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Choose Your Own Dana and Alice Adventure: And Interactive Story (Part 3)
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“Yeah, so how are you?”
Lara shifted from one foot to the other, thoroughly uncomfortable. “I’m good. Still working. In fact I better get back to that.”
“Yeah,” Dana replied, “I should get out to the court.”
Lara left the locker room and Dana returned to her seat on the bench. She pulled at the collar of her shirt and bit her lip in concentration. Alice was going to be here in an hour and she wanted to get some more practice in on her serve before the big talk. Plus hitting balls really hard usually made her feel better.
Alice pulled into the Los Angeles Tennis Club and parked in the fifth row. As she walked to the entrance she noticed Dana’s car in it’s reserved spot in the first row. Sighing she proceeded inside and went directly to the bar. She had thirty minutes until she was supposed to meet Dana, so she sat down and waited for the bartender to come over to stare at her expectantly. He obviously knew she wasn’t a member.
“Can I help you?”
Alice rolled her eyes unimpressed, “Yeah, do you know what goes in a Liquid Heroin?”
“Of course, miss,” Came the droll reply.
“Good then can you get me two of those and a beer. Something darker than this room?” She gazed around the bar gesturing at the dark wood everywhere.
“Yes, miss.”
Alice looked out the large window at the back of the bar. It overlooked center court. She walked over to look out into the seats and onto the hard surface. While she was engrossed in her mission of looking at the opulentness of the court a man approached her.
“Hello, and may I enquire after your name?”
Alice jumped and turned. In front of her she saw the stuffiest looking suit she had ever seen and in it was a man who didn’t look like he had ever smiled in his life.
“Yeah.. umm yes, I am Alice.. uh.. Pieszecki”
He let a tight smile slip into his face, “And are you a member here?”
She frowned, “No”
“I didn’t think so. You do know our policy, don’t you? We are a private club.”
Alice regained her wits, “I know. I am here for a meeting with Dana Fairbanks. She should have me down on some list somewhere or something.”
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Really enjoying your story – must be A
This one was awesome…I loved when Alice told Dana how drunk she was. You’re gonna kill me for saying this but we need another option…Dana wakes up to a feisty Al lol! Sorry the bouncing bears are making me say crazy things. I’m gonna go with C.
Can it be secret option D — Tina walks in with Tonya and finds them both asleep in bed!
or…… LOL! loving the tale. I vote C.
B) Dana falls asleep but wakes up in middle of the night to “talk” to Alice and still makes it home at a decent hour. Ha ha ha…
This story is so much fun reading. I say C. Tina’s gotta bump into Dana.
c sounds juicy :)
I’m thinking C – gotta be c – thanks for drunk alice!
Option C sounds like it would be a lot of fun.
C loving the story! post soon
C
Well I think its gotta be C
I’m loving it :)
c sounds the best, and maybe it would solve the whole tonya issue all at once.. ;)
b
I love this and I am going to go with everyone else and say c but I wish it would be just tina there to see her
I’m going for C! Thank you for drunk Alice and I agree with Nix, we need feisty Al!
i pick c!!! this was a great chapter. i applaud your drunken alice being able to have that conversation before passing out.
i noticed that you tried writing in different fonts… i don’t have a peference but on that last page or so, it got to be tiny in size… for the sake of my eyes, please post your next chapter with a larger sized fonts. cheers :)
I am glad everyone enjoyed this chapter. I was very bleary eyed when I wrote it so Alice and I had something in common. I was on the phone and came up with a super idea for choice C. I was going to go ahead and write it out since it looks like the majority is for C so far. lucia you are welcome for drunk Alice now that I go back and read it I think it could have been funnier but I really was keeping the fact that they were having a serious discussion in mind.
C, although i like mercury’s option of D
Foxy.. I have no idea how those different fonts happened! The whole thing was in the same font when I pasted it to the window. I apologize for any inconvience to your eyes! I promise that the next chapter will be in all one font! I have the first part of the next chapter done and am working on the next on right now. ;-)
I want to go with C but just Tina, leading up to A after that. I want Tina to be there and not as cool about it.
I thought she was a bit too cool after just having the Bette/Candy reveal. Of course she doesn’t care for the Ton Ton but there should be a little of – you guys are cheating.
What a great chapter- this is so much fun!!! My vote is somewhere between A and C. I think she needs to stay with Alice but it might be fun to have Tina, Tonya or both to walk in on them sleeping. Can’t wait till the next post.