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Coming up for air – part forty three
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Bette pulled back from Tina.
“No, please don’t go Bette…. I’m not really mad at you about this… I’m mad at myself for not taking care of this long ago…” Tina said and tried to take Bette’s hand.
Bette stopped her movement but still left a few feet of air between herself and Tina.
“I think… maybe you should be mad at me about this,” Bette reluctantly said.
“Why is that?” Tina said with a frown.
Bette thought for a little while, biting her lip in distress.
“… I think part of me liked that everything was in my name… I liked the control of it…” Bette said remorsefully, like she was sharing a dark secret.
Tina looked at Bette’s shameful face, and let out a little laugh. “No shit, Bette!”
“You knew that?”
“Yes, I know you, Bette…. I know you like being in control… and part of me liked handing over that control and responsibility to you. But I shouldn’t have…”
“Yeah?”
“Yes. But Bette… just as much as you thrived on having all the control… it also ended up hurting you. You stopped sharing things with me… you stopped letting me in on the decisions… and the responsibility was bringing you down…. I could tell… but I couldn’t seem to act on that knowledge. I’m sorry for that….”
“We should have realized it wasn’t healthy for us to live with that kind of disproportion…”
“Yeah, we should have… but Bette this is now… and we’re correcting our errors now, right?”
“Right…” Bette said halfheartedly.
“Come here…” Tina smiled and pulled at Bette’s arm.
Bette cuddled up close to Tina’s still naked body. Tina loosened the belt around Bette’s robe and let her left leg find in between Bette’s.
“Are you okay….?” Tina whispered into Bette’s hair after a while of just lying close wrapped around each other.
“Mmmmmm….” Bette mumbled.
“Good….” Tina smiled against Bette cheek.
“Can I ask you something?” Bette asked still glued to Tina’s neck.
“Anything….”
“The way we made love before…”
“…yeah…?” Tina said as if she had no idea what Bette was referring to.
Bette pulled back a little to look down at Tina.
“T? You absolutely know what I’m talking about….” Bette smiled.
“I just needed to be close to you…”
“I know… and I loved it….” Bette said and gave Tina a peck on the lips, “but there’s more to it than that….”
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How sweet, tender and loving is that?? Thank you so much for this wonderful story, it really touches my heart and soul!
Ahhhhhh… *swoon*
That was very adorable. I love when they are loving.. I can’t wait for some baby making. Maybe on their trip? That would be very romantic. Glad they talked through the past.. its really important. So glad your characters learn from their mistakes. IC, are you listening? PPS.
This was incredibly warm, saucy, loving, and all I can tell you is welcome back!! It’s good to take a break sometimes for sure, but never stay away for too long. This is a great story that hits a homerun in terms of tender, loving moments between two loving women. Thanks Anker!
I thought I was seeing things when I first saw that our wayward anker had posted. LOL!! But of course another great and romantic chapter. Loved the B&T togetherness. Still waiting somewhat patiently to hear from a certain friend. Just a little tidbit about whats up to tide you over….I am going to my first pride celebration tomorrow with a group of women that I have met over the last month. Will give you more details in my next email. Just wanted to let you know I am doing alot better. Oh and please try to post the next chapter…which I assume should be a NC-17 “wink” “wink”….a little sooner than you did this one. LOL!!
Good to see you post, Anker. I always go back and read the previous post before I read the new one. What a difference in tone! The last one was so much more deep and questioning while this one B & T seem so secure in their love for each other. Loved the scene after Tina’s workout. Could really visulaize that happening. Also had to laugh when T said, “No shit, Bette!” Bette is sometimes so clueless about how much Tina really “gets it!” I’d like to see them in a few more back together readjustment scenes, but it looks like we’re moving right to insemination. I always smile when I see a post from you whether they’re weeks or days(?) apart! Looking foorard to more…..thanks for writing!
Hey there, I’ll go back to read in a minute but yeah I did intend a PM, something about something seriously work related e.g. social work in Denmark but it just escapes me for the moment; it will come back. I’m on 1st day of holidays so just laxing out catching up with reading then might write a little something….just had to say all that b4 I forget cuz once I get into the story all else disappears…aren’t u just great???!!! lol… brb
sweet extra sweet…u write them wonderfully, I can see the whole scenario…its great that u found time to post…trust u will follow up soon becuz I so need to know what happens with the donors and Aspen of course…and NO teasing…
That was probably one of the best 5 hour spans ever. And it wasn’t long-winded, if anything, it was nearly too short (for me that is, cos I missed the story. A *lot*. Stop disappearing on me!)! This chapter was just so… well, *nice*. I’m sure there’s a better word, but I can’t think of one right now. The vulnerability, the decision about the donor… Cuteness and sensuality abound with these two and it’s such a delightfully heady mix. It’s gotten me feeling all warm and fuzzy and a bit blissed out. You could bottle this and sell it, it’s way better than champagne. Thank you for posting (don’t stay away so long next time, or else I might have to resort to desperate action… hopefully, we’ll never have to find out what that is ;) ), I loved the chapter (I’m still blissed), and post soon, anker. Cheers
loved it, very sweet and fun.
Forty-three chapters and still looking for more… love the story!
So great to see this update. Can’t wait for more. Soon I hope.
I love their playfulness and their seriousness also. They are growing closer and trusting theirselves and each other. They would make wonderful mothers and I hope that Charlie and Jeremy ment what they said.
I can’t remember if I have ever commented on this story or not, but it’s one of my all time favorites. Thanks!! Can’t wait for more.
Anker, That was so warm and loving thank you so much. Great Update!!!!
GULP – and I’m not even finished yet…you are killing me here!!!
Oh fuck!!!….more gulp…..
Thankfully I was alone in the office for the first part of this. Awesome as usual. YOu gotta love these two. Its like when you look at the scenes of them over the last 4 yrs. B&T together it does fit.
anker–I love how you portray the intimacy between these two ladies–your story is awesome!
Amazing….fantastic…WOW…it was even better the second time around!! Your words are so powerful and I can literally feel B&T’s love for each other in every word…you are amazing sveske :o)) And I love when you melt *ahem* LOL. xo
Perfect anker…just completely perfect! Thank you so much!
That was awsome, they are sweet and cute and funny, love them. This is so good and can’t wait to see more, please post soon, thanks!
Just what the doctor ordered – loved this B&T…PPS
Glad to see you back. That was just brilliant. Thanks anker!
Still here enjoying your amazing story. Thanks a bunch for posting.
Now that I’m off the injured list due to your previous postings I can say that I love the way this story is developing. I’ll be waiting for the next post, with a helmet on! I’m practicing “safe sex”.
Hia babe, Wow that was so loving and caring. The depth of your story truly amazes me everytime I read a chappy. I’m so glad you let me know you posted! As you know my time is being occupied by a really awesome woman!You will always be my sweet camote and friend for life! I can’t wait for our talk, seems way to long of a wait for my taste.I hope you continue to post this great story more frequently and just let me know when you post…K…Know one is quite like you Anker and I miss you too! xoxo