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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 18
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Like Im going to heaven. Tina smiles back. Bette takes Tinas hand and holds it.
Bette hadnt told Tina that she owned a beach house, it hasnt come up, but she thinks that Tina wont mind.
So do you have a favorite spot that were heading for, or is it a more public beach? Tina asks.
Its pretty private. Bette smiles. there is something that I have forgotten to tell you, it never came up in any of our conversations. Bette says as Tina sits up waiting for bad news.
I own a beach house, and thats where were heading. Bette says.
What? You own a beach house? Wow. Tina says and after a few moments, she smiles.
Right then Bette turns into the driveway of the beach house. Tina looks at it.
Oh my, its huge. Tina says as she gets out of the car. Bette follows, she grabs the picnic basket, then walk around to Tina and takes her hand and they walk up to the house. Bette unlocks the door. They walk inside.
Tina walks around looking. Its a big kitchen, and a huge living room. Theres a big stair up to the second floor, which contains the bedrooms and a bathroom. Downstairs it also is a bathroom. In the living room there is huge windows and a beautiful view out on the ocean. Tina walks up to the door out to a huge patio and opens it.
Bette has taken the food into the kitchen and placed everything into the fridge. She then walks out to Tina.
So, do you like it? Bette asks as she walks up behind Tina and slides her hands around her waist.
Babe, I love it, its beautiful here. Tina replies.
Yeah, I thought you might like it. I also have a pool here. Bette says and smiles. She takes Tinas hand and guide her around the corner. Its a built in pool.
Why do you have a pool here, when youre so close to the ocean? Tina asks.
Well, the ocean isnt always as warm as now, and I dont like swimming in the ocean at night. Bette replies.
Oh, that makes sense. Tina says and smiles.
They walk back to the patio, two very comfortable lounge chairs is placed there.
Oh, I want to use one of these. Tina says.
Yeah, I planned on using one myself. Bette replies. What do you want to drink? She asks.
Just some ice water. Tina replies.
coming right up. Bette says and runs inside.
Tina took out the sunscreen from her bag. She walked inside.
Hey Bette, where is the bathroom? Tina asks.
Right in there and the first door on your right. Bette replies and points in the right direction.
Tina walks in and changes into her bikini. She put on the wrap around skirt again and then walks outside.
Bette sees Tina and she stares at her as she takes a seat. She takes off the skirt and take up the sunscreen and start to apply it on. All she has left now is her back.
Hey, babe, would you help me? Tina asks.
Yeah, sure. Bette says and move over to Tina. She starts to massage it in. Tina let out a little sigh. Bette fells Tinas body tense up a little. She quickly finishes.
Then Bette starts to apply it to herself and she has the same problem when she get ot her back. Tina sees that.
Babe, want me to help you? Tina asks. Bette nods and give Tina the sunscreen.
Tina apply it on Bettes back. She now understood why Tina tensed up a little. Oh my God, her hands, her touch. Bette thinks as Tina finishes. Bette started to think was she ready now? Tina touching her felt so good.
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Do I get to be first..maybe. You must have fallen asleep and left us hanging.: ) I like where all this is going and hopefully, Tina may get her family back too. Thanks,Lauren!
…………… the anticipation is killing me
I have to say that I am really enjoying your story. I’m glad T realized that she didn’t need to be alone, she needed comfort. These 2 are so comfortable together. Dying for the next post!
yeah, post real soon, i love this story. good job.
beach house what a beautiful and calm place to make love for the fisrt time inst Lauren?..no pressure..lol..youre killing me..i more anxiety than Tina..lol..amazing chapter realy is post soon thank you for share your talent ;o)
Aaah, so Bette is reading Proust ? I’m so glad ! No wonder if you’re such a master for sweet slow writing race and depiction’s delicacy…
Mmm… now I can see an especially tender ray of sunshine coming in Bette and Tina’s sky… Surrounded by sea’s peaceful and timeless beauty, alone together… Well, well, I must confess I really cannot wait for your next chapter now ! ^_^
Many, many thanks for your magnificent story, Lauren, from the bottom of my reader’s delighted heart.
Owww the anticipation!!!! It’s a beautiful setting for their their “first” time. can’t wait to read that chapter, and hopefully you won’t keep us waiting too long.
OOOOOO, I think she is ready! PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!
yes Bette, be ready now!
SHES READY, SHES READY, SHES READY! POST SOON! hahaha
She is ready…great chapter ..THANKS..POST SOON
Oh my god yes she is sooooo ready.
so good indeed. i’m enjoying your story and am looking forward to more.
Still lovin this story, and the fact that Bette is the hesitant one. Is she ready? Maybe. Can’t wait till your next post.
Aww Lauren i think Bette is sooo ready and so are we LOL. Great story.
I vote for ready, too. Great story.
she’s so ready..! LOL~ post soon!
Beach house. Perfect location for their first time.
Make it so!
“I am always free, and I always will be free if you want me. At whatever hour of the day or night it may suit you to see me, just send for me, and I shall be only too delighted to come.” Odette, Du côté de chez Swann
Hey Bette now you’re talking WOOHOO! LOL Hey Lauren that was so Swesome WHOA! I love it Thanks Please Post soon.
hey hey
ive been overseas for a fortnight & get back to find a gazillion fics from you to read! YAY! Thank you so much for the lovely welcome home present.
An indicator of how much i liked….i havent slept in 2 days yet still sat here reading it all :)
Lauren..what a perfect scene, a private beach house. Tina missing her family and realizing she doesn’t want to be alone nor does she have to be — because Bette is there for her. I simply love your story, please do continue.
How cool is that to have a beach house that you just ‘forgot’ to mention?! Ooh! I’m so lovin’ this story!!! But, I think I’ve told you that about a zillion times…haven’t I? Im never disappointed whenever I read one of your chapters. Thanks!!!!
Good chpater. This is good and Bette on the beach house that is awesome maybe I can visit her sometime lol. Post soon, thanks!