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“Bette?”
Taking in a crucial breath, Bette tried not to seem so surprised as she turned and fixed her stare on Tina. She just looked at her.
“What? You look like you’ve seen a ghost.”
Breathlessly, she answered. “Sorry … I … I’m sorry.”
“No, you’re not the one who should be sorry,” Tina started, stepping closer. “Bette, this whole thing is because I didn’t have my priorities straight, and I was so selfish it hurts me just to think-”
The kiss was as unpredictable as it was desperate. Bette had stepped in and grabbed her so quickly that the pressure on Tina’s nose against her cheek was causing discomfort. Still, neither could detach.
“I’m sorry …” Tina panted, pulling away from the kiss only to have Bette’s lips busy themselves down her neck. “I’m sorry that I pushed you away so often … I know I said no too much …”
“Oh god,” Bette moaned, feasting on the words she’d longed to hear – and they were all spoken at once. She pulled back to rest her head on Tina’s shoulder, and it felt strangely comforting. She’d never done it like that before.
“I didn’t mean no, Bette. I didn’t mean to hurt you. It just felt so right that I didn’t even think till it was too late. And then all I could think of was you …” She held Bette as closely as she could, even as unfamiliar as it was to have Bette leaning on her. It was always the other way around. She put her hand over the back of Bette’s head, smiling at the tangled mess of hair that always promised to brush against her cheek, or tickle her chest. “I’m just sorry it took me so long to understand. And I’m not even sure that I do. I don’t know what this is, but I love you. This can’t all just be love … I feel like it’s more.”
Bette picked her head up and quickly shoved her hands in her pockets to keep any tears in place. Be strong she kept repeating to herself. “T … that’s amazing. I can’t believe how you talk about it. You do it so well, and I’d just mess up all the words.”
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Thanks for the update GR :-) … A bit sad to know this is gonna end soon.. I wonder where are you going to take us with this wonderful story. The way you describe their emotion is so full of details and its captivating! The way Bette struggle within is so emotional. And I just glad that finally they are together and more open to each other.. :-) looking forward to your next posting! Thanks again GR! ;-)
I agree this chapter of the story does effectively describe the emotional states of the characters. I notice that Tina has apologized to Bette by admitting her selfishness. She uses the excuse that her loss of priority caused the pain and anguish which occurred in their relationship. What loss priority was she referring to? Was she referring to her marital commitment as being the priority she lost? If so this brings me back to my initial question .Why, did she decide to have the affair? Alternatively, is she referring to her selfishness of not fulfilling Bette’s sexual and emotional needs as loss of her priority? If so, she is confused. Making that her priority will be impossible to accomplish while she is still married to Greg. It is not wised to start a sexual relationship while committed to another particularly a spiritual commitment such as marriage. I also want to believe that Bette owes Tina an apology as well. However, I would need to have this additional question answered before I can accurately draw a conclusion. Did Bette know that Tina was married prior to sexually touching her? If so she absolutely does. Do your thing GrindRight!
very brilliant update i looovvvveeee your story thanks post soon!!!!!
Very different than your other stories but just as good, you write the emotion well
At first I thought you were going to reprimand me for calling you “the onion girl”. I was like “oh god not in front of everyone ”. It’s all good to me, I just didn’t want to offend you. Your Bette is a great combo of cute and sexy. Like a Teddy bear in lingerie ok, no more analogies. Thanks OGR
Another brilliant update and thanks for posting it today. Love it was so well written. Thank you again.
I love your attention to detail you describe the little things that aren’t usually described I like that. And yes this is way different than your other stories, but I like all of your stories so it doesn’t matter to me just keep writing! Lol
Love this story and so happy they have found each other, that they love each other and the great possibility that they can be a couple is just fantastic. Thanks for writing this story and I am enjoying their new found love. Thanks again.
I love how you detail all of the emotions they are experiencing. Hate to see it end because it feels like it just started. PPS
Splendid writing… Sexy, intense and emotional just the way i like it.. I just feel a little sad b/c this story will soon end…can’t wait 4 the next one:-)
As is often the case with your chapters, this was freaking amazing! I felt the emotion as I read it. I’m glad Tina finally admitted she loves Bette.
I love all of your stories.Thank you very much.What about some more chapters?
I’ve read this chapter 2 times and tried half an hour to think about something to say about it… I give up, I’ll repeat myself and tell you once more what an interesting journey have you taken us on with this story. Great chapter, great story :) Have a great day and thank you for writing it! :D
That was great and glad they talk and let them talk more and tell each other how they really feel. Please post more, thanks!