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    TIME WILL TELL IF WE HAVE MADE A GOOD DECISION

    Story written on April 25, 2006 by zumi.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=60595
    Author Notes:

    It´s time to find the necessary answers to move on.


    THE PLANET(Two days after shane left Carmen at the altar)

    Jenny arrives.Alice and Kit are seated at a table drinking some coffe.Jenny approaches them.

    Jenny:”I sorry my car had some problems….Alice will you tell me were the hell is Shane?”

    Kit:”Yes Alice ….star to talk”.

    Alice speaks up : “Shane must be in boston right now….that´s was she told me”.

    Jenny is surprised:” You said Boston?…Kit is a little confused :”That girl is totally crazy….i thought she would come back here and apologize to Carmen.”

    Alice:”Well …..Carmen isn´t here she´s in New York.(Drink coffe and looks the confused faces) ….Yeah…and there is something more Shane and Carmen met afterwards.”

    .Kit and Jenny can´t belive it..

    Alice:”It was a coincidence to say the least….This is what she told me:Carmen was leaving the hotel as Shane was returning to collect his suitcases.When i arrived Shane was standing on the sidewalk.She was crying with her eyes fixed on a leaving cab .SHe wasn’t able to talk.I took her back to the hotel.We sat down at a table and ordered some drinks. Then Shane started to tell me: ´I wanted to say something to her, ….but i looked into her eyes and there were nothing to say….´.
    I asked her: ´Didn´t she tell you anything ?if you love her why did you leave her? were you scared.?
    Shane said,`She didn’t need to say a word You could see the disillusion in her eyes.…i just stood there and watched her ran away from me ….i couldn’t move or speak

    After hearing all this Kit and Jenny don´t know what to say,except the unanswered question:

    Kit:” why Shane left Carmen?”

    Alice:“Well about that …..she told me:

    Shane:”Why did i leave her? Everything was fine this morning,i was so happy whit my life like never before…..I went to the hotel bar and i saw my father… he was there flirting whit a girl of my age ..in that instant everything changed …….i asked him:´why are you doing this ?´he just said,´It´s just who i am …surely you understand how it is´. It was like seeing myself in a mirror and began to think :´Maybe he´s right perhaps I will never be able to take a commitment …i don´t want to hurt Carmen,i wish her happiness.Maybe i´m not the person she needs….Why should i promise her things that i might never fulfil?…And have I made a bad desicion for myself and her.?_.I believe it was the best …..but i’m not sure about that now.

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    2. me too, i want more. i think you had some problems with starting the story but nearing the end, i could really feel the emotions coming from the story. you could do with a little improvement on your grammar but otherwise i’d say you’ve done a great job. Ãœ

    3. Shane might get some peace in her life. once she realizes that she was loved and her Mother did the best thing she could do for her at the time. Keep on writing this is going to be good. thanks

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