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“Don’t say that,” Tina smiled, watching Bette’s body language with a knowing expression. To anyone else, Bette may have looked calm, but Tina knew just how self conscious and nervous she truly was. “I’m just glad that I could say all of it to you. For once. I mean, I’m so sorry that I had to hurt so many people to get where I am, but with you … I feel this peace that I couldn’t even imagine without you.”
“You’ve gotta stop talking or I’m gonna fall all over myself about it.”
“You always tell me to stop talking.”
Bette laughed and was glad that she’d been able to keep herself calm. The last thing she wanted was to look back to this moment and feel embarrassed. “T … I seriously can’t even tell you how happy I am right now, and to hear that you know how I feel. Fuck – I’ve got no idea how you do that – but it’s right.”
Tina took a flirtatious step back as Bette pursued.
“You’ve gotta say yes at least one time with me. I need to see how much you want me. Me.”
With understanding, Tina stopped up against the wall, and looked Bette straight in the eye. “I want to, but … I’m scared everything will be different between us.”
“Oh I’ll never quit throwing you around,” Bette teased, gathering her usual swagger back into her hips. Her attitude was back on the rise. “Don’t worry.”
“When you talk to me like that …” Tina was wet with anticipation.
“I know.”
“What’s it gonna be like?” Tina asked, uncertain of the new balance between them. It was exciting, new and terrifying all at once.
“Always wanting to know before you try it,” Bette smiled, softly capturing Tina’s lips to test the ever-present chemistry between them. It was as lively as ever. “Mmm … you’ve gotta stop kissing like that – it makes me crazy.”
“Like what?” Tina smirked, flattening both of her palms against the wall, down at her sides. Her heart was racing while Bette leaned closer.
“Like you don’t know how.”
Tina chuckled, only stopping when Bette’s hand reached down to her knee. Bette watched Tina closely.
“Tell me what I wanna hear.”
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Thanks for the update GR :-) … A bit sad to know this is gonna end soon.. I wonder where are you going to take us with this wonderful story. The way you describe their emotion is so full of details and its captivating! The way Bette struggle within is so emotional. And I just glad that finally they are together and more open to each other.. :-) looking forward to your next posting! Thanks again GR! ;-)
I agree this chapter of the story does effectively describe the emotional states of the characters. I notice that Tina has apologized to Bette by admitting her selfishness. She uses the excuse that her loss of priority caused the pain and anguish which occurred in their relationship. What loss priority was she referring to? Was she referring to her marital commitment as being the priority she lost? If so this brings me back to my initial question .Why, did she decide to have the affair? Alternatively, is she referring to her selfishness of not fulfilling Bette’s sexual and emotional needs as loss of her priority? If so, she is confused. Making that her priority will be impossible to accomplish while she is still married to Greg. It is not wised to start a sexual relationship while committed to another particularly a spiritual commitment such as marriage. I also want to believe that Bette owes Tina an apology as well. However, I would need to have this additional question answered before I can accurately draw a conclusion. Did Bette know that Tina was married prior to sexually touching her? If so she absolutely does. Do your thing GrindRight!
very brilliant update i looovvvveeee your story thanks post soon!!!!!
Very different than your other stories but just as good, you write the emotion well
At first I thought you were going to reprimand me for calling you “the onion girl”. I was like “oh god not in front of everyone ”. It’s all good to me, I just didn’t want to offend you. Your Bette is a great combo of cute and sexy. Like a Teddy bear in lingerie ok, no more analogies. Thanks OGR
Another brilliant update and thanks for posting it today. Love it was so well written. Thank you again.
I love your attention to detail you describe the little things that aren’t usually described I like that. And yes this is way different than your other stories, but I like all of your stories so it doesn’t matter to me just keep writing! Lol
Love this story and so happy they have found each other, that they love each other and the great possibility that they can be a couple is just fantastic. Thanks for writing this story and I am enjoying their new found love. Thanks again.
I love how you detail all of the emotions they are experiencing. Hate to see it end because it feels like it just started. PPS
Splendid writing… Sexy, intense and emotional just the way i like it.. I just feel a little sad b/c this story will soon end…can’t wait 4 the next one:-)
As is often the case with your chapters, this was freaking amazing! I felt the emotion as I read it. I’m glad Tina finally admitted she loves Bette.
I love all of your stories.Thank you very much.What about some more chapters?
I’ve read this chapter 2 times and tried half an hour to think about something to say about it… I give up, I’ll repeat myself and tell you once more what an interesting journey have you taken us on with this story. Great chapter, great story :) Have a great day and thank you for writing it! :D
That was great and glad they talk and let them talk more and tell each other how they really feel. Please post more, thanks!