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    #TLW 10 – Coz I love you

    Story written on February 23, 2014 by ally4cleo.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=83753
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    My piano lessons had finally come in handy.  I was no Arrau by a long stretch but I was a dedicated pupil so I’d managed to satisfy Bette enough that she didn’t hesitate to demand more of me.  I was more than happy to oblige and give her as much of myself as she wanted.

    My piano lessons had finally come in handy.  I was no Arrau by a long stretch but I was a dedicated pupil so I’d managed to satisfy Bette enough that she didn’t hesitate to demand more of me.  I was more than happy to oblige and give her as much of myself as she wanted. With Bette sharing myself was easier than it had ever been in any of my other relationships. Coz I loved her I didn’t hold anything back.

     

    While I was busy thinking about the many things she did that I liked, my phone had pinged. I eased my way over to the other end of the bed and made a grab for it. My heart lurched when I saw that it was a message from Bette. Even miles apart she found a way to reach my heart.

     

    Messages                                         Bette                                                  Contact

    Are you up yet?

     

    Messages                                         Bette                                                  Contact

    Let me know when you are.

     

    The second message popped up as I was writing my own.

     

    Messages                                         Tina                                                    Contact

    I’m up, still in bed though. I was thinking about you.

     

    Messages                                         Bette                                                  Contact

    Thinking about me or THINKING about me.

     

    I smiled at the screen and paused for a beat while I deliberated just how honest I should be. I decided complete honesty was the way to go. The nine months I’d been with Bette was enough to convince me that she was someone to spend a long time with, maybe forever. It wouldn’t do to be dishonest with your forever person.

     

    Messages                                         Tina                                                    Contact

    I was THINKING about you. You were incredible in my thoughts.

     

    Messages                                         Bette                                                  Contact

    I’m incredible outside them too. Come over.

     

    I remember rolling my eyes at her cockiness but also remember being tempted to rush over to her place so I could experience her.

     

    Messages                                         Tina                                                    Contact

    Can’t. Laundry day.

     

    Messages                                         Bette                                                  Contact

    I’m being looked over for laundry? Come over. You don’t need clothes when you’re with me anyway.

     

    Messages                                         Tina                                                    Contact

    Maybe not with you but come Monday clothing will go back to being one of the three basic human needs B.

     

    Messages                                         Bette                                                  Contact

    I thought it was food, water and shelter.

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    9. Ally, this is truly fun to read. I love the bit about Tina realizing the benefits of her piano training as it benefits her lovemaking skills. That was an amusing, quirky thought. Their texting narrative was clever, too. I could really feel Bette’s mounting insistence in the zings she texted to wear down Tina’s resistance.

      I’m enjoying a writing exercise, too, of creating those moments off screen in this crazy place I decided to drop into that takes place somewhere in the season 5 narrative after their She Bar kiss. I tried my hand at writing one of Bette’s mental melt down inner narrative screeds. I hadn’t thought about going as far back into their history as you did. It’s a rich place to write from. Good choice, and nice going.

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