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A helping hand and a push in the right direction–Ch. 19
A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 19
Saturday Evening
Bette and Eli were waiting in the livingroom with Nero as Tina went to change into something more comfortable for their walk on the beach. The sun was still out but there was only a light breeze so Tina decided to wear her white sun dress. She was walking back when she heard Eli laughing at Bette, who was trying to put a leash on a reluctant Nero.Tina was standing off to the side watching Bette and Eli bond. She just had a great lunch with Bette and Eli.
‘It wasn’t anything special but in a way it was. We were sitting together talking and joking, but it was just how I imagined it would be. It felt like we were a family, we were all so comfortable with each other. It surprised me to see how at ease Bette and Eli are with each other. I’m happy that they spent the week with each other they just seem so open with each other.’
Bette had finally managed to get the leash on after using a considerable amount of energy, so she just sank back into the couch. She had the leash in one hand and her other arm over Eli’s shoulder.
Bette turned her head towards Eli. "Does Nero usually put up that much of a fight to get his leash on?"
Eli smiled back at Bette. "He listens to me and mom because we went to obedience school with him."
"So there’s no hope that he’ll listen to me?"
"If mom tells him to behave, he’ll listen."
"Smart dog."
Tina walked into the room. "Sorry to keep you two waiting."
Bette and Eli turned to Tina. Eli jumped up and took hold of Nero’s leash, and Bette remained seated. Bette couldn’t get over how beautiful Tina looked, the dress went a little past Tina’s knees but it still showed off enough of Tina’s great legs. She had pulled her hair up and the thin straps gave a great view of Tina’s shoulders.
Tina smirked at Bette’s lack of a response. "Bette?"
Bette looked back up at Tina’s eyes. "You were worth the wait…" Tina smiled even wider. "…T you look great in that dress."
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(50 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
The whole stories is beautiful. Eli is so sweet,and Bette and Tina are so in love and just needsome time and Bette will make sure that they have that. I just wonder when Bette will ask about Eli’s name. I believe that Bette loves Eli as much as Tina does. thanks so much for posting thanks
Wonderful chapter. Really loving this story. Well done.
It was worth the wait!!!
lol I was waiting for a big blow-out. Pouty Bette is so cute. Anna sounds like a real cutie pie.
Great chapter, Tori. Do so love this story. So happy that you show the love between them and with Eli as well. They are taking things slowly soas to cement their relationship for the future with no problems. I want Bette to ask Tina about Eli’s name and surely she did that on purpose, at least I hope. Bette showing her jealousy is kinda sweet and endearing. No one had better mess with her Tina. Great.
awesome….awesome….awesome……i cannot wait till the date…gosh i just love this fic……
you continue surprise me with your lovely writing! you can bet i will wait all the time you need for the nest post, it’s always a worthy wait.
Like everyone said..awesome chapter and soo loving the story!!. Its so cool to see Sharmen there happy with a kid :) Bette jealous was so cute lol. I cant wait to next chapter :D
great tommorrow is now post now
This is a delightful story. I love it b/c it shows the possibilities if two people in love are willing to bridge the hurt and forgive the unforgivable then they can prevail. It also shows how energy and life consuming hatred can be. Carpe diem!
IS IT TOMORROW YET?????
This is great…thanks for posting. Glad to see that there was no real drama at the Planet. Can’t wait for the date. Please post soon.
I never want your story to end. Wish you were able to continue to write without interruption. Fantastic story.
I am so addicted to your story, I pulled it up this morning b4 work and now I’m playing hookey just so I could read it; good thing work is only 5 minutes away! I live on campus..hanging out for the date and if B’s gonna have more galleries then she can just have one in NY to give her reason to be with Tina and Eli…and James can run the LA one…or Tina can relocate her job somehow to LA…everythings fixable, when you’re that much in love. Thanks for the extra long post. I will hang at out for the next one.
I sure hope date night chapter comes quickly…thanks for the update
and i can’t wait to read all about the date, post soon
I can’t wait for the date either!
WE just can’t say it enough. This story is fantastic. Its romantic, funny, happy, and uplifting. Please, please keep it flowing this way. NO HEAVY DRAMA>
I can’t wait for Bette and Tina to go on their date either. Good thing Bette was able to keep Monica away from Tina and Eli. It looks as if both Bette and Tina are a little jealous of the other women in their former life partner’s life. Thank you for posting.
Another awesome chapter T! You write it just perfectly! Can’t wait for more!
Come on woman! We’re dying out here!!!
i also can’t wait for the date tomorrow… love this story… please continue
I love this story, I love this story, I love this story, I love this story, I love this story……….OK I think you got it now LOL!!! So sweet, romantic, cute, amazing, wonderful and so on – I’m really looking forward to the date :o)) I just thought that they would have “the talk” before the date??? Post as soon as possible, this is so addictive!!!! And thanks for the head up about the problems with writing time, but know that I’ll be waiting, your writing is worth it :o))
Great post, as usual! It’s nice that B & T are taking their time. Nine years without processing what happened before is going to take some time, but it’s great that their love is still evident and strong! Hope your computer is up again to help you post soon! Fantastic story!
I also love your story. I always read it first.
Good chapter. Glad Bette and Tina and Eli have a good time together and can’t wait to see their date. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I love the antics between Alice & Nero. Thank goodness Tina trusts Bette, but I can see there is fire brewing between their legs. LOL! Will the fire be put out soon? Hmm.
great chapter!!! Yeah!!! You go Bette letting everyone know who’s the boss!!!! Post soon please!!!