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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 27
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A voice came over on the speakers to inform that Bettes flight had to get ready.
Bette and Lara got up right away, Tina followed right after. They walked outside and towards the first Tee. Lara took the bag. The flight before them was Teeing off now, so they had a few minutes. Tina took Bettes hand. Bette turned her attention to Tina.
I love you Bette, youll do great, I know it. Tina says and smiles.
Thanks Tee, It means a lot to me that youre here. I love you too. Bette says. Tina leans in for a kiss. Then Bette and Lara had to go.
Ill be right here all the time, following you. Tina says as she walks towards the crowd.
Since she had an ID tag, the guards made sure she was in front. Tina took out her camera from her backpack. She was using this tournament to practice on taking golf photos.
It was only three in Bettes flight. The unknown girl Jessie started off first, then Karen and at last Bette. She places the ball, and swings and hits. The ball flies straight down the middle of the fairway 213 yards down. It was a perfect drive. The crowd loved it.
Bette looks over at Tina, who smiles and gives her the thumbs up.
Bette smiles and they star to walk down the fairway. Karen walks over to Bette.
So, Bette when did you switch teams? Karen asks.
6 moths ago I guess. I met her at the club I own, shes a photographer. I just fell instantly. Bette replies.
Wow. Karen says.
You arent freaked out are you? Bette asks.
No, no, my sister is *****. I think its wonderful, you found love. Im happy for you. Karen reassures her.
Oh, good. So how have you been? Bette asks.
Great, I have two kids, Michael and Charlotte. Theyre 7 and 5 years old. Im divorced though. Karen says.
Oh, Im sorry. Bette says.
They had reached Jessies ball. She had landed about 2 yards into the rough. She got out successfully though. Then a few yards ahead was Karens ball, also in the rough.
Then in the middle of the fairway 20 yards ahead Bettes ball was. It is about 90 yards in to the pin. Lara gave her the pitch. She concentrate and swings, its a draw and its perfect, the ball drops down 12 inches from the hole. The crowd goes WOO. Bette again looks over at Tina. And once again Tina smile and gives her the thumbs up.
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nice post
Lauren…wonderful chapter. Tina just needs a little bit of time, but she’ll talk thing over with her little sister. I like that Bette was supportive even to Sarah. Enjoy you weekend trip. Thanks for the chapter.
This brief but moving moment with Tina and her sister was so real, I could see it in front of me like a witness. Great work, Lauren.
And how lovely, this “on line” public interraction between our marvellous two ! A pure delight, thank you !
Ah, those TV zooms really were an ideal way to show Tina to her family – and so to analyse family’s reactions : from the stupid intolerent “Christian” (sooo Christian indeed !) father to the truly remorseful sister, with the usual dependent wife who will hesit between to still “obey” to her husband and society’s “normality” concepts or to endly react against this ugly state of mind, grown up and contact her daughter…
By the way, Lauren, could your depiction of the young Tina being “a tomboy with short hair” be a winked allusion to Laurel Holloman’s appearance in her famous first movie, “The Incredibly True Adventure of Two Girls in Love” ? I wonder ! ^_^
Many many thanks for your so engaging story – and all my best wishes for your weekend ! Enjoy it fully !!
Tina i hope you will forgive your sister… and her parents … well i hope they come around… as long as bette is there to support her…
another great chapter… please continue
What can a 15 yr old do when she has controling parents? You grin and bear it and still love you sister and miss her. great chapter. Thanks
K
Great chapter. I hope T can forgive her sister, life is too short. Love it as always.
Yay, Bette! I was striding along on every green! Don’t forget to have her sign the scorecard. Some big name men’s golfer lost a tournament because he neglected to do that. I think his caddy got fired for not reminding him!
Did Bette win a trip to Disneyworld? I can just see her, hugging Tina after the win, doing the promo!
Thanks!
Good chapter. Tina can talk to Sarah and forgive her, and about her parent I think they still need time to see what’s they do to Tina is wrong and hope they will make it up to Tina. Post soon, thanks!
WONDERFUL CHAPTER…POST SOON…..
Amazing as always. I will have withdrawals this weekend. Can’t wait for your next post.
Great chapter, but did we forget that Tina is a photographer and was also working. The local camera assumed that she was Bette’s girl friend not recognizing her press cridentials and that she was shotting with professional equipment. I need a little levity here. Tina needs to time (probably overnight) to process this, because it happen so quickly. I am sure that she and Sarah will reconnect. Congrads. Bette! I will be interested to see if Bette will become jelous of some of Tina’s ex.’s when they get back to LA. I mean Tina was supposely HOT to trot on the single’s scene and I am sure that some of those women will still want to try thier luck. Enjoy your weekend Lauren and come back loaded with fresh chapters.
Another great chapter. Love that Bette is getting back into true form, on the course, and that she and Tina’s relationship hasn’t hindered her progress, or acceptance with the others on the field. Hopefully, in time her parents will come around. Still can’t quite understand how so called Christians can justify turning away from their children. Amazing how they chose to grasp only certain Christian-like behavior. Interesting. Well, it’s good to see that the youngest, of the family, is more accepting. It’s nice to see Bette concerned about Tina’s relationship with her family. Guess, I’ll stay tuned ’til next week. Have a great weekend!
Thanks for the update. Can’t wait for th next one.
Hey I agree with T-boz WOW! it’s really sad that My fellow Christian and Catholic I’m Catholic and it’s really Sad to Judge the Peoples what ever they BACKGROUND ONLY GOD have right to JUDGE US whatever we DO Thanks Lauren Please post soon.
oh my..that story is going better and better every time..poor baby Tina i think her father is the bigest problem cuz her mom seems to be afraid of him i hope Tina forgive her sis and man i´m totally in love for Bette she is amazing and now she looks at Tina when she hit the ball is soooo cute..lol..ok thank God the site is back i had a hard time without it..lol..Lauren i have no words to describe your talent..amazing thanks
yay..bette won! LOL~ great update.. Hope Tina could talk to her sis soon~ post soon!
The parent/family thing hits home. She does need her sister. Even if the parents don’t come around..some part is better than none. Thanks for the story and hope you had a wonderful weekend.
Just been playing catch up on your story here. Wonderfull to come back in town and see so many updates from you. I love this story so do keep going. I hope Tina and Sara can work it out. Family is important and so is forgivenes. Post soon
great writing ability, keeping me enthralled.