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A helping hand and a push in the right direction–Ch. 19
Anna gave Tina a big smile and nod.
Eli laughed at his mom. "Mom always had fun planning my birthday parties."
Tina looked over at her son. "You loved the parties I threw you. Come here." Tina pulled Eli over and kissed his head.
"Thank you so much Tina. That leaves one less detail for me and Shane."
"Don’t mention it Carmen. So do you have all the other details planned?"
"Well we know that it’s going to have a princess theme, since Anna’s really into fairytales right now." Shane said as she looked over at Anna.
"Yeah and we’re getting most of the food from the Planet. We just have to give the invitations to the kids in Anna’s play group and some of my family. We already ordered the cake and presents. Everything else is pretty much ready."
"Okay well if you need anything from me I’d be happy to do it."
"Thanks Tina."
"Don’t mention it Shane." Tina looked over at Eli. "We have to go shopping for Anna’s present."
Eli didn’t really like to go shopping but it was for his cousin so he was willing to make an exception. "Okay. I’ll pick the toys you can get the clothes and other stuff."
Tina smiled at her son. "Deal."
Kit joined them later they were all having a good time when Shane looked over towards the door and saw Bette walk in. Bette was looking around for Tina and her smile widened when she found her. Shane noticed that Bette’s smile started to turn into a frown when she noticed that she wasn’t the only person looking in Tina’s direction. She forgot how jealous she’d get when it came to Tina. She made her way over to Tina, scowling at a few women as she passed them. She reached the table and put her hand onto Tina’s shoulder.
"Hey T."
Tina turned towards Bette and smiled. "Hey babe did you get my message?" As Tina said this she got up from her chair to give Bette a hug.
Tina forgot how good Bette looked in her power suits, and Bette was reacting just like Carmen thought she would. Tina looked great, Bette wrapped her arms around Tina’s waist. She decided to hold onto Tina a bit longer than usual to let everyone know that Tina was with her. Bette went over to hug Eli before taking her seat by Tina.
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(50 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
The whole stories is beautiful. Eli is so sweet,and Bette and Tina are so in love and just needsome time and Bette will make sure that they have that. I just wonder when Bette will ask about Eli’s name. I believe that Bette loves Eli as much as Tina does. thanks so much for posting thanks
Wonderful chapter. Really loving this story. Well done.
It was worth the wait!!!
lol I was waiting for a big blow-out. Pouty Bette is so cute. Anna sounds like a real cutie pie.
Great chapter, Tori. Do so love this story. So happy that you show the love between them and with Eli as well. They are taking things slowly soas to cement their relationship for the future with no problems. I want Bette to ask Tina about Eli’s name and surely she did that on purpose, at least I hope. Bette showing her jealousy is kinda sweet and endearing. No one had better mess with her Tina. Great.
awesome….awesome….awesome……i cannot wait till the date…gosh i just love this fic……
you continue surprise me with your lovely writing! you can bet i will wait all the time you need for the nest post, it’s always a worthy wait.
Like everyone said..awesome chapter and soo loving the story!!. Its so cool to see Sharmen there happy with a kid :) Bette jealous was so cute lol. I cant wait to next chapter :D
great tommorrow is now post now
This is a delightful story. I love it b/c it shows the possibilities if two people in love are willing to bridge the hurt and forgive the unforgivable then they can prevail. It also shows how energy and life consuming hatred can be. Carpe diem!
IS IT TOMORROW YET?????
This is great…thanks for posting. Glad to see that there was no real drama at the Planet. Can’t wait for the date. Please post soon.
I never want your story to end. Wish you were able to continue to write without interruption. Fantastic story.
I am so addicted to your story, I pulled it up this morning b4 work and now I’m playing hookey just so I could read it; good thing work is only 5 minutes away! I live on campus..hanging out for the date and if B’s gonna have more galleries then she can just have one in NY to give her reason to be with Tina and Eli…and James can run the LA one…or Tina can relocate her job somehow to LA…everythings fixable, when you’re that much in love. Thanks for the extra long post. I will hang at out for the next one.
I sure hope date night chapter comes quickly…thanks for the update
and i can’t wait to read all about the date, post soon
I can’t wait for the date either!
WE just can’t say it enough. This story is fantastic. Its romantic, funny, happy, and uplifting. Please, please keep it flowing this way. NO HEAVY DRAMA>
I can’t wait for Bette and Tina to go on their date either. Good thing Bette was able to keep Monica away from Tina and Eli. It looks as if both Bette and Tina are a little jealous of the other women in their former life partner’s life. Thank you for posting.
Another awesome chapter T! You write it just perfectly! Can’t wait for more!
Come on woman! We’re dying out here!!!
i also can’t wait for the date tomorrow… love this story… please continue
I love this story, I love this story, I love this story, I love this story, I love this story……….OK I think you got it now LOL!!! So sweet, romantic, cute, amazing, wonderful and so on – I’m really looking forward to the date :o)) I just thought that they would have “the talk” before the date??? Post as soon as possible, this is so addictive!!!! And thanks for the head up about the problems with writing time, but know that I’ll be waiting, your writing is worth it :o))
Great post, as usual! It’s nice that B & T are taking their time. Nine years without processing what happened before is going to take some time, but it’s great that their love is still evident and strong! Hope your computer is up again to help you post soon! Fantastic story!
I also love your story. I always read it first.
Good chapter. Glad Bette and Tina and Eli have a good time together and can’t wait to see their date. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I love the antics between Alice & Nero. Thank goodness Tina trusts Bette, but I can see there is fire brewing between their legs. LOL! Will the fire be put out soon? Hmm.
great chapter!!! Yeah!!! You go Bette letting everyone know who’s the boss!!!! Post soon please!!!