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Choose Your Own Dana and Alice Adventure: And Interactive Story (Part 3)
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“Yeah,”
Tina smiled and rubbed Alice’s hand, “You know we used to talk about you two getting together someday. I hope this all works out for the best. I really do, Alice. Someone needs to be happy.”
Alice sat up stock straight in surprise, “Waityou talked about me and Dana? Like, we who? As in you and Dana, or you and Shane.. or like..”
Tina’s smile turned into laughter upon seeing Alice freak out about the possibilities. “I was referring to Bette and me.” Tina’s face fell as she let her partner’s name slip out.
“Oh, T, I am so sorry, ” Alice leaned forward to hug Tina.
Dana sat in the locker room at the club thinking. She was thinking so hard she didn’t even notice that someone had come in. If the intruder hadn’t accidentally shut their locker too hard she would have been oblivious to their presence. Her head whipped around to find out who it was and she saw Lara’s fleeting form disappearing around the corner. Instinctively, Dana got up and followed to make sure Lara was no longer there. When she peered around the corner she met green eyes starting straight back at her and she jumped back in surprise.
“Lara! Umm… hi… I didn’t see you. I mean I did see you but you left and I was just, never mind.”
Lara stared back at Dana with complete alarm showing on her face. She didn’t know if she was ready for this confrontation. If she hadn’t really needed to go to her locker she wouldn’t have even chanced alerting Dana to her presence. Alas, she had shut her locker a bit too hard. She knew how Dana was totally unaware of her surroundings when she was spaced out so it hadn’t seemed like too big of a risk. She had obviously been wrong. She had been doing really good at avoiding Dana even though she had continued working there. It was inevitable that they would meet though, and here they were… meeting.
“Hey, I was just,” she held up her dirty shirt in explanation
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Really enjoying your story – must be A
This one was awesome…I loved when Alice told Dana how drunk she was. You’re gonna kill me for saying this but we need another option…Dana wakes up to a feisty Al lol! Sorry the bouncing bears are making me say crazy things. I’m gonna go with C.
Can it be secret option D — Tina walks in with Tonya and finds them both asleep in bed!
or…… LOL! loving the tale. I vote C.
B) Dana falls asleep but wakes up in middle of the night to “talk” to Alice and still makes it home at a decent hour. Ha ha ha…
This story is so much fun reading. I say C. Tina’s gotta bump into Dana.
c sounds juicy :)
I’m thinking C – gotta be c – thanks for drunk alice!
Option C sounds like it would be a lot of fun.
C loving the story! post soon
C
Well I think its gotta be C
I’m loving it :)
c sounds the best, and maybe it would solve the whole tonya issue all at once.. ;)
b
I love this and I am going to go with everyone else and say c but I wish it would be just tina there to see her
I’m going for C! Thank you for drunk Alice and I agree with Nix, we need feisty Al!
i pick c!!! this was a great chapter. i applaud your drunken alice being able to have that conversation before passing out.
i noticed that you tried writing in different fonts… i don’t have a peference but on that last page or so, it got to be tiny in size… for the sake of my eyes, please post your next chapter with a larger sized fonts. cheers :)
I am glad everyone enjoyed this chapter. I was very bleary eyed when I wrote it so Alice and I had something in common. I was on the phone and came up with a super idea for choice C. I was going to go ahead and write it out since it looks like the majority is for C so far. lucia you are welcome for drunk Alice now that I go back and read it I think it could have been funnier but I really was keeping the fact that they were having a serious discussion in mind.
C, although i like mercury’s option of D
Foxy.. I have no idea how those different fonts happened! The whole thing was in the same font when I pasted it to the window. I apologize for any inconvience to your eyes! I promise that the next chapter will be in all one font! I have the first part of the next chapter done and am working on the next on right now. ;-)
I want to go with C but just Tina, leading up to A after that. I want Tina to be there and not as cool about it.
I thought she was a bit too cool after just having the Bette/Candy reveal. Of course she doesn’t care for the Ton Ton but there should be a little of – you guys are cheating.
What a great chapter- this is so much fun!!! My vote is somewhere between A and C. I think she needs to stay with Alice but it might be fun to have Tina, Tonya or both to walk in on them sleeping. Can’t wait till the next post.