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Choose Your Own Dana and Alice Adventure: And Interactive Story (Part 3)
“Alright, the club, what about ten?”
Dana was silent for a moment, contemplating her next action. “Ok,
“Four in the afternoon…thats fine.
“Tomorrow, Dana, tomorrow… bye.”
Dana murmured a bye and hung up. As she exited the bathroom, she gazed at Tonya sound asleep on the bed. Could she really marry Ton after what she had just experienced? That wasn’t an option. She had committed to doing this and she had to see it through. It was, like, the honorable thing to do or something. Plus, who said
What Dana woke up to, instead, was not pleasant at all. Twenty-eight minutes before her alarm was to go off, Dana was awoken by Tonya’s incessant gargling.
“Gwallawallawallawallawallawalla”
“TONYA!”
Tonya stuck her head out of the bathroom to find Dana with a pillow pulled over her head. “Mmmwhaishdit” Realizing that she was trying to talk with a mouth full of mouthwash, she ran back over to the sink and spit it out. “What is it honey?”
Dana, just glad that the mating call of the aardvark had ended, didn’t feel it was time to get into the gargling talk with Tonya. It would just end badly with her fianc pouting. She couldn’t handle any more guilty feelings today. She was already going to see Alice whom she had just kissed.
Suddenly, remembering what happened earlier that morning, Dana let out a very loud, “OH MY GOD”, then clamped her hand over her mouth so she couldn’t say the words that she could feel were going to follow those out of her mouth. She thought them instead. I kissed
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Really enjoying your story – must be A
This one was awesome…I loved when Alice told Dana how drunk she was. You’re gonna kill me for saying this but we need another option…Dana wakes up to a feisty Al lol! Sorry the bouncing bears are making me say crazy things. I’m gonna go with C.
Can it be secret option D — Tina walks in with Tonya and finds them both asleep in bed!
or…… LOL! loving the tale. I vote C.
B) Dana falls asleep but wakes up in middle of the night to “talk” to Alice and still makes it home at a decent hour. Ha ha ha…
This story is so much fun reading. I say C. Tina’s gotta bump into Dana.
c sounds juicy :)
I’m thinking C – gotta be c – thanks for drunk alice!
Option C sounds like it would be a lot of fun.
C loving the story! post soon
C
Well I think its gotta be C
I’m loving it :)
c sounds the best, and maybe it would solve the whole tonya issue all at once.. ;)
b
I love this and I am going to go with everyone else and say c but I wish it would be just tina there to see her
I’m going for C! Thank you for drunk Alice and I agree with Nix, we need feisty Al!
i pick c!!! this was a great chapter. i applaud your drunken alice being able to have that conversation before passing out.
i noticed that you tried writing in different fonts… i don’t have a peference but on that last page or so, it got to be tiny in size… for the sake of my eyes, please post your next chapter with a larger sized fonts. cheers :)
I am glad everyone enjoyed this chapter. I was very bleary eyed when I wrote it so Alice and I had something in common. I was on the phone and came up with a super idea for choice C. I was going to go ahead and write it out since it looks like the majority is for C so far. lucia you are welcome for drunk Alice now that I go back and read it I think it could have been funnier but I really was keeping the fact that they were having a serious discussion in mind.
C, although i like mercury’s option of D
Foxy.. I have no idea how those different fonts happened! The whole thing was in the same font when I pasted it to the window. I apologize for any inconvience to your eyes! I promise that the next chapter will be in all one font! I have the first part of the next chapter done and am working on the next on right now. ;-)
I want to go with C but just Tina, leading up to A after that. I want Tina to be there and not as cool about it.
I thought she was a bit too cool after just having the Bette/Candy reveal. Of course she doesn’t care for the Ton Ton but there should be a little of – you guys are cheating.
What a great chapter- this is so much fun!!! My vote is somewhere between A and C. I think she needs to stay with Alice but it might be fun to have Tina, Tonya or both to walk in on them sleeping. Can’t wait till the next post.