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Choose Your Own Dana and Alice Adventure: And Interactive Story (Part 3)
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“Hey, Al, ” Dana said in a soft voice.
Alice’s eyes darted up from her glass to Dana only to dart back down when she discovered that Dana was all sweaty with her veins popping all over the place. Her mind reeled, this was when Dana was most attractive to her and it almost made her pass out. The feelings that stirred in her hit her harder than she had ever been hit before, and a yearning threatened to eat her from the inside out. Sense slowly seeped into her brain and she looked up once again and gasped, “Dana… I”
Dana saw what was happening to Alice at the sight of her and heat surrounded her body like someone had started a fire in her stomach, but there were things to take care of.
“Alice, we need to talk about this. We can’t ignore what happened. You kissed me.”
“I kinda remember you kissing me back,” Alice replied, now concentrating on the salad fork in front of her.
“Look at me please,” when Alice did as she had requested she continued, “It was a mistake right?”
“If you say so.” Alice couldn’t breathe with Dana looking at her like that. It was a face half full of confusion and half full of hope.
“Well, what do you have to say,” Dana threw back at her.
“I don’t know. I mean I guess I am just attracted to you. I just came there to…,” Alice paused as she felt that shot kick in. It was that last one that had been the mistake. She would have been fine if she hadn’t taken that last shot. Blurriness took over her senses and she felt herself put her head into her hands. “I just don’t know,” she whispered.
Dana’s brow scrunched. “Have you been drinking?” Dana had been so wrapped up in the subject they were here to discuss she hadn’t noticed the tell-tell signs that Alice usually showed when she drank. Such as staring at random objects and sitting slumped over.
Alice picked at the tablecloth with one hand while the other one held her head. She glanced up at Dana. “Yes”
“Oh, Al,” Dana groaned. “Why did you do that? You knew we needed to talk about this and I can’t talk to you when you’re… like that!”
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Really enjoying your story – must be A
This one was awesome…I loved when Alice told Dana how drunk she was. You’re gonna kill me for saying this but we need another option…Dana wakes up to a feisty Al lol! Sorry the bouncing bears are making me say crazy things. I’m gonna go with C.
Can it be secret option D — Tina walks in with Tonya and finds them both asleep in bed!
or…… LOL! loving the tale. I vote C.
B) Dana falls asleep but wakes up in middle of the night to “talk” to Alice and still makes it home at a decent hour. Ha ha ha…
This story is so much fun reading. I say C. Tina’s gotta bump into Dana.
c sounds juicy :)
I’m thinking C – gotta be c – thanks for drunk alice!
Option C sounds like it would be a lot of fun.
C loving the story! post soon
C
Well I think its gotta be C
I’m loving it :)
c sounds the best, and maybe it would solve the whole tonya issue all at once.. ;)
b
I love this and I am going to go with everyone else and say c but I wish it would be just tina there to see her
I’m going for C! Thank you for drunk Alice and I agree with Nix, we need feisty Al!
i pick c!!! this was a great chapter. i applaud your drunken alice being able to have that conversation before passing out.
i noticed that you tried writing in different fonts… i don’t have a peference but on that last page or so, it got to be tiny in size… for the sake of my eyes, please post your next chapter with a larger sized fonts. cheers :)
I am glad everyone enjoyed this chapter. I was very bleary eyed when I wrote it so Alice and I had something in common. I was on the phone and came up with a super idea for choice C. I was going to go ahead and write it out since it looks like the majority is for C so far. lucia you are welcome for drunk Alice now that I go back and read it I think it could have been funnier but I really was keeping the fact that they were having a serious discussion in mind.
C, although i like mercury’s option of D
Foxy.. I have no idea how those different fonts happened! The whole thing was in the same font when I pasted it to the window. I apologize for any inconvience to your eyes! I promise that the next chapter will be in all one font! I have the first part of the next chapter done and am working on the next on right now. ;-)
I want to go with C but just Tina, leading up to A after that. I want Tina to be there and not as cool about it.
I thought she was a bit too cool after just having the Bette/Candy reveal. Of course she doesn’t care for the Ton Ton but there should be a little of – you guys are cheating.
What a great chapter- this is so much fun!!! My vote is somewhere between A and C. I think she needs to stay with Alice but it might be fun to have Tina, Tonya or both to walk in on them sleeping. Can’t wait till the next post.