter Forty Eight Part Two (a HYD-inspired fic)

    Story written on October 1, 2008 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=71155
    Author Notes:

    We both lit the match that burned the bridge down.. part two..

     

    “Thank you.” Bette smiled in relief and happiness. “Rest up daddy.” She commanded, seeing that he was beginning to wince a little as he felt some discomfort in his chest. The emotional stress of her visit was taking its toll. Expecting Melvin’s stubborn streak to put up a fight, Bette took it upon herself to press the morphine drip by the bed. She grinned when Melvin’s eyes immediately shut after a few seconds. “Well that’s useful.” She smirked. If only she could use this on Alice sometimes.

     

    She sat down on the chair and watched – over her father and the promise of a future together.

     

    “I love you too Daddy. I’ll be right here.”

     

    —–

     

    Our common ground was broken long ago

    What slipped thru the cracks I fear we’ll never know

    I’ll walk you thru the graveyard of my mind

    Show you a love that I buried alive

     

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    “Do what?” I ask her.

     

    “You know what I want you to do.”

     

    “I do?”

     

    “Yes. So, are you gonna do it or not?”

     

    Pushy. You are so pushy. And you’re enjoying this.

     

    “I’m waiting..” She says in a sing-song voice, taunting me.

     

    “Fine.” I sigh in resignation. I don’t know how or why, but I think this girl has a powerful hold on me. She hasn’t asked me to jump off a cliff yet, and I’m silently praying that she wouldn’t. Cause there really is no saying what this girl can talk me into doing. “I’m.. sorry.” I managed to get out despite the huge lump on my throat. There. I said it. “Are you happy now?”

     

    “Very.” She gives me another one of her patented smiles and leans forward to place a gentle kiss on my lips. Once again, this one-of-a-kind woman renders me mute as I sit there slack-jawed and speechless. After weeks and weeks of dating without as much of a hug, let alone a kiss, she finally puts out on me now – in the middle of a busy highway, after a big fight. Yeah, this girl was special.

     

    “Let’s go.” I managed to say gruffly as I regain control of my vocal chords. She laughs that melodious laugh of hers as I ease my way into traffic once again. I lick my lips and fight the smile that was threatening to break my face into two. That was what I get for saying sorry? Maybe apologizing wasn’t that bad after all.

     

     

    tbc..

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    5. So glad that Melvin gave his blessing. Tina could win anyone over, though… Loving the story, and I can’t wait til you post again, Alchemy. T minus 11 or so days and counting… (Really, though, best of luck with your exam!) Thanks

    7. Just getting caught up on my reading & I read the last 2 updates. They were awesome, like always. I am still in love with your writing still-especially the humor. Great job!!!

    11. I knew that eventually that Melvin was going to see the similar traits between Maxine and Tina and of course himself and Bette. I am also glad that you let Melvin survive.

    12. Okay now the dad’s have to make up, that would be interesting. I can’t wait, but I will. Good luck on the test and study hard. We need to come up with some kind of drama, but no heart-attack-rendering-I-can’t-believe-she-would-do-that-shit, I wanna cry happiness not heart break. Love it, love it. Should you turn this story into a book, I would love to be the first on the waiting list to buy. Tah!

    13. The banters between B&T are tremendous. And truly enjoyed the poem too, you know. Alchemy, two weeks is too long for your next post.Promise you’ll post right after

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