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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 18
Why did she tell Bette that she wanted to be alone tonight? She thinks to herself as she stand up from the sofa. She slowly walks to the door, opens it and walks out, she then walks up to Bettes door. She knocks two times.
Bette hears the knock far away, she slowly opens her eyes, did she hear it or was it just in her imagination? Then theres another knock. It was definitely a knock. She jumps off the sofa and walk to the door. She opens.
Tina starts to cry again when Bette opens the door. She holds on to the picture of the happy family.
Tee? Whats wrong? Bette asks concerned.
I dont want to be alone. Tina replies. Bette pulls Tina into a comforting hug.
You wont be, Ill be here with you. Bette says softly. She brings Tina into her apartment.
Can we just sleep? Tina asks still crying in Bettes embrace.
Yes, we can. Bette says and leads the way into her bedroom. She helps Tina undress and lay her down on the bed. She then gets undressed too and put on her PJs and joins Tina.
Bette is lying on her back, Tina snuggles up and lays her head on Bettes shoulder. Tina is still sobbing but soon she was fast asleep. Bette fell asleep right after still holding onto Tina.
The next morning Bette wakes up first, she just looks at Tina and she softly run her fingers through Tinas hair. After a few minutes Tina opens her eyes.
Hi. Bette says silently.
Good morning. Tina replies smiling.
How are you today? Bette asks.
Im better, thank you. Tina replies.
Do you want some breakfast? Bette asks.
Yeah, I could eat. Tina says and smiles.
Bette leans in and kisses Tina softly on her lips. She then gets out of bed and put on her robe, then walks into the kitchen. She starts with coffee, and then moves on to make some pancakes. After about 10 minutes Tina walks in, fully dressed and with her picture in her hands. Bette is just finishing up and she sets the table and pours the coffee into cups. She then brings the pancakes over.
I just made some pancakes, hope its okay. Bette says.
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(42 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
Do I get to be first..maybe. You must have fallen asleep and left us hanging.: ) I like where all this is going and hopefully, Tina may get her family back too. Thanks,Lauren!
…………… the anticipation is killing me
I have to say that I am really enjoying your story. I’m glad T realized that she didn’t need to be alone, she needed comfort. These 2 are so comfortable together. Dying for the next post!
yeah, post real soon, i love this story. good job.
beach house what a beautiful and calm place to make love for the fisrt time inst Lauren?..no pressure..lol..youre killing me..i more anxiety than Tina..lol..amazing chapter realy is post soon thank you for share your talent ;o)
Aaah, so Bette is reading Proust ? I’m so glad ! No wonder if you’re such a master for sweet slow writing race and depiction’s delicacy…
Mmm… now I can see an especially tender ray of sunshine coming in Bette and Tina’s sky… Surrounded by sea’s peaceful and timeless beauty, alone together… Well, well, I must confess I really cannot wait for your next chapter now ! ^_^
Many, many thanks for your magnificent story, Lauren, from the bottom of my reader’s delighted heart.
Owww the anticipation!!!! It’s a beautiful setting for their their “first” time. can’t wait to read that chapter, and hopefully you won’t keep us waiting too long.
OOOOOO, I think she is ready! PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!
yes Bette, be ready now!
SHES READY, SHES READY, SHES READY! POST SOON! hahaha
She is ready…great chapter ..THANKS..POST SOON
Oh my god yes she is sooooo ready.
so good indeed. i’m enjoying your story and am looking forward to more.
Still lovin this story, and the fact that Bette is the hesitant one. Is she ready? Maybe. Can’t wait till your next post.
Aww Lauren i think Bette is sooo ready and so are we LOL. Great story.
I vote for ready, too. Great story.
she’s so ready..! LOL~ post soon!
Beach house. Perfect location for their first time.
Make it so!
“I am always free, and I always will be free if you want me. At whatever hour of the day or night it may suit you to see me, just send for me, and I shall be only too delighted to come.” Odette, Du côté de chez Swann
Hey Bette now you’re talking WOOHOO! LOL Hey Lauren that was so Swesome WHOA! I love it Thanks Please Post soon.
hey hey
ive been overseas for a fortnight & get back to find a gazillion fics from you to read! YAY! Thank you so much for the lovely welcome home present.
An indicator of how much i liked….i havent slept in 2 days yet still sat here reading it all :)
Lauren..what a perfect scene, a private beach house. Tina missing her family and realizing she doesn’t want to be alone nor does she have to be — because Bette is there for her. I simply love your story, please do continue.
How cool is that to have a beach house that you just ‘forgot’ to mention?! Ooh! I’m so lovin’ this story!!! But, I think I’ve told you that about a zillion times…haven’t I? Im never disappointed whenever I read one of your chapters. Thanks!!!!
Good chpater. This is good and Bette on the beach house that is awesome maybe I can visit her sometime lol. Post soon, thanks!