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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 27
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Chapter 27
A few hours later they had arrived at the Raleigh Golf Course. Lara helped Bette with the bag. Bette put on her golf shoes. She gave the car keys to Tina.
Tina had packed a little backpack with some food and a few bottles of water and off course, her camera. She had also gotten food for Bette and Lara.
It was going to be a long day.
They all went into the club house. There they got their ID tags. Bette had also signed Tina up as her photographer so she could be in the front and close to Bette. She needed her today.
They took a seat at an empty table.. They made some smalltalk when a woman comes up to them.
Bette? She says.
Bette looks up at the mention of her name.
Karen, Hi, how are you? Bette says and smiles. She got up and hugged her hello.
Im great. I heard about your accident, I thought you couldnt play again. Karen says.
Well, Im stubborn I guess.. The doctors were wrong. Bette replies. Bette turns around and take Tinas hand and pulls her up.
Karen, I want you to meet my better half. Bette says and smiles at Tina. Tina Kennard. She continues.
Hi, Im Karen Brooks, I used to tour with Bette before she got famous. Karen laughs.
Hi, nice to meet you. Tina replies.
So, Bette you changed team huh? Karen asks.
Yeah I did. Bette replies and puts her arm around Tina and pulls her closer.
Well, good for you. Karen says and gives a nudge.
Would you like to sit for a moment? Or are you teeing off soon? Bette asks.
Actually, I came in a little late, so I have to get some things done first, but I looked at the lists. We are on the same flight, together with a Jessie Wills. Karen says. Tee at 11, right? She asks as she starts to walk off.
Yeah, at 11. Bette replies. She looks after Karen and smiles.
Wow, I havent seen her in 7 or 8 years or so. Bette says.
So who is she, except for Karen Brooks. Tina asks.
Both she and I got amateur contracts from Callaway, so we tour and travel together. She was a good friend, but suddenly, she got pregnant and she left the circus. I think she got two kids. She was good, better than me, she couldve gone far, she still can. I hope she makes it. Bette says and smiles at Tina.
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nice post
Lauren…wonderful chapter. Tina just needs a little bit of time, but she’ll talk thing over with her little sister. I like that Bette was supportive even to Sarah. Enjoy you weekend trip. Thanks for the chapter.
This brief but moving moment with Tina and her sister was so real, I could see it in front of me like a witness. Great work, Lauren.
And how lovely, this “on line” public interraction between our marvellous two ! A pure delight, thank you !
Ah, those TV zooms really were an ideal way to show Tina to her family – and so to analyse family’s reactions : from the stupid intolerent “Christian” (sooo Christian indeed !) father to the truly remorseful sister, with the usual dependent wife who will hesit between to still “obey” to her husband and society’s “normality” concepts or to endly react against this ugly state of mind, grown up and contact her daughter…
By the way, Lauren, could your depiction of the young Tina being “a tomboy with short hair” be a winked allusion to Laurel Holloman’s appearance in her famous first movie, “The Incredibly True Adventure of Two Girls in Love” ? I wonder ! ^_^
Many many thanks for your so engaging story – and all my best wishes for your weekend ! Enjoy it fully !!
Tina i hope you will forgive your sister… and her parents … well i hope they come around… as long as bette is there to support her…
another great chapter… please continue
What can a 15 yr old do when she has controling parents? You grin and bear it and still love you sister and miss her. great chapter. Thanks
K
Great chapter. I hope T can forgive her sister, life is too short. Love it as always.
Yay, Bette! I was striding along on every green! Don’t forget to have her sign the scorecard. Some big name men’s golfer lost a tournament because he neglected to do that. I think his caddy got fired for not reminding him!
Did Bette win a trip to Disneyworld? I can just see her, hugging Tina after the win, doing the promo!
Thanks!
Good chapter. Tina can talk to Sarah and forgive her, and about her parent I think they still need time to see what’s they do to Tina is wrong and hope they will make it up to Tina. Post soon, thanks!
WONDERFUL CHAPTER…POST SOON…..
Amazing as always. I will have withdrawals this weekend. Can’t wait for your next post.
Great chapter, but did we forget that Tina is a photographer and was also working. The local camera assumed that she was Bette’s girl friend not recognizing her press cridentials and that she was shotting with professional equipment. I need a little levity here. Tina needs to time (probably overnight) to process this, because it happen so quickly. I am sure that she and Sarah will reconnect. Congrads. Bette! I will be interested to see if Bette will become jelous of some of Tina’s ex.’s when they get back to LA. I mean Tina was supposely HOT to trot on the single’s scene and I am sure that some of those women will still want to try thier luck. Enjoy your weekend Lauren and come back loaded with fresh chapters.
Another great chapter. Love that Bette is getting back into true form, on the course, and that she and Tina’s relationship hasn’t hindered her progress, or acceptance with the others on the field. Hopefully, in time her parents will come around. Still can’t quite understand how so called Christians can justify turning away from their children. Amazing how they chose to grasp only certain Christian-like behavior. Interesting. Well, it’s good to see that the youngest, of the family, is more accepting. It’s nice to see Bette concerned about Tina’s relationship with her family. Guess, I’ll stay tuned ’til next week. Have a great weekend!
Thanks for the update. Can’t wait for th next one.
Hey I agree with T-boz WOW! it’s really sad that My fellow Christian and Catholic I’m Catholic and it’s really Sad to Judge the Peoples what ever they BACKGROUND ONLY GOD have right to JUDGE US whatever we DO Thanks Lauren Please post soon.
oh my..that story is going better and better every time..poor baby Tina i think her father is the bigest problem cuz her mom seems to be afraid of him i hope Tina forgive her sis and man i´m totally in love for Bette she is amazing and now she looks at Tina when she hit the ball is soooo cute..lol..ok thank God the site is back i had a hard time without it..lol..Lauren i have no words to describe your talent..amazing thanks
yay..bette won! LOL~ great update.. Hope Tina could talk to her sis soon~ post soon!
The parent/family thing hits home. She does need her sister. Even if the parents don’t come around..some part is better than none. Thanks for the story and hope you had a wonderful weekend.
Just been playing catch up on your story here. Wonderfull to come back in town and see so many updates from you. I love this story so do keep going. I hope Tina and Sara can work it out. Family is important and so is forgivenes. Post soon
great writing ability, keeping me enthralled.