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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 18
Babe, it is most definitely okay, it smells great. Tina replies.
Thanks. Bette says and smiles.
There is a moment of silence. Bette notices the picture.
Whos that picture of? Bette asks softly.
Tina doesnt answer, she hands it over to Bette. She looks at it, her face saddens a little as she looks back at Tina. Tinas eyes are threatening with tears again.
Your sister looks so much like you, you could be twins. Bette says.
Yeah, we are a lot alike. Tina replies. She looks down on her food, she then takes another bite.
It was taken only a couple of months before they kicked me out. Tina says and looks at Bette with a sad and hurt look.
Im sorry. Bette says and put her hand on top of Tinas and softly rubs it.
Im sorry I was so short last night, I just Tina says but is interrupted by Bette.
Tee, you dont have to explain, I understand. Bette says and smiles.
They finish breakfast.
Do you have work today? Bette asks.
No, not on Sundays, I usually take Sundays off. Tina replies.
Good, because Im taking you away today. Bette says.
Tina smiles.
You are? Tina asks.
Yes, if youre up for it? Bette asks.
Yes I am, where are you taking me? Tina asks.
Im not going to tell you yet. You could go down and maybe take a shower, and get dressed, dress light, its warm out today, and nearly no wind. Bette says and smiles.
Oh okay. Tina says and smiles. She gets up as does Bette.
Bette pulls Tina into a tight embrace, she then kiss her on the lips, softly and lovingly.
Ill see you soon, lets say 30 minutes. Bette says. Tina leaves.
30 minutes later they were seated in the car. Tina had put on a tank top, a wrap around skirt and sandals. Se also packed a little handbag with sunscreen and a bikini. And for once she left her cell phone at home. This was day for rest she thought to herself.
Bette had packed down a little picnic basket.
So where are we going? Tina asks.
Im taking you to the beach. Were gonna lay there all day, get a tan, eat, just be with each other, without any interruptions. How does that sound? Bette asks smiling over at Tina.
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(42 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
Do I get to be first..maybe. You must have fallen asleep and left us hanging.: ) I like where all this is going and hopefully, Tina may get her family back too. Thanks,Lauren!
…………… the anticipation is killing me
I have to say that I am really enjoying your story. I’m glad T realized that she didn’t need to be alone, she needed comfort. These 2 are so comfortable together. Dying for the next post!
yeah, post real soon, i love this story. good job.
beach house what a beautiful and calm place to make love for the fisrt time inst Lauren?..no pressure..lol..youre killing me..i more anxiety than Tina..lol..amazing chapter realy is post soon thank you for share your talent ;o)
Aaah, so Bette is reading Proust ? I’m so glad ! No wonder if you’re such a master for sweet slow writing race and depiction’s delicacy…
Mmm… now I can see an especially tender ray of sunshine coming in Bette and Tina’s sky… Surrounded by sea’s peaceful and timeless beauty, alone together… Well, well, I must confess I really cannot wait for your next chapter now ! ^_^
Many, many thanks for your magnificent story, Lauren, from the bottom of my reader’s delighted heart.
Owww the anticipation!!!! It’s a beautiful setting for their their “first” time. can’t wait to read that chapter, and hopefully you won’t keep us waiting too long.
OOOOOO, I think she is ready! PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!
yes Bette, be ready now!
SHES READY, SHES READY, SHES READY! POST SOON! hahaha
She is ready…great chapter ..THANKS..POST SOON
Oh my god yes she is sooooo ready.
so good indeed. i’m enjoying your story and am looking forward to more.
Still lovin this story, and the fact that Bette is the hesitant one. Is she ready? Maybe. Can’t wait till your next post.
Aww Lauren i think Bette is sooo ready and so are we LOL. Great story.
I vote for ready, too. Great story.
she’s so ready..! LOL~ post soon!
Beach house. Perfect location for their first time.
Make it so!
“I am always free, and I always will be free if you want me. At whatever hour of the day or night it may suit you to see me, just send for me, and I shall be only too delighted to come.” Odette, Du côté de chez Swann
Hey Bette now you’re talking WOOHOO! LOL Hey Lauren that was so Swesome WHOA! I love it Thanks Please Post soon.
hey hey
ive been overseas for a fortnight & get back to find a gazillion fics from you to read! YAY! Thank you so much for the lovely welcome home present.
An indicator of how much i liked….i havent slept in 2 days yet still sat here reading it all :)
Lauren..what a perfect scene, a private beach house. Tina missing her family and realizing she doesn’t want to be alone nor does she have to be — because Bette is there for her. I simply love your story, please do continue.
How cool is that to have a beach house that you just ‘forgot’ to mention?! Ooh! I’m so lovin’ this story!!! But, I think I’ve told you that about a zillion times…haven’t I? Im never disappointed whenever I read one of your chapters. Thanks!!!!
Good chpater. This is good and Bette on the beach house that is awesome maybe I can visit her sometime lol. Post soon, thanks!