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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 27
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Tina? Sara let out silently.
Tina doesnt turn around, but she listens. She reach out for Bette to again take her hand, she does.
Please Tina can I talk to you for a second? Sara continues.
Tina is all in tears, she cant keep them in any longer. She tries to wipe them away but she fails, its too many of them. Then she slowly turns around facing Sarah.
I dont know what to say, to make you forgive me. Or even talk to me. Sarah starts.
Tina doesnt answer, but she listens closely. She holds tightly Bettes hand.
Tina I was 15 years old, I know that isnt a very good excuse but I knew that what mom and dad did was wrong. But I was scared to death that they would do the same to me, if I took your side and supported you. I wasnt ready to be on my own. Sarah says as tears are starting to trace her chin. She wipes them away.
Tina, please say something, anything. Sara begs.
I cant deal with this now. Tina says and walks pass Sarah and get into the backseat of the car. There she breaks down. Bette is left in front of Sarah.
Give her time, she still thinks about you, and it still hurts as much as it did they threw her out. Just give her time. Well be here till Tuesday. Ill try and talk to her. Bette says in a comforting voice. She knew that Sarah was telling the truth.
Bette get in next to Tina, she pull her close into a warm embrace.
Sarah slowly turns around and sees that Tina is crying. And that Bette is comforting her.
Lara is still standing on the outside of the car.
Im sorry I snapped at you earlier. Lara says and jumps into the car and drives off towards the hotel. Tina cries all the way back.
At the hotel:
They walk straight up, letting Lara park the car.
Bette guides Tina to the bedside. She sits down.
Tee? Talk to me. Bette asks.
I dont know what to say. Tina replies.
Try, put you emotions into words, its the best thing. Bette says and rubs her back softly.
Tina sits in silence for a moment.
Ive missed her so much, and she was only 15 years when I left. And I believe her. Because I think mom and dad wouldve thrown her out as well if she supported me. And I guess that she feared that they would found out if she tried to contact me over the years. Tina says.
I believed her too. I saw it in her eyes, how much she loves you, and missed you. She wanted to throw her arms around you. Bette says.
Tina looks at Bette.
You think? Tina asks.
Yeah, she loves you, anyone can see that. Bette replies and pulls Tina into a hug.
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nice post
Lauren…wonderful chapter. Tina just needs a little bit of time, but she’ll talk thing over with her little sister. I like that Bette was supportive even to Sarah. Enjoy you weekend trip. Thanks for the chapter.
This brief but moving moment with Tina and her sister was so real, I could see it in front of me like a witness. Great work, Lauren.
And how lovely, this “on line” public interraction between our marvellous two ! A pure delight, thank you !
Ah, those TV zooms really were an ideal way to show Tina to her family – and so to analyse family’s reactions : from the stupid intolerent “Christian” (sooo Christian indeed !) father to the truly remorseful sister, with the usual dependent wife who will hesit between to still “obey” to her husband and society’s “normality” concepts or to endly react against this ugly state of mind, grown up and contact her daughter…
By the way, Lauren, could your depiction of the young Tina being “a tomboy with short hair” be a winked allusion to Laurel Holloman’s appearance in her famous first movie, “The Incredibly True Adventure of Two Girls in Love” ? I wonder ! ^_^
Many many thanks for your so engaging story – and all my best wishes for your weekend ! Enjoy it fully !!
Tina i hope you will forgive your sister… and her parents … well i hope they come around… as long as bette is there to support her…
another great chapter… please continue
What can a 15 yr old do when she has controling parents? You grin and bear it and still love you sister and miss her. great chapter. Thanks
K
Great chapter. I hope T can forgive her sister, life is too short. Love it as always.
Yay, Bette! I was striding along on every green! Don’t forget to have her sign the scorecard. Some big name men’s golfer lost a tournament because he neglected to do that. I think his caddy got fired for not reminding him!
Did Bette win a trip to Disneyworld? I can just see her, hugging Tina after the win, doing the promo!
Thanks!
Good chapter. Tina can talk to Sarah and forgive her, and about her parent I think they still need time to see what’s they do to Tina is wrong and hope they will make it up to Tina. Post soon, thanks!
WONDERFUL CHAPTER…POST SOON…..
Amazing as always. I will have withdrawals this weekend. Can’t wait for your next post.
Great chapter, but did we forget that Tina is a photographer and was also working. The local camera assumed that she was Bette’s girl friend not recognizing her press cridentials and that she was shotting with professional equipment. I need a little levity here. Tina needs to time (probably overnight) to process this, because it happen so quickly. I am sure that she and Sarah will reconnect. Congrads. Bette! I will be interested to see if Bette will become jelous of some of Tina’s ex.’s when they get back to LA. I mean Tina was supposely HOT to trot on the single’s scene and I am sure that some of those women will still want to try thier luck. Enjoy your weekend Lauren and come back loaded with fresh chapters.
Another great chapter. Love that Bette is getting back into true form, on the course, and that she and Tina’s relationship hasn’t hindered her progress, or acceptance with the others on the field. Hopefully, in time her parents will come around. Still can’t quite understand how so called Christians can justify turning away from their children. Amazing how they chose to grasp only certain Christian-like behavior. Interesting. Well, it’s good to see that the youngest, of the family, is more accepting. It’s nice to see Bette concerned about Tina’s relationship with her family. Guess, I’ll stay tuned ’til next week. Have a great weekend!
Thanks for the update. Can’t wait for th next one.
Hey I agree with T-boz WOW! it’s really sad that My fellow Christian and Catholic I’m Catholic and it’s really Sad to Judge the Peoples what ever they BACKGROUND ONLY GOD have right to JUDGE US whatever we DO Thanks Lauren Please post soon.
oh my..that story is going better and better every time..poor baby Tina i think her father is the bigest problem cuz her mom seems to be afraid of him i hope Tina forgive her sis and man i´m totally in love for Bette she is amazing and now she looks at Tina when she hit the ball is soooo cute..lol..ok thank God the site is back i had a hard time without it..lol..Lauren i have no words to describe your talent..amazing thanks
yay..bette won! LOL~ great update.. Hope Tina could talk to her sis soon~ post soon!
The parent/family thing hits home. She does need her sister. Even if the parents don’t come around..some part is better than none. Thanks for the story and hope you had a wonderful weekend.
Just been playing catch up on your story here. Wonderfull to come back in town and see so many updates from you. I love this story so do keep going. I hope Tina and Sara can work it out. Family is important and so is forgivenes. Post soon
great writing ability, keeping me enthralled.