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You Want Her Bad Don’t You…sequel to NTWD
My Helena has a hard head.
Youre telling me. What are you and Carmen doing tonight?
She wouldnt tell me again, she just said to wear something comfortable.
That girl loves surprises doesnt she?
Apparently. Come on lets go and apologize to Tina, Bette commented pulling Shane to her feet
Shane groaned, Do I have to?
If you want to continue to breathe then yes.
Well I obviously want to breathe, Shane remarked with a grin, So let me get my shoes on.
After putting her sneakers on Shane followed Bette back over to the house. Upon entering they saw Tina sitting in the living room rocking Arianna. She looked up and saw the two entering the house. When she saw Shane her eyes darkened for a moment. Shane looked over at Bette who smiled at her and went and sat on the coffee table in front of Tina.
T, I want to apologize for the things that I said to you last night.
You do? This isnt just because Bette threatened you bodily harm is it?
Shane smiled, Well that and I really do feel bad about some of the things I said to you.
Some?
Yes some. Can you accept my apology?
Tina was silent a moment and then nodded her head, You are going to have to apologize to Helena though too.
Shane was shaking her head, Sorry I cant do that. I still think shes toxic. You can still be with her and all but I wont apologize to her.
Tina sighed, I suppose thats the best its going to be. Hows that hand?
Hurts but Ill be fine. Can I hold Ari?
Sure, but we need to go soon.
Shane took Arianna into her arms and smiled down at the little girl who was looking up at her with wide brown eyes.
Hey there cutie. Its Auntie Shane, the cool one, do you remember me?
Arianna gurgled happily.
Ah you do remember me, Shane smiled
Tina got up and went out into the backyard to where Bette was just standing staring at the water.
Thank you for that Bette.
Not a problem. Shane really did feel bad about the things she said. I still have to talk with Alice and Dana but Im sure they are sorry as well.
I need to be going. Got to get to work soon and you do too I believe.
Bette glanced at her watch and saw it was seven thirty, I do indeed. Im glad you came to talk to me. I wouldnt want your friendship with the girls ruined over me.
I wouldnt want that either.
They smiled at each other and Tina went into the house to collect her daughter and her things. Bette followed and gave her little girl a kiss on the forehead and showed the two of them out returning to the living room.
That little girl is going to be a heartbreaker one day, said Shane
Yes, and Ill be proud of her whatever she does.
Can I ask you a question Bette?
You can ask me anything, Bette answered sitting next to Shane on the sofa
If Tina forgave you today, walked back into this house and told you that she wanted a second chance would you take it?
Bette thought about this a moment, Honestly?
Preferably.
No.
Shane was slightly caught off guard by this answer and Bette must have seen the look.
I may have several months ago or even a week ago but something within me has changed. I dont know if its because of Carmen or just me moving on but thats how I feel.
Shane was nodding her head, Thats cool B. So when are you going to do the inflagrante delicto with Carmen?
Bette laughed at this, That I couldnt tell you Shane. We want to take it slow.
Makes sense but you want her bad dont you, Shane asked nudging Bettes shoulder
I SO want do!
Shane laughed at this.
I need to get ready for work so I can get that over with in time for this date tonight.
Standing Shane looked down at Bette with a peculiar look on her face.
What?
Youre happy.
Bette smiled, I really am.
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(93 votes, average: 3.31 out of 5)
This is just great im really getting to see the thing between Bette and Carmen and thats down to your writting which is great so keep it coming i cant wait… cause its going to be HOT right? lol
Great story !I cannot say to much more. I have company and they cannot understand me being on this site. I love you and your writing ! Please continue to write me and tell me what you really think of my stories. I appreciate your feedback.
Awwwwwwwww….Bette’s happy. That’s beautiful. I loved this chapter. Great writing!! You gave such dimension to the characters and I like the idea of Bette finally moving on.
Sex, please—hot smut, please………….don’t teases us anymore………..give it up!? :D
You’ve given each of the characters depth. This seems very plausible, Bette moving on, Tina has, and why not with Carmen–she’s beautiful and kind and Shane is ok with it. Your writing is very engaging and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing this story.
No words I can say to describe your writing, you got me hooked on what will happen next. It just brought a smile on my face that Bette is finally happy and moving on. Everyone is cool about it and Tina has to accept that Bette, has the right to move on too…Please continue.
AAAHHH! Bette’s happy, makes me smile. Can’t wait for the NC17…i’m hoping its Bette and Carmen….very hot indeed. thanks for your great story.
NO? THAT CAN’T BE..I JUST DON’T THINK THAT BETTE & CARMEN HAVE A STONG CHEMISTRY TOGETHER,BUT I STILL LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE POST SOON
Ah, not much better in [TLW] life than Bette smiling. A lovely chapter, great story ideas, dialogue that flows, and humor always. Keep up the great work! You know for sure that I’ll be reading it, savoring every chapter of every story you share. Thanks!
I love this story line. Bette deserves happiness.
Your story is very refreshing. I’m a B/T fan, but this brings a new perspective to it. They should both be happy. Can’t wait for the NC-17!!!
I found your story very refreshing & intriguing.
This story of your Reba is comming along just great. Can´t wait for more.