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A Secret Well Kept – (Chapter: Crush)
"Thank you. You don’t look so bad yourself. Where we going?" she replied still smiling, while rolling down the window.
"Wherever you’d like. I owe you don’t I? So you tell me where to go and I will get us there." I asked as we left her driveway and she started giving me directions.
We had been driving for about twenty minutes now and I was beginning to get curios and a little nervous that we were lost. I had no clue where we were. We had been talking about random things again. Nothing really special just common get to know you stuff. We talked about our families, friends, favourite things to do. We had a lot of the same things in common. She liked the same music as I did and at one point even connected her IPod to my car and played one of my favourite A Fine Frenzy songs. She was funny too, I found myself once again having fun with her. And I hadn’t thought about anything negative since she stepped into the car. This could be a good thing. A really good thing.
"Are you sure you know where we’re going? Or are you taking me somewhere in the middle of nowhere so you can have your way with me?" I joked, half serious.
"No I’m not lost, thank you very much.” she laughed "And I doubt you’d be complaining if I as you so romantically put it ‘had my way with you’, you’d be so lucky” she was now giggling.
"You’d be the lucky one. Trust. Me." I retaliated as I looked at her and she blushed a little pretending to be shocked. "What is this place we’re going to anyways? I’ve never seen this part of LA" changing the subject so she wouldn’t be embarrassed.
"It’s a surprise so stop asking me questions, and umm…..it is a nice part of LA isn’t it?….Peaceful" she said a little slower than was normal. She was lying.
"You are a LIAR" I let out with a chuckle."You have no freaking clue where we are do you?"
"No I’m sooo sorry Ashley. I was trying to take you to this cute little dinner my dad used to take me to, and I guess that sure as hell backfired. I just didn’t wanna look like a moron and tell you I was lost." she let out quickly. So we were lost, I didn’t think in any way that she was a ‘moron’. I wasn’t even close to upset. I thought it was actually pretty funny and sweet.
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oh man… great update. i actually got kind of emotional toward the end. i just discovered this fic today. i really like it. keep it coming.
The update was great, but I really don’t like Ally with Ashley.
that was a great update. keep em’ coming!
also…that was totally karma b/c honestly? what are the odds of aiden and spencer being at the same restaurant? but i do like Ally. She seems really cool, and understanding. Hopefully she stays that way. Not asking Ashley too many questions and upsetting her. I’m all for Spashley but at the moment Spencer is being dumb and is in denile so i’m all for Ashley and Ally (what ever the heck that hybrid name would be!…Alley (haha) or Ashlly (lol) wow…that doesn’t work at all…
sorry NDFightingIrishFan…no offense! and sry for the 2 million comments!
Glad some of you like Ally. I promise she will remain a good character. And I’m also glad some of you don’t like her, makes things interesting. CaliGirl9 were gonna have to work on the name merging for those too lol. And you can comment 2 million more times…I won’t mind hahaha
wonder why spencer is with aiden pms
Great update. I loved it hopefully Spashley get it together but I do like Ally she is cool. PMASAP!!!
Wow..you honeslty have to be like an author or somethig because this is amazing! I love it so much, I cannot wait for more its fantastic =)
So sorry, I didn’t comment earlier. I forgot. This was a great update. I also really like Ally but I’m dying for Spashley to get together. Spencer needs to get a clue and dump Aiden already. I mean it’s kind of obvious she has feeling for Ashley. Again great update. PMASAP!!!