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Thief of my heart – chapter 18
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Chapter 18
Bette’s apartment
Bette went to the door and opened it. What she saw made her speechless. The most beautiful woman she has ever seen. Or was it an angel?
Tina looked at Bette in awe. Such a beautiful woman asked her out on a date. But there was this weird look on Bette’s face.
‘Hi…I hope I am not too late?’
‘Uh oh no…you are perfect…I mean right on time!’ Bette said smiling. ‘Please come in’
‘Thank you’
Tina walked in and turned around just in time to catch Bette staring at her.
‘Seeing something that you like?’
‘Without a doubt! Tina you look beautiful.’
‘You are not so bad either. Did you invite more people?’
‘No, why?’
‘Because you are still holding the door open. Looks like you are waiting for something!?’
‘Huh…yeah…I guess my brain is out for a walk and I am waiting for it to come back with some eloquence!’
They smiled at each other and Bette closed the door. She led Tina to the living room.
‘Wow Bette…this looks amazing. Very romantic’
‘Do you like it? I wasn’t sure if…’
‘I like it a lot. Thank you!’
Again there was silence and they just kept staring at each other. After some moments Tina found her voice again.
‘So what have you planned for this evening?’
‘I thought we could have dinner together and afterwards talk a bit. Would you like that?’
‘Sounds wonderful. Where do we go for dinner?’
‘We stay here. I cooked!’
‘You can cook?’
‘You seem suprised.’
‘I am actually. I can’t really see you in a kitchen’
‘You know I am not only in the kitchen, cooking a meal I also wear a beautiful apron for that occasion.’
‘Really? That sounds kind of interesting. Maybe you would like to show me!?’
‘Whenever you want.’ Bette said with a wink. ‘If you like you can take a seat over there. I will be out with the food in no time.’
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Way to go on the back Jay that’s huge, good work. Very important to stick to it. You must have been going someplace with that phone call, who was it on the phone? I’m sure it was an innocent call but Tina is not so sure. Not so sure I like the idea of Tina being invited on the weekend though because it sounds like Bette needs to be catching up with whoever it was but I do believe Bette has some splainin to do. Welcome back, glad your on the mend. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Bummer, they were having such a good evening and now the phone call. Is this phone call from a child or a relative? I sure hope so. Glad that your injury is getting better. Keep up the good work.
I bet she was talking to Kit, maybe she will ask Tina to come along too.I would like to see Bette and Tina deal with Tina’s insecurities and making her a better person & Bette help her fine a better job. Maybe Bette get hurt and Tina will realize how important Bette is to her and how much she has help her. PPS. can’t wait for the explanation to the phone call. YOU ROCK
Bette better catch her quick and explain that phone call..
Jay, you just RIPPED my heart out. Why????? If I heard that conversation, I’d leave too. OK
Firstly, hope physiotherapy would save you the surgery… I mean, Ouch, I can’t imagine. Secondly, how could you? Heh~ You know what I think? Time for an explanation followed by a passionate kiss… hmm~
Hey, I was thinking, which is usually not a good thing, but maybe Bette has a daughter that she has kept secret from the out side world to keep her safe???????
I think she was either talking to Kit or a daughter no one knows about because of her status. She needs to catch Tina before she walks out the door! PPS
Bette better get to Tina and explain quickly….maybe with a great big kiss first. pps
Huh! Who dat? Loved the update. I think you are doing a fabulous job on the direction of this story, and I can’t wait for more. I’m glad you are feeling better.
oh man… and now i have to wait so long for the next one… if i beg would you post soon???
bette better have a kid! lol anddd she better get tina fast!
That better be an old friend or family member Bette was just on the phone with! And to think she just told Tina she can trust her. Better start running and catch her before its too late! PPS:)
good!! good!! i like it! :) :) :) thanks for posting!
Come on Bette grab Tina and explain. Great update. Thank you and post soon! :)
Hi there, dear sweet Jay! It is SO good to see you here, again! Glad to hear you are taking the necessary steps to avoid surgery. We hope that the doc gives you positive news and that you may continue to have the proper rehab of your back. As for the story, we believe there are still loopholes that need to be filled. Like, why did Tina become a thief, why did she come to live in LA, who she was involved with? etc. There are many alternatives there. As for Bette, we still have a lot to know about her. How was her life before meeting Tina, did she raise a daughter on one of her previous relationships or did she give birth to one, how the other members of her extended family fit in her life? etc. See? There are lots of possibilities. Just pick one and go from there. You are extremely talented, Jay. We know you can keep with this charming and different story. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lu & Marsh (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
Could it be Dana on the phone? I think Bette wouldn’t call Kit or Alice sweety. BTW Tina has to relax ,why can she think Bette would make a phone call like this in front of her if it were not innocent?
Okay, this is what I think…I think that Bette was on the phone with a neice or nephew (because she was adopted). But Bette better run fast and hope she can catch Tina and explain herself. Jay you are a blessing, you mena the world to ME. Take care my friend.