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Becoming Dana Fairbanks Chapter 14
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A few hours later the party was still going strong. Although she was still nursing her second, and last, drink of the night and still feeling a bit apprehensive, Dana was having a good time.
She spent most of the party talking with various friends.
She was talking with Harrison, Bette, and Tina, when she felt someone put their arm around her shoulders.
“Dana, babe, where have you been hiding all night,” Scott whispered in her ear.
The brunette quickly shrugged off the dark haired boy in disgust.
“Back off Scott.”
“Whoa! Is that anyway to talk to a teammate? I was just saying hi.” Turning to the rest of the group he said, “Well I know Harrison. But I don’t seem to know you two lovely ladies. I’m Scott McKenzie.”
“Bette Porter.”
“Tina Kennard.”
They introduced themselves as Bette put an arm around Tina’s waist.
Scott smiled at that move and said, “A couple huh? That’s fuckin’ hot. Almost as hot as the birthday girl and that leggy blonde… Kim.. right?”
Bette rolled her eyes, “Yeah, Kim.”
“What do you think Harrison, man? Which is a hotter couple- these two or the birthday girl and Kim,” Scott asked with a smirk.
Wanting the conversation to end as quickly as possible, Dana downed the remainder of her drink, which was a little less than half full, and announced she was going to get another one.
“I need another one too. I’ll go with you,” Scott said staring at Dana’s ass as she walked to the kitchen. Turning to Harrison he gave him a smirk saying, “I don’t know how you workout with Fairbanks and haven’t fucked her yet. Fucking hottest girl on the whole team.”
Not waiting for a response from Harrison, he turned towards Bette and Tina and said, “It was a pleasure ladies,” before following after Dana.
“Yeah maybe for you, asshole,” Tina muttered.
When Scott caught up to the brunette she was taking a water bottle out of the fridge.
“Water Dana? Come on it’s a party. Do a shot with me,” he said standing in the doorway?
“Are you serious? We have a tournament this week. Not that you will ever, tournament or no tournament, get me to do shots with you,” Dana answered trying to exit the kitchen only to have her way blocked. Sighing in frustration, “What the hell are you even doing here? You don’t even know Alice.”
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Yet another excellent chapter, anionayo! Loved Dana and Alice together at the tattoo parlor. You did a great job with their banter. I also love that Dana held Alice’s hand and paid for the tattoo. Very sweet. You really have built up that strong bond of friendship between them. The Wimbledon thing was so funny! Dana might just want to throw the last match and come in second. I think we should let akshunjack and HarukaFairbanks take care of Scott. He would never bother anyone again. He may never even be seen again. I am glad Lara understood the situation at the party and didn’t push it. The interaction between everyone at the party was done very well. I hope Alice finds out that Dana was instrumental in putting the party together. I am a little worried about Kim, too. I hope she doesn’t mess things up for Dana. Thanks for the great update to this amazing story!!
Woot woot, I love friendly Danish
Like MaGoose, I also thought it was so sweet that D paid for the tattoo and coordinated the party for her birthday. This story gives “Danish in the making” a new meaning. I like how you build up their friendship. anionaya, your story is getting better with each post. I echo 25justagirl and akshunjack. Scott is now officially inducted to the “Danish A-holes Hall of Shame”, along with George in Amanda92688’s “Life’s Unexpected Turns”, David, Lara & Tony in brteyes’ “Masked Feelings”, Mystery Man in felix86’s “pick up”, Lucy in Layla_gray’s “Fear”, Gabby in MaGoose’s “The Island”, Jackie in MaGoose’s “Closure”, Will in Nbd14’s “We All Make Mistakes”, Derek in SummerBreeze’s “High School Life” just to name a few that I can remember. As for the romance with Lara, soo far it was reasonable and Lara seemed genuinely caring for D. I also enjoy the gang together partying. Keep it up and thank you.
“You’re leaving too, Lara,” Kim asked? – what was that about? Yeah… probably nothing, I’m just paranoid… And Dana not trusting Kim?… hmmm… Scott’s an asshole, I have a feeling he’ll cause more problems for Dana. Even if Dana and Alice are only friends right now, I’m totally enjoying the Danish moments. Can I have a Dana, please? lol… Another amazing update! Thank you so much!!!
Let Scott bring it on! He needs a swift kick to the FACE! What an as$hole, anyway…I’m so glad to see Al and Dane spending time together and being the most excellent friends ever! Kim, Kim, Kim? Hmm..we’ll see what you have planned for her. Normally bad vibes arent a good thing. Excellent Chapter anionayo, thank you so much for another great post!