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    TIME WILL TELL IF WE HAVE MADE A GOOD DECISION

    Story written on April 25, 2006 by zumi.
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    Number of Comments: 4
    Words: 2538
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=60595
    Author Notes:

    It´s time to find the necessary answers to move on.

    Kit:”Yeah ….i can understand why Shane was confused but why didn´t she try to explain all this to Carmen…..she just ran away to Boston….”

    Jenny:”yeah…. its weird…´”

    Alice:”Will you let me finish ?Ok here we go…..Before Gabriel left the hotel, he left an envelope in Shane´s room.In it was some money and a note with her mom´s home adress ….It was a kind of wedding present.”
    Kit and Jenny look at each other….they are shocked..They now can understand Shane .She is so lost .Before recovering the love of carmen,she needs to find herself., she needs answers .And Carmen. ..she must be suffering the most, she never had any doubts about shane´s love …

    Jenny:”Shane´s mom….so she went to Boston to see her mother..”.

    Kit(to Alice):”What do you know about Carmen ?”

    alice:”I try to call carmen to ask how she was, but she never answered .Today before coming here i went to her mother´s house….Mercedes was very nice_that surprised me. She told me Carmen flew to New York.It seems that her best friend offered her a wonderful job …

    New York airport

    Carmen arrived 20 minutes ago carryng a small purse .Cristian had promised to wait for her ….but after 20 minuteshad passed and no Cristian, she begins to get impatient. Finally Cristian appears.He´s happy to see her and gives her a big huge and says: “You don´t know how much i miss you girl.You look beautiful look, all woman…Shall we go?”.He takes her hand and begins to walk, pointing to a car saying..: “this way” .

    Carmen looks at the car and says smiling:”that´s your car? Wow…..”

    Cristian opens the car door and helps Carmen to get in.He gets in the car ..looks at his friend and asks :” coffee and donuts?”.

    Carmen nods her head affirmative;they drive to a café downtown, and take a seat at a table near of a window

    Cristian:”Tell me something. ..What happened?Why did you change your mind?”

    Carmen:”Well ..i thought a lot about it,and i believe this job is great opportunity,and not take it would be a terrible mistake..”

    Cristian knows her very well and he knows she´s hidden something. ..:” Girl your eyes are telling me that something bad happened ,something _or someone _hurt you. I can see it….you still suffering”.

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    2. me too, i want more. i think you had some problems with starting the story but nearing the end, i could really feel the emotions coming from the story. you could do with a little improvement on your grammar but otherwise i’d say you’ve done a great job. Ãœ

    3. Shane might get some peace in her life. once she realizes that she was loved and her Mother did the best thing she could do for her at the time. Keep on writing this is going to be good. thanks

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