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A Secret Well Kept – (Chapter: Crush)
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"Nah, don’t worry about it. I’m glad you called I needed the distraction."
"So I’m a distraction am I? I see how it is." she said. I could tell she was kidding because I heard her chuckle at the end of it. "How about I distract you over coffee, or lunch? You do owe me one or the other" she laughed again. I liked that sound.
"I owe you do I? Well in that case I never like to leave a debt unpaid. Lunch sounds good Ally. Want me to pick you up I can be there in twenty minutes." was my response. I actually wanted to go to lunch. I wanted to get out of the house, and I wanted to get out of the house with her. She was something new, something that didn’t come with baggage, and a history. Something I was allowed to like.
"Yeah that would be great. You really don’t waste time. I’ll be waiting outside Ash." she let out before she hung up the phone. I liked her shortening my name. I usually hate it when people I just met did that, but I honestly like this girl so I made an exception.
I left my house very casually. With a pair of light blue jeans, a t-shirt. We were just doing lunch right? And plus I didn’t want to look like I had tried too hard. I didn’t want to rush whatever this thing with me and her was. It should just happen naturally if it was going to happen at all. Ally didn’t live far from me, maybe ten minutes. I was there in no time, and strangely I was nervous. What the hell was wrong with me these days?
She really was waiting at the front of her house for me. I got out to open the door for her. She smiled at me as I did this for her. It’s the simple things that are important folks. Once she was inside, I went back around to my car and got in. She looked really cute today, and I felt the need to tell her.
"You look really cute today, by the way." I turned and said to her as I started the car back up. She really did she was wearing a skirt that wasn’t too short but showed off just the right amount of leg. She matched that with a cute polo that I found adorable. Her hair was put into a messy ponytail, but still looked great. She smiled really big at that and it reminded me why I liked it so much the other day.
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oh man… great update. i actually got kind of emotional toward the end. i just discovered this fic today. i really like it. keep it coming.
The update was great, but I really don’t like Ally with Ashley.
that was a great update. keep em’ coming!
also…that was totally karma b/c honestly? what are the odds of aiden and spencer being at the same restaurant? but i do like Ally. She seems really cool, and understanding. Hopefully she stays that way. Not asking Ashley too many questions and upsetting her. I’m all for Spashley but at the moment Spencer is being dumb and is in denile so i’m all for Ashley and Ally (what ever the heck that hybrid name would be!…Alley (haha) or Ashlly (lol) wow…that doesn’t work at all…
sorry NDFightingIrishFan…no offense! and sry for the 2 million comments!
Glad some of you like Ally. I promise she will remain a good character. And I’m also glad some of you don’t like her, makes things interesting. CaliGirl9 were gonna have to work on the name merging for those too lol. And you can comment 2 million more times…I won’t mind hahaha
wonder why spencer is with aiden pms
Great update. I loved it hopefully Spashley get it together but I do like Ally she is cool. PMASAP!!!
Wow..you honeslty have to be like an author or somethig because this is amazing! I love it so much, I cannot wait for more its fantastic =)
So sorry, I didn’t comment earlier. I forgot. This was a great update. I also really like Ally but I’m dying for Spashley to get together. Spencer needs to get a clue and dump Aiden already. I mean it’s kind of obvious she has feeling for Ashley. Again great update. PMASAP!!!