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    Bike Ride, Life Ride -Chapter 24

    Story written on August 23, 2009 by gestalt22.
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    Number of Comments: 23
    Words: 3259
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=74127
    Author Notes:

    Time spent away from the hospital.

    Tina  locked her elbows so that Bette was an arms length away. Bette was still trying to push forward. She tried once  and then twice and then said “What?”

     

    Tina exhaled and said “Bette I don’t know. I just don’t feel right. I mean I feel like you are sending mixed signals to me. I don’t know what to do. I don’t want to make you feel bad or push you too hard to do something that you don’t want to do”.

     

    Bette said “Tina..”

     

    Tina said “Bette. Let’s just take a bath. Let’s just sit and talk.”

     

    Bette said “Tina, we have been sitting and talking for days. We are out of the hospital. No nurses, no interruptions, alone… let’s do more then talk.”

     

    Tina said “Bette you just said you felt hesitant and uncomfortable; that does not put me at ease or set the mood really. It makes me feel nervous and anxious…”

     

    Bette said “Well maybe if you talked about it less you would not feel nervous and anxious. Can’t we just kiss and make out and see where things go?”

     

    Tina said “No Bette. We can’t.”

     

    Tina pushed Bette forward gently and pushed her enough that she was sitting across from Tina now. Then Tina crossed her arms over her exposed breasts.  Bette was bewildered about what was going on with Tina. After sitting there stunned for a few minutes of awkward silence Bette said “Tina?”

     

    Tina said “Yeah?”

     

    Bette said “I don’t understand what is happening. I don’t understand what just happened”

     

    Tina said “Bette… I did not bring you hear because I had an expectation of sex or anything like that. It was supposed to be to relax you and get you out of the hospital atmosphere. I wanted to give you some good food and watch a movie and just cuddle with you and take a bath. I didn’t have anything else in mind. Although now that I think of it, taking you to a hotel, I can see why you would think my intentions were otherwise.”

     

    Bette said “Tina. Please understand I am really vulnerable right now. And raw. I just was really out of sorts leaving the hospital. I am all over the board emotionally. I am sorry. But please know that with you, I am never sending mixed signals! There is nothing mixed up about how much I want you. The part that makes me nervous is that –“

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    2. I am mostly a silent reader but I just wanted to let you know I think it’s great you’ve decided to bring your story back. Please do not pay any attention to people who leave negative comments. No one is forcing them to read your wonderful story. I have so much respect for all the amazing writers who give their time and energy to tell their stories. So please continue. I for one will be looking out for your posts.

    3. gestalt22, those who don’t like this story can SUCK on a HUGE lemon. You have us. I have missed you. Welcome back. I’m happy that Bette is doing better and that she and T had a nice and romantic quickie. I want Jodi’s ass in jail after Tina beats the SHIT out of her. Great post. It was very moving. I could feel Bette’s pain. PPS.

    4. so glad you came back… i know what you mean… years ago when i first started writing, some people were not to nice to me… but i have learned… i write for myself… and for all the friends that read… so please don’t let anything that anyone might say keep you from writing… loved this story and so glad your back… keep them cuming… thx

    5. I love this story and have missed it. I can’t imagine what anyone would have to criticize about it, and I’m glad you are going ahead with it. I love how Tina is taking care of Bette.

    6. I just had to comment…I believe that every story on this site is a generous gift. I think the folks that don’t like a particular story shouldn’t read it…look for another story that strikes their fancy. It takes a lot of guts to post a story for all to read and then have to endure mean-spirited comments. Thanks for coming back G.

    8. I’m normally a silent reader, but I had to let you know that I loved this story the first time around. I’m so glad you’re back to continue with it. Well done!

    14. Welcome back! I’ve missed this story as well, keep goig with your idea. Don’t let some comments discourage you, I’m not the kind of reader who contacts a writer through PM cause I always assume they have lots of others who do so and don’t wanna add up on it, but if you disappear again I might be forced to do that ;)

    16. I am so happy that you brought this story back. I didn’t get to send another PM to check on you. I’m sorry some people can be cruel. It takes a lot to write a story and even more to bring it to the public. I admire all of you who write for this site. You have the right attitude, write your story your way! I love it and will continue to eagerly anticipate it as often as you write it! PPS

    17. I love this story, and am so glad you are continuing it. There will always be naysayers, best to just ignore them, and do what you do, write! Excellent chappie.

    23. I’m so happy that you’re back! I am ussually a silent reader, but i just wanted to let you know that you should not let yourself be defeated by people who comment for the sake of commenting and say nasty things. If they don’t like your story, than bad for them, but as you can see there are still so many other’s who do enjoy your writing. I kept hoping you would return and write more of this amazingly beautiful story. Thank you so much.

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