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You Want Her Bad Don’t You…sequel to NTWD
The door opened to reveal a very tired looking Shane. Bette pulled her into a hug.
Whats this for, Shane asked hugging her back
For defending me, Bette remarked
Oh how did you, Shane started to ask pulling back from Bette only to be slapped upside the head as well, Ouch! What was that for?
Bette sighed, You have lost your mind woman. Tina was at my house when I got home last night and we talked. She told me what happened.
Oh, Shane remarked kind of sheepishly ushering Bette into the house as she rubbed the back of her head, I feel bad about that I really do. Just everything got to me and I lashed out.
I understand that Shane, I really do and I appreciate you sticking up for me sovehemently but I can handle myself.
Shane nodded as she took a seat, I know you can B.
I want you to apologize to Tina along with Alice and Dana.
Shane heaved a sigh at this, Fine but Im not apologizing for hitting Helena.
Bette smiled at this, Fair enough.
How was your date last night?
Bette smiles wider at this.
That good huh?
Were doing something again tonight.
Yeah, thats amazing Bette. Im glad youre happy.
You really are okay with all of this?
Shane laughed, I swear on my golden scissors that Im okay with this.
Wow you love those scissors a lot, Bette muses
So you see how serious I am about all of this then?
Bette was nodding her head as her curls bounced from drying naturally, Tina should still be at my house. You could apologize now.
She didnt leave after this talk?
Bette rolled her eyes at this, It was three thirty in the morning. I wasnt going to let her drive home, plus Arianna was asleep. She slept in the bedroom and I slept on the couch, or the floor more like it.
The floor?
Bette shrugged, I woke up on the floor.
Shane shook her dark head at this, You are a strange one Bette.
Look whose talking oh wise one! Was it fun hitting Helena?
SO satisfying, Shane exclaimed, I bruised my hand and everything, she remarked holding up her right hand for Bette to see the bruises on her knuckles
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(93 votes, average: 3.31 out of 5)
This is just great im really getting to see the thing between Bette and Carmen and thats down to your writting which is great so keep it coming i cant wait… cause its going to be HOT right? lol
Great story !I cannot say to much more. I have company and they cannot understand me being on this site. I love you and your writing ! Please continue to write me and tell me what you really think of my stories. I appreciate your feedback.
Awwwwwwwww….Bette’s happy. That’s beautiful. I loved this chapter. Great writing!! You gave such dimension to the characters and I like the idea of Bette finally moving on.
Sex, please—hot smut, please………….don’t teases us anymore………..give it up!? :D
You’ve given each of the characters depth. This seems very plausible, Bette moving on, Tina has, and why not with Carmen–she’s beautiful and kind and Shane is ok with it. Your writing is very engaging and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing this story.
No words I can say to describe your writing, you got me hooked on what will happen next. It just brought a smile on my face that Bette is finally happy and moving on. Everyone is cool about it and Tina has to accept that Bette, has the right to move on too…Please continue.
AAAHHH! Bette’s happy, makes me smile. Can’t wait for the NC17…i’m hoping its Bette and Carmen….very hot indeed. thanks for your great story.
NO? THAT CAN’T BE..I JUST DON’T THINK THAT BETTE & CARMEN HAVE A STONG CHEMISTRY TOGETHER,BUT I STILL LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE POST SOON
Ah, not much better in [TLW] life than Bette smiling. A lovely chapter, great story ideas, dialogue that flows, and humor always. Keep up the great work! You know for sure that I’ll be reading it, savoring every chapter of every story you share. Thanks!
I love this story line. Bette deserves happiness.
Your story is very refreshing. I’m a B/T fan, but this brings a new perspective to it. They should both be happy. Can’t wait for the NC-17!!!
I found your story very refreshing & intriguing.
This story of your Reba is comming along just great. Can´t wait for more.