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Coming up for air – part forty four
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Coming up for air – part forty four
“Just try to get up, baby…” Tina said, biting her lip not to laugh.
“How the hell do you want me to do that….? My skis don’t work….” Bette spat from her position helplessly fallen over, legs and arms, skis and poles all in a mess.
“I’ll help you, baby… just sit up a little and I’ll pull you up….” Tina giggled.
“I thought the guy said these are state of the art skis… I told him I want nothing but the best… and he gets me these crap boards…” Bette scuffled.
“Bette… lighten up… it’s the first day… you’ll get the hang of it…” Tina smiled down at Bette.
Tina’s patience and obvious amusement only made Bette’s annoyance rise inside her. She looked up at Tina with clenched jaw. “It’s the skis, T!”
“Mmmm… sure it’s the skis, baby…” Tina laughed.
Bette desperately tried to untangle her legs, but the movement only made her slide further down the slope towards Tina who was standing there confident in her abilities as an experienced skier. She was in perfect balance standing with her back to the steep slope. Bette stubbornly refused to take Tina’s outstretched hands. She gave it one last try, fighting to get up without looking too clumsy. But it was no good. Bette surrendered and fell back in the snow.
“You’re giving up?” Tina asked with raised eyebrows, knowing Bette’s competitive nature was the only thing that would make her get up.
Bette was staring up into the perfect blue sky, trying to rid herself from the anger and disappointment of her lack of abilities.
“Well, if you’re not gonna come up here… I might as well come down to you…” Tina said with a devilish smile before she let herself fall down on top of Bette.
Bette battled with herself. Her pride usually kept her from humiliating herself like she had over the past four hours. She in no way expected to be bad at skiing, and Tina’s ease only made Bette feel worse. At the same time Bette berated herself for letting her bad mood cloud the first day of their vacation in Aspen.
“Bette… baby…. lighten up will you…” Tina laughed down at Bette.
Bette still stared up at the sky, refusing to look at Tina. Tina put her hands to Bette’s sides, making Bette squirm beneath her.
“Give me that famous Porter smile….” Tina continued with hands crawling up under Bette’s white jacket.
“T…” Bette meekly protested.
“Yes, my sweet…”
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Hey you…your back!**smiling** You have been missed and I will be sad when this story finally wraps up.**pouting** I enjoy the way you write this couple and I always look forward to your post. Hopefully, you’ll post a new story ? Because you don’t want me to pm you constantly until you do. Do you? LOL! Anyways… I’m so like Bette when it comes to skiing. Can’t quite get the balance thing right and then there is that stubborn, competitive streak in me…but we can talk about that later.**wink** I love looking out over the view of snow covered mountains. It’s so peaceful and beautiful. Speaking of beautiful…**smooth, huh?**Your bath scene was beautifully written. It was beyond beautifully written…it was hot and wet! And we all know that nobody writes hot and wet better than you! LOL!**are you blushing?*** You and your very creative mind always manage to write some of the best erotic stories on this site. Now, about that bear skin rug….hmmm…Any thoughts? LOL! Ciao.
that was hottttttttttttttttt bette will have the skiing thing down in no time
Gotta admit it would be pretty funny to see Bette falling on her ass trying to ski. I’m pretty athletic and thats what happened to me, so I opted for the lodge, alchol, and another kind of fun. Wouldn’t mind soaking in a hot tub wiht either one of them.
THAT was GooD! Very good. My wounds have healed nicely Thank you….but I’m feeling a bit diz….THUMP!
Anker, That was so cute and HOT!!! The bear rug next please. I know they will have fun on it. They are so soft and feel like slik. Thanks PPS
Crap boards…LMAO! I know how Bette feels, been there, done that. Such a great chapter. I love their loving. PPS!!
Well…Well…Well!! What can I say but thank you so ever much for that HOT tub scene. When I came home for lunch I saw that you had posted, but knowing your NC-17’s I knew better than to read it then. So after getting home after a fun filled evening with the women at the alley I just had to read this chapter. So now I can go to bed with a big smile on my face and…well just let your imagination figure out the rest. LMAO!! If I ask real nicely again might we get another NC-17 chapter before you go on your vacation?(making a begging puppy dog face) Anker, it is I who should be thanking you for your friendship my dear friend. You shared in my joy when things were going so good and when they fell apart you where there to listen and pick me up. To me that is the true definition of the word “friend”.
I felt like I was sliding down the slope like Bette and then sitting in the tub in the hot water. I love your writings. I feel like I am in the same room watching what they are doing.
Hows my sweet camote on this lovely day?All I can say is DAMN that was hot babe! I might have to try that this winter or sooner! Thanks for keeping me posted on this gem of a story. I always enjoy it, although I had to read it while she is in the shower! LMAO! I can’t wait for our convo and I miss you… my friend xoxo
OMG you had me LAUGHING MY BUTT off in the beginning with Bette and the whole skiing problem, and then you just melted the snow with that HOT HOT HOT NC17 scene. You are a talented writer who has an incredible ability to provide a balance in your storyline between humor, love, drama, and some pretty sultry moments. Bring it on, and whenever you can post it is greatly appreciated. Thanks Anker!
Jeezoh, lass! Whit’re ye spaekin aboot, anker, endin’ the story? Ye cannae end it, even if Tina does get up the duff, ken. Wir Bette cannae dae somethin’ as easy as skiin’, kept fallin’ on her erse? Naw, that cannae be right…Bette’s pure dead brilliant, she disnae hae any faults, skiin’ should be a dawdle, ken. As for the ridin’ in the bath, that wis pure barry, man. Ye’ll huv tae post soon, anker. Like the noo, pal. Cheers! *(First yin tae translate this gets 50 bonus points, ken.)
ummm…..What happens in Aspen stays in Aspen???
Good chapter. Bette’s skiing is funny, good to see they have funny and happy, damn they’re hot and sweet, love them. Please post more, thanks!
I love the idea of Bette and Tina making love in the cold weather. I hope they end up making love in the bearskin rug too, that would be so hot!! PPS!
First…YEEEHAAAA (no thanks to you!!!) LMPO
Hia like some others I see, when I saw your post, I thought I’ll leave that to when I can just lax back and go with u on this loving sensuous journey. You make them so alive, so real, humorous; I can see the images of their interactions; great stuff…yes, the bear rug sounds mmmmmmmmm!!! (oops are there any conservationsits around to berate us for our non-pc thoughts???? but I mean it’s there, no point pretending its not there to be enjoyed…I can’t actually see an end-point for this story…maybe u’ll just have to close with a ‘end of part 1’ and later come back to us with the baby tales etc??? (lol…I live in hope) Its just that you have weaved magic with this couple and I (pouting) don’t want to lose them…great stuff as always…u going on holiday? Good for you. Have fun, have a rest…arohanui.
Good to see you, Anker! Every now and again, you bring us something that subtlely reminds us of the difference in the worlds of B & T. “It’s a classic…not a cliche, Babe.” Loved it! Also liked the skew of balance as Tina excels at a physical activity that proves challenging for Bette. That Bette realized Tina was finally getting her vacation was cute, but the endearing part was that she didn’t book a morning flight to the islands for the rest of the trip! Enjoy your summer, and write when you can. Thank you!
Thanks for the Author note sweetie…made me LMPO, as always. So you want a purple Fidimus next time…hmmm maybe LOL. I don’t like less graphic sex scenes…I LOVE them!!! About this wonderful post…I really liked words like tipsy, whiny, baby and T….hmmm where have I heard those words before????? Another beautiful and amazing post, you keep getting better and better…I can’t find words to describe what your writing means/do to me!! xo
Hey Anker, Am now back to an even keel after mvoing house. Major work but getting there. AS for this delightful drama. I adore it. There is such a sense of playfulness between Bette and Tina. Now this is just the type of scene I would love to be played out on screen. Many Thanks for showing the marvel that Bette and Tina can be. Your Loyal Fan.
Love this story. Looking forward to the baby making.. its such an adorable story. Really romantic. Plus, I totally dig how Bette is actually reflecting on things that she previously did wrong..and trying to improve on them. Learning and growing as a character. PPS.
Oooh just perfect!
Bette doesn’t know what she has been missing with the whole “winter sports” thing! The best part is cuddling inside getting warm with no place to go or the ability to do so! PPS
Bette doesn’t know what she has been missing with the whole “winter sports” thing! The best part is cuddling inside getting warm with no place to go or the ability to do so! PPS