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    Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Four (a HYD-inspired fic)

    Story written on January 13, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=72284
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    A little thing called eternity..

     

    She was at peace.

     

    And Bette felt elated and relieved. She spoke the truth – freed herself. And the best thing was, they were still together. Nevermind that she kept an important detail from the blonde. They would deal with that tomorrow. For now, they had tonight and each other.

     

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    Los Angeles, Present Time.

     

    Tina stirred.

     

    Somewhere outside, she could hear the sound of an engine purring. Of a car door closing. But she paid them no mind. Those were just normal sounds from the street.

     

    She succumbed back to a state of near sleep, allowing herself to regain lost strength. Her body ached all over, her muscles spasming due to the intense workout of the past night. Instinctively, she put an arm out to the other side of the bed. She frowned when she hit pillows instead of a warm body. Where’s-

     

    “Porter?” She sat up, rubbing her eyes free from sleep. Oh no, had she overslept again? “Por-” She stopped.

     

    Her lips curved into a smile when she saw a single sunflower on the empty pillow beside her. Bette, she thought fondly. Right beside the flower lay a black rectangular box and a folded piece of paper. Gingerly, she took the flower in her hands and brought it to her nose, inhaling its scent. She closed her eyes, remembering that lazy afternoon in the apartment when Bette told her all about flowers and the meanings behind them. In true Porter fashion, she gave her a pop quiz afterwards – and every right answer earned her a very pleasurable reward. Sunflowers, if she recalled correctly, were given to signify adoration. Opening her eyes, she discovered that she was right.

     

    To the woman whose body I would never tire of worshiping. Were the words written at the back of the letter in Bette’s neat script.

     

    She was about to reach for it when something caught her eye.

     

    Eternity.

     

    It was written in a simple script on the edge of the black box. The writing seemed familiar. She couldn’t remember when or where, but she had the strangest feeling that she saw it before.

     

    Driven by curiosity, she took hold of it first. Opening the box slowly, she gasped at the surprise that lay inside. It was a necklace. A silver heart-shaped pendant in a small delicate chain. The heart sparkled as she took it out of the box and examined it – rays from the sun that had entered the room through the parted curtain bounced off the many tiny diamonds that adorned the pendant.

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    2. wow that was a loooonnnnggg but fantastic chapter.how harsh is Bette just leaving for Yale like that!!!anyway,it will be a sad day when this story ends but yet i can’t wait til the end to find out what happens.PPS cheers

    3. There is so much that could happen, and you say the End is next…will they remain together or fall apart? I can finally read now that the tears have cleared, thanks for the post!!

    4. god how i love this story, every chapter is like a mini book! i’m not right stoked to read that the next will be the last though, i absolutely love how you write these two…especially bette! my only hope is that you keep them together and that you promise to carry on writing other stories…well????!

    5. What was Tina going to say to Bette on the beach? Will Tina be able to forgive Bette for not saying goodbye? Will Tina catch the next available flight out to Connecticut? I hope so… I can’t wait to see how you wrap everything up, but I’m really going to miss this story. Thanks for the chapter.

    8. This has/is an incredible story. I look for it daily and was so glad to see a post today. Please say it isn’t so, Your not ending it are you? Their still young and have slots to go through. A sequel maybe?.

    11. WOW!!!!! I just got a chance to read all 37 pages of it-it was a long one…but well worth it. I can understand why Bette went ahead & left-but Tina will be hurt…but I think she will understand. I hope they can work through this & I can’t wait for the next update. Great job.

    12. *Sniffle* Oh dear, this has got to be the saddest JTG chapter. *Sniffle* So begging on my knees didn’t work. *Sniffle* I don’t know how they’ll ever get to eternity when it’s hard to say they’ll even get to survive the next 24 hours, weeks or months apart. *Sniffle* I hope Tina will still change her mind but if not…then, *Thank you very much* for this lovely, funny, sometimes sexy high school TiBette tale. It’s been a great ride, Alchemy! *Crysmiles like Bette* Okay… I’m gonna go to a corner now and cry my heart out. Boohoo. :(

    17. Hey Alchemy! So glad to have you back with another chapter, but extremely sad that the end is coming. I have loved this story from the beginning as your writing is incredible. I have the feeling Tina had decided to go with Bette, but will maybe stick to their plan now that Bette has left. Bette’s letter had me teary-eyed which is one of the best things about your writing… one minute I’m laughing out loud, the next I’m choked up. Thanks for the post.

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