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Eternally yours: when a lifetime is not enough # 15
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The blonde laughed at the end of that memory while she rested her body on the grass, “You know you’re a bad girl!” The dog barked to her sentence.
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Tina watched the branches of the big tree. Leaking between the branches: the blued sky.
She breathed filling her lungs slowly and completely. For the first time in two whole weeks, the executive relaxed. No more Elizabette. No more work. No more Meltic. No more Elizabette.
Elizabette.
Elizabette was there, but Tina had learned to live with the thought, mainly because she was impotent, weak when confronted with her image.
The blonde was almost sleeping, with her arm working as a pillow, lullaby with peacefulness of the afternoon when Sally warned her about the invasion.
Its cold muzzle pushed her skin.
“Oh…Hello, boy… How are you doing?”
The blonde´s dog got excited with the visitor and as soon as the dog found a mate, Sally forgot about Tina. The producer watched the weird duple: the small dog and the elegant pharaoh round running and playing.
Minutes later, the producer had already forgotten the dogs and their sounds are a far while the skies filled her eyes with blue and the breeze whispered in her ears. She couldn’t resist sleeping.
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“Sally?”
The blonde awoke confuse.
“Sally?”
The absence of answer made her worried.
“Shit…” She told herself while she stood up.
“”Sally, girl! Come here!”
Tina moved away and leaved the peaceful place behind.
“Sally…Sally…”
When she gained the view to a larger area of the park, Tina could watch her dog with its feet on the chest of, what the blonde could only nominate as a victim of its attack.
“Sally!!” The producer began to run down hill while she heard Sally’s bark inside the restraining muzzle appliance.
“Sally Stop!! Stop right now!” But the dog ignored her.
“Sa…”
It hit her and she stopped running. Tina told herself that someone was in dangerous and she must stop her dog but her feet didn’t respond anymore.
Her eyes had murmured a view to her memory.
“No…” She whispered as an answer to her own eyes and tried to run once more, but the more she tried, the more her senses short circuited.
“It’s impossible…”
Both dogs were jumping and running near a woman.
A woman.
A mocha woman.
A curled haired mocha woman.
When she was ten steps away, those eyes finally mirrored Tina and her mouth once more gained life. “I just can’t believe…”
The supernova smile.
“It’s so good to see you again, Tina…”
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Finally they met for the 2nd time! :) But where’s Meltic? Did he and Tina split?
Oh Braz, I loved the ending…..and we all know that the animals/pets know when people are mean,good,happy sad and all the emotions we carry upon us. Sally knew that Meltic was a bad spirit in that body of his. How many days before Meltic comes back?
NO LET MELTIC DISSAPPEAR OR SOMETHING…bring the lovers 2gether.
OMG! Sally is Bette’s former dog isn’t she? The one that bit Meltic after he shot the arrow that eventually killed Bette!!! Am I right? No wonder the dog hates him and pees all over his worthless belongings. Go Sally Go — and I mean that literally! Braz, I just don’t know how I grow to love this story more with each and every chapter. Yes, I do – it’s your fantastic story telling ability. Thank you for posting again so soon but I have to say, this chapter didn’t meet my need for sufficient Bette and Tina interaction – now I simply must have more!!! And soon please!!! I’m with Rau – let Meltic’s plane crash… and please give our lover’s another chance to ummmm….connect!
Hello My most beautiful Poetess… your words melt within my soul and transform the language of love and loss within me… you reinvent the meaning of creating stories and passion… and love and words… you inspire me completely to reach further within myself to pull out all of my passion… all of my love and just fuse them with the words as they pour out of my soul onto the page. You are so very brilliant and special to share words with… to involve and experience… I am sorry I have been absent recently but rest assured I consume your words with restless abandon… mucho love and hugs my eternal poet, JC Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels…
i also think sally is bette’s former dog… no wonder sally hates meltic. meltic went away for a how many days?? lets keep him away longer please,lol..:)PPS
Hi, Braz! *waving* Thanks for your kind words! We miss you, too! As for the story, you are keeping the right pace, sweetie. You have to unveil all those special details that have been part of their bond in former lives. That is the only way to make Tina comprehend the trascendental role that Bette has been as her soulmate. As for Meltic, hope he stays away for a while, to give time for Bette to solidify their union and find out what is the stone that was placed to avoid their union and that needs to be removed, so they may come back to each other. This story is amazing, Braz. Our fav, as you so know. Keep telling us how everything fits in this lifetime. How fate and and destiny play an important role. PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Latin Salsa Aunties)
Awesome they meet again, let them be talk. Hope you will kill meltic soon or take him out of the pics soon please. Please post more, thanks!