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    Bike Ride, Life Ride -Chapter 24

    Story written on August 23, 2009 by gestalt22.
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    Number of Comments: 23
    Words: 3259
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=74127
    Author Notes:

    Time spent away from the hospital.

     

    Bette dropped her head and started fiddling with her fingers. She could not even make direct eye contact with Tina.

     

    Tina whispered softly “the part that makes you nervous is what Bette?”

     

    Bette sighed and said “I just feel so inadequate right now. I know I don’t look good. My body is in bad shape. Look at you, you are perfect. When you undressed for the tub I was lusting after you like you would not believe. You have the advantage of your body working. What if I can’t satisfy you Tina? What if I can’t make you feel good? Then you are stuck here with this invalid like person who can’t get even get sex right. You have given so much of yourself to me, what if I can’t give anything back?”

     

    Tina said “Bette. My gosh that isn’t how I feel at all! Bette I am not measuring being with you by whether or not I achieve an orgasm. You are beautiful Bette. You are the most beautiful woman I have ever met. No one compares to you. And furthermore, you are not an invalid Bette. You made leaps and bounds today. Look you went to the bathroom, you took a shower, you are out of the hospital and in a tub with me. We are making progress Bette.”

     

    Bette “Tina?”

     

    Tina “Yes Bette?”

     

    Bette “I want you. I really do. I want all of you. Right now.”

     

    Tina “Woah… Bette. Are you sure?”

     

    Bette “Oh Yeah, I am sure.”

     

    Bette started to inch closer to Tina and they settled into kissing. The kissing became more passionate and then they began groping one another. Bette started to lower her kisses down Tina’s chest and Tina belted out “Wait…wait…wait”

     

    Bette, startled looked up into Tina’s eyes and just a few inches from her face said “T? Wait for what?”

    Tina said “Let’s move to the bed, ok?”

     

    Bette droppd her head and said “T, I think I have more leverage in the tub, because it is easier to move around my leg and stuff in the water. You know what I mean?”

     

    Tina said “Bette, let’s move the bed. Please? We will work around your leg. I don’t want this to be rushed and you don’t need leverage, you have me to lean on.”

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    2. I am mostly a silent reader but I just wanted to let you know I think it’s great you’ve decided to bring your story back. Please do not pay any attention to people who leave negative comments. No one is forcing them to read your wonderful story. I have so much respect for all the amazing writers who give their time and energy to tell their stories. So please continue. I for one will be looking out for your posts.

    3. gestalt22, those who don’t like this story can SUCK on a HUGE lemon. You have us. I have missed you. Welcome back. I’m happy that Bette is doing better and that she and T had a nice and romantic quickie. I want Jodi’s ass in jail after Tina beats the SHIT out of her. Great post. It was very moving. I could feel Bette’s pain. PPS.

    4. so glad you came back… i know what you mean… years ago when i first started writing, some people were not to nice to me… but i have learned… i write for myself… and for all the friends that read… so please don’t let anything that anyone might say keep you from writing… loved this story and so glad your back… keep them cuming… thx

    5. I love this story and have missed it. I can’t imagine what anyone would have to criticize about it, and I’m glad you are going ahead with it. I love how Tina is taking care of Bette.

    6. I just had to comment…I believe that every story on this site is a generous gift. I think the folks that don’t like a particular story shouldn’t read it…look for another story that strikes their fancy. It takes a lot of guts to post a story for all to read and then have to endure mean-spirited comments. Thanks for coming back G.

    8. I’m normally a silent reader, but I had to let you know that I loved this story the first time around. I’m so glad you’re back to continue with it. Well done!

    14. Welcome back! I’ve missed this story as well, keep goig with your idea. Don’t let some comments discourage you, I’m not the kind of reader who contacts a writer through PM cause I always assume they have lots of others who do so and don’t wanna add up on it, but if you disappear again I might be forced to do that ;)

    16. I am so happy that you brought this story back. I didn’t get to send another PM to check on you. I’m sorry some people can be cruel. It takes a lot to write a story and even more to bring it to the public. I admire all of you who write for this site. You have the right attitude, write your story your way! I love it and will continue to eagerly anticipate it as often as you write it! PPS

    17. I love this story, and am so glad you are continuing it. There will always be naysayers, best to just ignore them, and do what you do, write! Excellent chappie.

    23. I’m so happy that you’re back! I am ussually a silent reader, but i just wanted to let you know that you should not let yourself be defeated by people who comment for the sake of commenting and say nasty things. If they don’t like your story, than bad for them, but as you can see there are still so many other’s who do enjoy your writing. I kept hoping you would return and write more of this amazingly beautiful story. Thank you so much.

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