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A helping hand and a push in the right direction–Ch. 19
"Don’t be embarrassed you two. I’m going to get you guys some menus."
Bette looked over at her sister. "Thanks Kit."
"Um hmm."
Eli was now leaning over the table trying to get Anna to tell him what kind of present she wanted for her birthday. Bette leaned back over towards Tina.
"You know for a second there I thought you were going to kiss me."
Tina smiled back at Bette. "I was."
Bette sighed at hearing that. "I can’t wait to get you alone."
"Neither can I. Lucky for us our dates tomorrow."
"I know I have everything ready for tomorrow."
"I won’t ask for any hints because I know you won’t give me any."
Bette laughed at that. "You know me so well."
Kit came back with the menus and they ordered their lunch.
"So T how’s Alice as a houseguest?"
"It’s been a lot of fun. She even made-up with Nero."
Eli turned to Bette. "Yeah he brought her flip-flops to her when she got out of the pool."
"Alice would love a dog that brought her things."
Eli laughed. "Aunt Alice is trying to teach him to bring her more stuff."
Lunch went well. Carmen filled Tina in on all her plans for the birthday party. Eli filled Bette in on what he’d been up to, and they even made plans to visit another museum this time with Tina. Everything was going great when Monica walked in.
Since Shane had a great view of the door she saw her before Monica saw Bette. Shane got Bette’s attention and nodded her head towards the door. Bette turned and paled when she saw Monica. Bette knew that if she didn’t get rid of Monica that she would come over to the table. She didn’t want to expose Eli or Tina to Monica, heck she didn’t want to expose herself to Monica. Alice was right Monica could be a real bitch sometimes. Bette knew she had to get but she also knew that she had to give Tina a head’s up first.
So Bette took a deep breath and leaned in close to Tina. "T…"
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(50 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
The whole stories is beautiful. Eli is so sweet,and Bette and Tina are so in love and just needsome time and Bette will make sure that they have that. I just wonder when Bette will ask about Eli’s name. I believe that Bette loves Eli as much as Tina does. thanks so much for posting thanks
Wonderful chapter. Really loving this story. Well done.
It was worth the wait!!!
lol I was waiting for a big blow-out. Pouty Bette is so cute. Anna sounds like a real cutie pie.
Great chapter, Tori. Do so love this story. So happy that you show the love between them and with Eli as well. They are taking things slowly soas to cement their relationship for the future with no problems. I want Bette to ask Tina about Eli’s name and surely she did that on purpose, at least I hope. Bette showing her jealousy is kinda sweet and endearing. No one had better mess with her Tina. Great.
awesome….awesome….awesome……i cannot wait till the date…gosh i just love this fic……
you continue surprise me with your lovely writing! you can bet i will wait all the time you need for the nest post, it’s always a worthy wait.
Like everyone said..awesome chapter and soo loving the story!!. Its so cool to see Sharmen there happy with a kid :) Bette jealous was so cute lol. I cant wait to next chapter :D
great tommorrow is now post now
This is a delightful story. I love it b/c it shows the possibilities if two people in love are willing to bridge the hurt and forgive the unforgivable then they can prevail. It also shows how energy and life consuming hatred can be. Carpe diem!
IS IT TOMORROW YET?????
This is great…thanks for posting. Glad to see that there was no real drama at the Planet. Can’t wait for the date. Please post soon.
I never want your story to end. Wish you were able to continue to write without interruption. Fantastic story.
I am so addicted to your story, I pulled it up this morning b4 work and now I’m playing hookey just so I could read it; good thing work is only 5 minutes away! I live on campus..hanging out for the date and if B’s gonna have more galleries then she can just have one in NY to give her reason to be with Tina and Eli…and James can run the LA one…or Tina can relocate her job somehow to LA…everythings fixable, when you’re that much in love. Thanks for the extra long post. I will hang at out for the next one.
I sure hope date night chapter comes quickly…thanks for the update
and i can’t wait to read all about the date, post soon
I can’t wait for the date either!
WE just can’t say it enough. This story is fantastic. Its romantic, funny, happy, and uplifting. Please, please keep it flowing this way. NO HEAVY DRAMA>
I can’t wait for Bette and Tina to go on their date either. Good thing Bette was able to keep Monica away from Tina and Eli. It looks as if both Bette and Tina are a little jealous of the other women in their former life partner’s life. Thank you for posting.
Another awesome chapter T! You write it just perfectly! Can’t wait for more!
Come on woman! We’re dying out here!!!
i also can’t wait for the date tomorrow… love this story… please continue
I love this story, I love this story, I love this story, I love this story, I love this story……….OK I think you got it now LOL!!! So sweet, romantic, cute, amazing, wonderful and so on – I’m really looking forward to the date :o)) I just thought that they would have “the talk” before the date??? Post as soon as possible, this is so addictive!!!! And thanks for the head up about the problems with writing time, but know that I’ll be waiting, your writing is worth it :o))
Great post, as usual! It’s nice that B & T are taking their time. Nine years without processing what happened before is going to take some time, but it’s great that their love is still evident and strong! Hope your computer is up again to help you post soon! Fantastic story!
I also love your story. I always read it first.
Good chapter. Glad Bette and Tina and Eli have a good time together and can’t wait to see their date. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I love the antics between Alice & Nero. Thank goodness Tina trusts Bette, but I can see there is fire brewing between their legs. LOL! Will the fire be put out soon? Hmm.
great chapter!!! Yeah!!! You go Bette letting everyone know who’s the boss!!!! Post soon please!!!